Return to the Beautiful Youth

I really like this kind of daily life. I like it. I suggest you write more details about Japanese life, which will make you feel more immersed.

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When writing a novel, you need to learn to divide it into paragraphs, otherwise it will look very difficult.

Why does it feel like Conan?

Break it into paragraphs, sir. It's very tiring to read without dividing it into paragraphs.

Is it daily life like a hot-blooded high school?

I feel like these stories written by the author could be used as running group scripts if modified.

I just read the first few chapters. Overall, it's okay, but why are the dialogues so crowded together? Wouldn't it look better if they were divided into sections?

Write well, don't go into the palace, vote 3 times a day,

I glanced at the catalog and saw the case. Is the protagonist a detective?

Here it is! ! ! I! ! !

The plot link is not very good, and the sense of immersion is not strong. Most of the whole story is filled with emotionless dialogue, just like a running account. At the beginning, I didn't feel that I could continue to read it. After dozens of chapters, it became a bit unbearable. I suggest that you add some psychological descriptions of the characters' expressions and background scenes, etc., To slow down the pace of the story a little, and it will feel much better.

I haven't read it yet, but after looking at the cover, I came in and read the table of contents. They corresponded to the first few chapters of Bingguo. I had every reason to suspect that this was an adaptation of Bingguo's novel

It should be the work of a high school student who has never been to Japan.

Don't you think the previous plot is very similar to the anime Hyouka?

You are a combination of ice fruit and spring food.

It's so beautiful. It has been collected. Welcome to visit again!

... I see it, Hyouka... Harmono eh