My World of Riding and Slashing

The writing is pretty good, but the number of words is too few. It's just that the author needs to work harder (ง •̀_•́)ง😁

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I think the author's writing is really good! The reality in the early stage is like this. The characters of high school students can later go to college or start a business, etc. It feels like magic and reality are intertwined. I saw a post earlier that asked people to write less about reality. Maybe it makes those who don't write about reality feel that the inner portrayal of the characters is a bit embarrassing? As a new writer, I think it's okay. You can pay more attention in the future. The real world is undoubtedly more complicated and difficult to describe than ordinary otherworlds. For example, the former head teacher and the teacher on duty, Yazi, are really like the original teachers in our school. The latter part is also good, but I always feel that it lacks a sense of realism. Although the writing style needs polishing, the flaws are not hidden. Good luck, author.

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How to say it! I was initially attracted to this novel by the name Mount and Blade, although I personally have basically never played Warband, Fire and Sword. Then, the added details of the game and the battle, as well as the warmth of boys and girls, deepened the impact of this novel on me, but until now, I feel that the content of the novel has changed from low-level martial arts to fantasy. Others start slowly, but you, the author, are such a god! World! The whole mess came up together, we came to see this! What I want to watch is war, battles, intrigues with lords, and the protagonist's experience in the Middle Ages. I feel like the author, your novel has become a foot wrap for old ladies. I seemed to be skipping through it, and I finished a chapter in almost half a minute. It can be said that this novel has been lost, and you may consider reading a new one.

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Everyone's preferences will be different, but the key is to persevere and look forward to more exciting and interesting chapters in the future.

I would like to ask, is the world where the protagonist lives in a place where there are no mounted-and-blade games? If so, please tell me why the protagonist doesn't look up information online. If not, forget it.

Oh ho, I wonder how many people can come.

It's finally unblocked and I can post comments. I want to post them! Author, could you write less about the protagonist's "kind and hypocritical" psychological activities? Every time after a battle, you have a protagonist who feels depressed and silent. How can he be so depressed? When there are few soldiers at the beginning, forget it, but it will still be like this later, and the cavalry slashing mechanism is refreshed. You can't even see the corpse, so you just suppress and silence a data, and it happens again and again. Isn't it too exaggerated? Then if you go online in the real world and see the data on the number of unnatural deaths every year around the world, wouldn't the protagonist be so depressed that he wants to commit suicide? (Personally, I don't really like this kind of fake benevolence and hypocritical protagonist. Yes, it feels like hypocrisy to me. The above personal opinion)

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The setting of God is indeed a bit unpleasant

I came here specifically to comment. When I write about games, I just write about games. I try to cover the practical aspects in one go. In all likelihood, this book will collapse before it even reaches the shelves. The reality is too much and he even tried his best to join the role of "god". Originally, this character was just clicked at the beginning, but what kind of conspiracy was there! ! !

I came in after seeing the name, and when I looked at the results, I came up with a fantasy. It's not unreasonable for me to have poor grades. I slipped away.

Do you have any recommendations for knight-errant novels?

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