Almighty Protagonist Mentor

The beginning is good, but what follows has nothing to do with the previous one? What did the saint do after she returned? What happened to the plum blossoms? You wrote so passionately at the beginning but the writing at the end was too dull. What happened to the time traveler you sent away? Has he come back? I haven't written any of these, and it's very awkward to read. I've only read a few dozen chapters, and I can't stand it anymore. I hope the author can write better.

A great start, unconventional, this book has the potential to become a hit

Brother, you are really a person who just loves novels and writing novels. Come on, I really hope you can succeed one day!

I hope everyone who loves novels will not be let down!

The beginning is poisonous. The saint and the guy named Xiao are disgusting to watch, and the co-author is directed at them. Does the author know what you are writing? You don't think the two bitches you wrote about are very attractive, do you?

I looked at a lot of them and found that they had nothing to do with the word mentor.

I originally left, but then I came back after seeing more than 4 million words. Don't complain, brother, you are so awesome.

Thirty photos, I don't even know what you want to do. Do you know what you want to do?

There is no main line, it's not exciting, and it's a bit boring.

It's a good idea to keep cheating time-travelers, but the main plot of this book is unclear. From the title of the book to hundreds of chapters, I don't know what to say 😭

It's really not easy for the author. No matter what you do, being able to persevere is enough to show your love. I just hope you can keep your true feelings. In reality, you should be a suitable person to be friends with. Have passion, have ideals, drive life.

What happened to the protagonist? Awesome or not? Is it only external force? The protagonist is a little annoyed if he doesn't kill Tian Xinghai's Xiang'er, and later becomes friends with her. Missing one?

I read a few chapters, but I don't understand them at all 😭

The protagonist of this book is a truly enlightened person.

After reading dozens of chapters, I feel that it is somewhat literary, but it is too stiff and has too many descriptive words, which makes it not enjoyable. I can read it but I feel a little tired.

To be honest, after reading a little bit, the writing is quite good. Why are the results so bad?

Come on

In this world, demons and gods are rising together. Although I have no intention of competing, I know the suffering of the people

Not bad, good looking, but unfortunately not popular

After reading about three hundred chapters, the author's writing style and ideas are quite good. The shortcomings are also quite obvious. I feel that the protagonist's behavior is weak in purpose, the reasons for new characters to join the protagonist group are unreasonable and a bit abrupt, and the protagonist's guidelines for action are unclear. The protagonists in several major events in this game are all passively involved due to coincidence.