The Manor on the Horizon

There's something wrong with how the protagonist speaks. In chapter 24, there were seven or eight instances of descriptions like "full of tears" and "red eyes". Also, when the protagonist is chatting with his elders, he's either joking around or being silly, which makes it impossible for me to immerse myself in the story!

All I want to say is: Don't be like the last book, don't be too demanding, don't update monthly, and I guarantee full subscription! 😒😒😒

The protagonist is a bit of a saint and very naive.

I'd rather the protagonist be a little selfish than keep talking about helping others get rich!

A brain-dead protagonist, and a bit of a saintly bitch—it's practically the standard for female-oriented fiction. It's a shame they don't write for female audiences.

Your profile claims you're leading people of all ages to wealth, which makes me want to stop reading. It's disgusting.

It feels a bit like a previous book, "The Ultimate Landlord".

Has it come back to life? Is it a resurrection or a final burst of energy before death?

If you don't want to write, you don't have to. One chapter every six months.

How did it turn into fantasy, with all this talk of internal energy and the Nine Heavens Mystic Maiden?