My Fighter Plane Is a Magic Weapon

Garbage🖕🏻, commercial defective products that pollute the science fiction area.

There are high-tech fighter fusions and high-fantasy martial arts. As a result, a pair of sisters came out of nowhere, and the effect of persuading them to retreat was immediate. It's a pity that this idea is out of the question. . . . .

The concept is okay, but a bit verbose

I wrote a bunch of useless psychological descriptions. Is it appropriate for you to start with this? Also, the description of the twins is really not very likable, and there is also a forced logic that pretends to be a pig and eats the tiger. Finally, there is a Star Wars novel that is really not good.

This book has a good idea, but the biggest poisonous point is the twins S and B. The orphans can be kind or selfish, but how did the characters of S and B come about? They treat ignorance as cute from beginning to end! Farewell

It's baffling to see. What is the specific function of Goldfinger? There is no detailed explanation at all. I have said a lot before and later I learned that I have obtained a inheritance and an evolving fighter But what is your original Goldfinger's ability?

Brother, put it in your place, what do you think about two inexplicable women spending your money? It's so deadly! Do you know that you are a time traveler? Do you want to write about warmth? It's obviously a torture of pigs!

The relationship between childhood sweethearts is not well written. If the author is not good at writing emotional dramas, you don't have to write them. Nowadays, books without female protagonists are still very popular. The author can delete the previous emotional scenes now, or reduce them a bit, otherwise it will be very discouraging. This is my feeling after reading the first 10 chapters.

I think since you are devouring materials to upgrade, I think there is something wrong with your starting direction. Anyway, you are devouring and then molecularly reorganizing, so just buy scrapped parts. Why do you have to use new ones that can be used normally? You are so poor. Saving money to buy accessories by yourself feels like building a fighter jet. It's too low and doesn't have any gold-finger quality at all!

Just write down all the women in a few chapters and train them to become assistants like Jarvis, and it will be perfect...

The appearance of Goldfinger, and the fighter model as a carrier, are too rigid. As mentioned before, the protagonist traveled through time because the energy was too strong and the body could not bear it. However, after time travel, it can be carried by the body, and the last fighter model can carry it. Isn't this Goldfinger powerful? ? Can it be done with just one model? ? It's better to say that all the abilities of Goldfinger can only be realized by relying on items!

The ten or so cards at the beginning are very effective in persuading people to retreat, and the author's skill is good.

I just read Chapter 5 and was poisoned. Let's complain: Many authors force homesickness/family longing (all of them vomit blood) to travel through disaster-stricken areas, as if they can't live without anyone. If a family member dies, do they have to be buried with him? Sensationalism requires a plot. This vomiting of blood and vomiting is too hard-core, and both EQ and IQ are trampled underfoot.

This novel tells us a fact that a good subject may not necessarily lead to a good novel. The fusion of fighter planes and caves, the encounter between witchcraft and the interstellar. However, Que collided with two stumbling blocks, a creature called the licking dog, and the powerful water emperor who shook the world. It's great🙄

The sea is all water. The author's starting point for describing each character from details is also good, but it always gives me the feeling that there is too much nonsense. I might consider it and refine it.

Rubbish! I know clearly that those two women are not good people, but they still want to be together. I won't watch anymore.

Why do you need to bring your own fighter jet to school? ? ? Don't have a trainer aircraft? ? ? And now there are simulators. . . There must have been more advanced equipment at that time. . .

The two women failed the most.

Can you please stop being so verbose in the early stage? Don't write conspiracy theories so straightforwardly in the early stage. Even a soldier of yours can guess it. What should you do if other recruits have high tactical credits? It's best not to cause trouble. There are only a few chapters. When imagining, you can intersperse the trouble with writing to leave a sense of mystery. In other words, the protagonist group should be stupid and leave it until the end or when others get the news. Don't make the protagonist group an omniscient, omnipotent, "flawed" protagonist that readers can only feel after reading it. Don't write more romance novels, just like the three protagonists, leaving some space and a voice for the supporting characters, or narrating some backgrounds, and describing some geniuses. Doesn't he sound good when written like this?

It is extremely poisonous, and my Shen Nong will perish without any medicine to save himself!

Such a good setting is in vain The plot is terrible

I have no idea what I'm writing 😥😥

What kind of random writing 😅

I can't stand the second one anymore

Who can read Chapter 10 and Chapter 11? ? Too poisonous

You taste it, taste it carefully, it's still good!

Give up the trap decisively, it's all a mess

Is this the end? The eunuch didn't cut it off so quickly, so he had to nurse it for a while longer! 🤭

There's so much nonsense. It's not enough to explain the system in one chapter, and then add a little more in the next chapter.

I can't understand what is written.