The Toilet in My House Leads to Another World

The writing is good. I used to be very high-spirited. After the death of my parents, I am now in a state of decadence. I earn a salary of 3,000 yuan a month. I don't seek advancement and I don't know what to do in the future. Oh, I am 27 this year. I don't dare to talk to anyone I introduce to. I have no money to get married and I have a younger brother who is in school. I feel tired.

The first three and the character are not worthy of sympathy. I feel that I was exploited by an agency for 20 yuan, so I don't want to work. I am almost starving to death, and I still don't work. I spent the last yuan to buy cigarettes. No matter how miserable it is, I don't deserve sympathy. It's all my fault.

Alas, my heart was really touched after reading the beginning. It was the same life, a completely real experience. One day I suddenly woke up. I didn't want my life to end like this, and I didn't want to let my family down. I tried my best to endure it. I worked every day and every night for two years, but only paid back a fraction of the debt. There really is no cheating in life, not to mention that I have been as unlucky as ever until now. Looking back on these more than ten years, seventeen When I first came out of the age, I was high-spirited in society, and I started to be successful all the way. I was proud of my success, but now I am helpless and helpless with debts. Sometimes late at night, I really want to leave this world. In the first half of my life, I have always maintained a kind heart. I have never done anything against my conscience. I feel pity when I see pity, and I get angry when I see hatred. I have also sponsored and maintained monthly charity donations, but now I have become the worst failure, betrayed by everyone! The human world is really too tiring. I hope this book will have good results. I don't have much money, so I have no choice but to give rewards. I can only support it silently in my heart. Come on, author 🙂

When I saw Chapter 133, to be honest, I was disappointed. Such a bloody plot could have been avoided, because as mentioned in the previous article, other creatures will be killed when entering the passage. It can be directly written as exclusive to the protagonist, using one or several chapters to explore, instead of everything. If you don't do it, it's not normal. Let alone a person who is worse than ordinary people. If he gets an adventure, I don't believe that he has no selfish motives and wants to take it for himself. Even those who are at the top of the world cannot avoid such an adventure. They will try every means to take it for themselves. It's really not that good to write such a bloody plot like this. I want to say something more later, but my head is in such a mess right now that I can't come up with a lot of questions... Writing a book is not easy! I wish the author this book will get better results.

The biggest flaw of this book is that Diaomao, who went away to a foreign country, lost his capital and incurred debts. After he suddenly became rich, he didn't pay off the debt immediately. He clearly only owed more than 200,000 yuan. How could he have 300,000 yuan after adding interest? According to the author's description, when the ginseng money arrived, the store's balance had accumulated more than 1.2 Million, but he actually only remitted 18,000 to his father. If such a protagonist is not said to be upright or not, it would be difficult for people to think that he can be single-mindedly devoted to Wang Xinran, who is cheating on him, and he also wants to buy a house and write the name of the female ticket, and make a lot of money to be worthy of someone else. What right does he have to look down on Qian Wei?

After looking at the previous free chapters, I. . . . . . . . . . I don't know how to explain it, but I watched this on the subway this afternoon. I was hungry at the time. I felt the same way for the protagonist who was hungry. When I saw the protagonist being hungry and working on a construction site, I thought of a TV series shot by a certain director in 2000 about migrant workers who came to the city to work as construction workers. It felt real.

I encountered the epidemic after resigning. When I was most disappointed, I read this book, which rekindled my hope. Quite surprising! Thank you author for the positive energy you give me! Only after you get out of it can you find that you can do it too.

There is an entire alien world, and after three or four hundred chapters, they are still going back and forth to bring back meat and sell it! Kebab! I am so convinced that I still sell skewers with more than 50 million in my hands! Why not study witchcraft and become a mysterious character in your spare time? The author is simply too petty and just thinks about how to sell kebabs. It's such a good subject, but I can't continue writing now.

The most important thing is that there are no ups and downs in the last part, and the heroine is decided too early, and the emotional drama is not outstanding, so I gradually lock in the places I can write, and the alien world fails to describe strange scenes to the readers, let alone expand the world view of the alien world. . Anyway, my feeling is that the book can actually have good space operations, but it does not have a good outline and overall planning 🤐

Stop torturing the Lord, Uncle 😥 I feel uncomfortable watching it, it would be nice to write more about pretending to be from another world