The Toilet in My House Leads to Another World

When I saw Chapter 133, to be honest, I was disappointed. Such a bloody plot could have been avoided, because as mentioned in the previous article, other creatures will be killed when entering the passage. It can be directly written as exclusive to the protagonist, using one or several chapters to explore, instead of everything. If you don't do it, it's not normal. Let alone a person who is worse than ordinary people. If he gets an adventure, I don't believe that he has no selfish motives and wants to take it for himself. Even those who are at the top of the world cannot avoid such an adventure. They will try every means to take it for themselves. It's really not that good to write such a bloody plot like this. I want to say something more later, but my head is in such a mess right now that I can't come up with a lot of questions... Writing a book is not easy! I wish the author this book will get better results. ……

How should I put it? When I saw Song Yong going abroad to treat people without asking anything, I felt like he was a little person. Really, this protagonist is so rubbish. I really don't know what to say. His cultural level is not high. I can only say that the protagonist is really rubbish.

The author is not good at math. One yuan per skewer, ten thousand yuan is 10,000 skewers. If you bring more than 100 kilograms of mutton, can you skewer 10,000 skewers?

The first three and the character are not worthy of sympathy. I feel that I was exploited by an agency for 20 yuan, so I don't want to work. I am almost starving to death, and I still don't work. I spent the last yuan to buy cigarettes. No matter how miserable it is, I don't deserve sympathy. It's all my fault.

The writing is good. I used to be very high-spirited. After the death of my parents, I am now in a state of decadence. I earn a salary of 3,000 yuan a month. I don't seek advancement and I don't know what to do in the future. Oh, I am 27 this year. I don't dare to talk to anyone I introduce to. I have no money to get married and I have a younger brother who is in school. I feel tired.

Alas, my heart was really touched after reading the beginning. It was the same life, a completely real experience. One day I suddenly woke up. I didn't want my life to end like this, and I didn't want to let my family down. I tried my best to endure it. I worked every day and every night for two years, but only paid back a fraction of the debt. There really is no cheating in life, not to mention that I have been as unlucky as ever until now. Looking back on these more than ten years, seventeen When I first came out of the age, I was high-spirited in society, and I started to be successful all the way. I was proud of my success, but now I am helpless and helpless with debts. Sometimes late at night, I really want to leave this world. In the first half of my life, I have always maintained a kind heart. I have never done anything against my conscience. I feel pity when I see pity, and I get angry when I see hatred. I have also sponsored and maintained monthly charity donations, but now I have become the worst failure, betrayed by everyone! The human world is really too tiring. I hope this book will have good results. I don't have much money, so I have no choice but to give rewards. I can only support it silently in my heart. Come on, author 🙂

The biggest flaw of this book is that Diaomao, who went away to a foreign country, lost his capital and incurred debts. After he suddenly became rich, he didn't pay off the debt immediately. He clearly only owed more than 200,000 yuan. How could he have 300,000 yuan after adding interest? According to the author's description, when the ginseng money arrived, the store's balance had accumulated more than 1.2 Million, but he actually only remitted 18,000 to his father. If such a protagonist is not said to be upright or not, it would be difficult for people to think that he can be single-mindedly devoted to Wang Xinran, who is cheating on him, and he also wants to buy a house and write the name of the female ticket, and make a lot of money to be worthy of someone else. What right does he have to look down on Qian Wei?

After looking at the previous free chapters, I. . . . . . . . . . I don't know how to explain it, but I watched this on the subway this afternoon. I was hungry at the time. I felt the same way for the protagonist who was hungry. When I saw the protagonist being hungry and working on a construction site, I thought of a TV series shot by a certain director in 2000 about migrant workers who came to the city to work as construction workers. It felt real.

I encountered the epidemic after resigning. When I was most disappointed, I read this book, which rekindled my hope. Quite surprising! Thank you author for the positive energy you give me! Only after you get out of it can you find that you can do it too.

There is an entire alien world, and after three or four hundred chapters, they are still going back and forth to bring back meat and sell it! Kebab! I am so convinced that I still sell skewers with more than 50 million in my hands! Why not study witchcraft and become a mysterious character in your spare time? The author is simply too petty and just thinks about how to sell kebabs. It's such a good subject, but I can't continue writing now.

