Planet Versus Planet

Are you writing suspense stories? Why do magicians appear? Now I still feel the meaning of science fiction in the first one, but it doesn't look like suspense or fantasy, and your positioning is not accurate. There are too many characters in the first three chapters, and they should mainly focus on the protagonist. If you write it so many people will see it, I won't be able to remember the plot! I can't even tell who the protagonist is, and it's easy to give up on the book. I don't feel anything about the characters you wrote. A great author must have a plot for each character's appearance. Only with this plot can the characters be remembered. Characters who appear for no reason will only bring chaos, chaos, and collapse. If you want to fantasize about your own novel, then just pretend that I didn't complain about it, but do you feel comfortable with it? I'm sure it's not good either! The core of coolness is to show off and slap in the face. Whether it is exposed or concealed, if you don't pretend well, you will become a **. Why are some people not good at it? Because there is no logic and retardedness in pretending. Some people also watch "Retarded", but that is based on the state of being happy enough. If you are allowed to time travel, you will be invincible as soon as you travel. You will feel happy at first, but what happens later? Later you will be bored, just like you cleared the game at the beginning. Writing novels and playing games are connected. You can't be your reader and let them put it down like playing games. Then you will win. Why is the game feasible? Because it's fun, there are goals, special statuses obtained after upgrading, and powerful enemies that grow. After all, you get rewards for each mission, and there are rankings for all players to show off to. Study the game thoroughly, not to mention becoming a god, at least not starving to death.