Literary Player

Well, bookshelf recommendation, because I found some good books in this recommendation. So, I read Chapter 60. The first ten chapters have an interesting beginning, a decent golden finger, a clear ladder of advancement, and a fairly reasonable plot. It made me look forward to this book. Although, the girl (possible heroine) under the math teacher's desk made me feel a little uncomfortable. However, for beginnings above a level, this little poisonous point can be ignored. As a copybook type book. I saw the "really good" part of the Chinese teacher's composition about the male protagonist, and entered Chapter 10 with a happy mood. Chapter 10, the first point of dissuasion appears. An award similar to the "Sprouting" New Concept Essay Contest. There is actually a certificate to enter the finals directly. It was a card made of metal. This reminds me of the sesame seed cakes in Shi Potian's hand in "Xia Ke Xing". What's even more outrageous is that when the male protagonist took the card, the teacher next to him grabbed the male protagonist's hand holding the card and said, "I can't have it." What is even more outrageous is that the principal standing next to him put this anonymous recommendation card into his pocket for the sake of the male protagonist. I thought that was it. Forcing routines, creating conflicts, and establishing characters is acceptable. However, in Chapter 11, the principal said: "This card should be given to good students. After all, thirty points can be added to the college entrance examination." Well... Tui. Well, as an old bookworm with more than ten years of reading experience at Qidian. A mere poisonous spot is nothing. Just pretend you don't see it and ignore it. The next development was beyond my expectation... First of all, when the male protagonist was in school, someone said it would be good if he came to school. Secondly, the male protagonist is in an experimental class at school. The teacher also emphasized that the experimental class is the class with the best grades in the school. The male protagonist is the student with the worst grades in this class. Actually, the author had some foreshadowing for the male protagonist's poor performance. After all, it was understandable that he just came through the soul. However, the author here gives a detailed explanation of the male protagonist's status in the class. Well, the last row is near the back door of the garbage dump. It was especially emphasized that this was a special seat for the worst students. A 16-year-old high school senior. From my humble knowledge, this should be a grade skip in the middle. Isn't skipping a grade just for top academics? Aren't the only scumbags who have to repeat a grade? Well, this is considered an excessive chapter. Ignore it for now and let us move on. Next, the gentle female monitor (suspected to be the female protagonist) takes the initiative to tutor the male protagonist. The turtle-haired male disciplinary committee member (another unusual setting, I see similar characters are usually female), came over and chirped in a lemony way. The turtle-haired man asked the gentle woman why she helped the scumbag male protagonist instead of helping other students get into key high schools. (Not a senior in high school?) The gentle girl replied that it was because she liked him, and the turtle-haired man said: What are the advantages of this scumbag? Make you like him? The gentle woman's answer was bright because he carefully classified the garbage for a cup of milk tea. (An interesting paragraph gave me a detailed understanding of garbage classification and its attraction to girls. Highlight the key points and take the test) The author's rich life experience can be seen here. And description of details. Next, the characters will appear. The male protagonist's best friend (a fat man with a black face, probably used to set off the male protagonist's appearance) excitedly told the male protagonist that the male protagonist's essay has become a hit in the school, and strongly suggested that the male protagonist participate in the essay competition mentioned earlier. Three fans who appreciated the hero's article. This part was a bit embarrassing to watch... The three fan girls asked the male protagonist to suck and jerk off... (I have heard these words in some pet cat videos) They also established a "global fan club" for the male protagonist, and held up banners to support the male protagonist when he went to give lectures at the literary club. Seeing this, I suddenly realized that the high school the male protagonist went to was not in China. Judging from the author's various settings, this high school should be in Japan. (Author, this background setting will make you round and beautiful!) With this background setting, the following plot will be reasonable. I also successfully advanced to chapter 60. To be honest: without the background settings I imagined later, Chapter 10 would have basically persuaded most people, including me, to quit. The writing is good, if you change the background to a Japanese high school. The story logic is online, the plot is well advanced, the details are well described, and the writing is smooth. It is recommended to change the background setting to a Japanese high school. Now it's really a good hand, and it's really bad. Writing a book is a very difficult thing. I hope you can commit to finishing the book and officially finish it. It sucks, the eunuch is really a loser. I will post this post to other circles as a warning to newbies.