The most important thing is that there are no ups and downs in the last part, and the heroine is decided too early, and the emotional drama is not outstanding, so I gradually lock in the places I can write, and the alien world fails to describe strange scenes to the readers, let alone expand the world view of the alien world. . Anyway, my feeling is that the book can actually have good space operations, but it does not have a good outline and overall planning 🤐

Stop torturing the Lord, Uncle 😥 I feel uncomfortable watching it, it would be nice to write more about pretending to be from another world

Let me say a few words. Many people say that the protagonist is very expensive, but I think it is very realistic. Society is like this, sad, hateful, but the most helpless. This is the life of most people. But the woman at the construction site was too blunt, and the protagonist was sitting in an alien world. As long as he didn't die, even a pig could achieve success, but the protagonist treated the alien world like a fool. There is no modern thinking at all. Moreover, there is still a society with surreal power, and it is still a situation of having nothing. It's just that you don't want to get rich, don't you want to be extraordinary? You are still talking about a girlfriend and want to work at a construction site. Even if you are a president, I am afraid that you will resign for the invisible extraordinary. When you see the protagonist entering another world for the second time, your thoughts are really poisonous. This is obviously the thinking of a child. I also read the last book when the protagonist just wrote it. That one was more poisonous and I gave up after reading a few chapters. This one only started at the beginning and I can still read it.

It's hard to write about the city! Easy to double rule! It would be great to write a parallel world or something

After reading a few pictures, I realized why this book was so popular. The protagonist is too useless and has no bright spots. The first few chapters are not interesting at all, and many book friends will ignore them!

Wow, has Zhangzhang made any progress? Break legs

Brother, don't go there, that's a black factory, let's go online. . . . . Hahaha

Dear author, I have read your last few books. Although I didn't read them when I was fattening up later, I somehow got 404. However, your subject matter and writing style are very good, and your writing skills are also very sophisticated! However, there are still some shortcomings in the plot setting, many small flaws in the setting have not been filled in time, and the feedback to book friends is not timely enough! You must stick to your own main line, but when it comes to details, you should listen to readers' useful suggestions! What's more, you need to know that writing novels is not only for the author to write about the fantasy world in the author's mind, but also for the readers to accompany the author's characters in the process of joy, anger, sorrow, and joy. Of course, most readers read novels just for one word—enjoyment! And it should be clear-minded and logically satisfying, at least it should be logically reasonable and consistent with the author's basic settings and basic worldview rules. Of course, the plot should also be deeply explored and not too vicious. After all, readers are already very tired from living in the real world. They don't want to be even more tired in this fantasy world. They just want to have a good time and put themselves into the role of the protagonist! Isn't this the case with the author? If you can handle it well, becoming a great god is just a piece of cake! I wish the author good health, good financial resources, and better writing books! Come on!

Frankly speaking, the uncle joined in by the way after watching everyone join. But if his grades are really at the bottom, the uncle's old face won't show off to anyone! So please give me your support every day, no matter how good your results are, no need to count down.

To be honest, that tribe, if you put them in battle armor and pick up a steel knife, as long as they are fed, they can kill you all. As a result, this good-for-nothing protagonist almost had to use thermal weapons, and he still fought so hard.

I am over 40 this year, and my monthly salary is as high as 3,800. I worry about spending this money every day. Comrades, my life is really hard! Why can't I spend all the money?

I think the subject matter is good, but the main character claims to have lost his parents' savings and owes more than 200,000 yuan. Can't get enough of it after working so hard? Put all the pressure on your parents? (Don't talk about rogue agencies, I really can't find a job if I really want to find you?) It's just selfishness and avoidance.

I didn't understand the introduction. What kind of book is this?

This guy with long legs likes to write about heartless dicks.

There is no red envelope, but I will give you recommendations and monthly passes.

After reading hundreds of chapters, I saw a man who looked like a beggar. People who dig through trash cans for food and use laundry detergent to bathe in the toilet can make the boss's sister-in-law fall in love at first sight. Can you believe that your sister-in-law, dressed in high-end goods, will accompany you every few days to set up a stall and sell barbecue until early in the morning? Now that you have another world, you just throw away the ingredients and open a food stall? And are you sure this isn't a gourmet novel about selling barbecue? The plot is too simple. You finally find a Western dynasty in another world.

It's very interesting. I read over 500 chapters in two days.

I was persuaded to quit after the first few dozen chapters, but after 70 chapters I had no motivation to read (you could say I couldn't resist anymore).

It looks so strange... This book has nothing to do with me, I hope the author will start publishing more and more books I am in debt and dare not return to my hometown, and then leave my parents behind and be looked down upon? Parents have always been the strong backing of their children. No matter how they live outside, they always want to return to the haven at home. For me, who lives above the subsistence line, I can't imagine such a life. I owe money and live like a maggot instead of working hard. Do I expect my parents to pay back the debt? I think the author wanted to write about the real life of the lower class, so that readers can see a different world. However, this world is too far away from me, so I lost the sense of substitution. Returning to the world of real life made me feel particularly awkward. Most readers want a more enjoyable reading experience at the beginning, and such a protagonist is a bit too unpleasant. The above, cherish it.

Do you know what it means to sell 50,000 yuan a night?