(╥_╥) A sad father and daughter, a father who has no talent and succumbs to reality, a daughter who is too wise and suppresses himself... Teacher Xie longs to become a writer, but is very afraid of it. The result is a kind of disgust, even a little morbid. Teacher Xie's body and mind were overwhelmed by "reality", so he decided to use "reality" to convince his daughter. Teacher Xie also wants to convince the protagonist. He has become blind to the matter of "becoming a writer". He believes that all students should not have "writing talent". Students who write well are just students who are self-righteous... So he immediately rejected the protagonist and his daughter's works without even looking at the works. Daughter Xie Wan aspires to become a writer, but the "reality" given by her father oppresses her. She suppresses her emotions, tries hard to hide her extraordinaryness, and carefully protects her father's "dignity" that is so humble that it is almost ridiculous. She is smart and may have seen her father's "ordinaryness" and his pathology... Her excellent grades have already made her female classmates cry, so she subconsciously believes that if she continues to show better writing talent, she may drive her father crazy and make him behave irrationally.

It's been a long time since I cried over an online article, really. When I first opened this book, I thought it would be an ordinary writing operation, just like hay. But when I got to the last chapter, I realized that I was moved. This book is wonderful, both in terms of language and characters. I just found two screenshots. Isn't this my life? Not the person I saw? Of course, confiscating recommendation votes (×) and recommendation cards (✓) may not appear in reality, but this is not a poisonous point, it is a shining point. This does conflict with the protagonist's interests, but isn't the protagonist's struggle a struggle, and isn't the vice principal's struggle? This book uses the characters very fully. The character creation is fully developed here and the characters stand up. Very good. I hope the author will stick with it. I also hope that the author can leave a ** or contact information for communication. This is my trumpet account. The big one is Dusty Cherry Blossom because my author account was blocked when I was writing a book and I was permanently banned. Again, the author must persevere.

The story of Shi Chuchu and Zhou Zhu really touched me. Maybe I am a more emotional person. I will get excited when I see the peak of the story, and I will roll on the bed with excitement. Seeing depressing plots often seems to put a layer of shackles on myself, making me feel a little sad. I can't remember the last time I was moved, but what impressed me most was the first time I cried because of a work. It was when I graduated from elementary school. At that time, the TV station played the cartoon "Blue Cat Dragoons". I cried when I heard the theme song. Just listening to the song, it talked about the reunion of friends and the future. Suddenly I remembered the separation in the future, and tears burst out of my eyes. It's very childish, and it may even make people laugh when I say it, but I did cry while watching the cartoon... When I read some of the characters and stories in this novel this time, I can feel through the author's brushwork that some of his characters are really flesh and blood and have emotions. Xie Siwen, who suffered setbacks and blows in his youth and gave up his literary dream. Who would have thought that he, who vigorously criticized literature and prevented students from creating, was once just a young man who stubbornly pursued literary ideals. Xie Wan hides her true thoughts in front of others. This little girl is so well-behaved and sensible, which even makes people feel distressed. Her father's obstruction did not make her give up, and the indifference among her classmates did not make her give up. She was just planning her life silently to pursue her dream of literary creation. Zhou Zhu keeps writing and writes diligently. No matter how mediocre his talent is, he will raise his head in the face of these setbacks, rack his brains to conceive of plots, and do his best to create stories that readers love. Originally, Shi Chuchu could see the end of his life at a glance, but because of Zhou Zhu and his books, the trajectory of his life changed drastically... I can't tell, but what moved me about this episode was the story of Shi Chuchu and Zhou Zhu, the way these two people tried their best for their future and dreams. Taxi drivers, technicians, workers and other people all love literature and can talk about it no matter where they are. Or, both.... As the article says - literature is not a private property that belongs only to one person. It is like the wind at night, belonging to everyone. I just finished reading the chapter "Brave and Diligent", and I feel that there is only so much for now...

There is no need to set up so many obstacles. The plot of the preliminary selection is too vicious. A group of special teachers don't even have the patience to read a novel? Besides, you don't have the patience to jump and watch? Do you have to watch it from beginning to end? Generally speaking, this book is well written, but it is a bit verbose and I want to write everything in detail, but this is not a big problem, come on!

The following is my personal opinion. Now that I have read this book, I feel that this book is not suitable for writing online articles. Although this book is enjoyable, it is not enough. Many parts of this book are practical. The pragmatic vice principal, the head teacher who looks down on students for no reason, and the current educational situation that hinders students from learning freely are all well written. I think the author can excerpt these paragraphs and polish them into a good article that ridicules the current situation of education in modern China. Then it can be submitted to other magazines or newspapers. The above is just my personal opinion. I apologize if it disturbs anyone's emotions.

Well, I read chapter 15 this time. The last time I read this book was January 9th. Why do I remember it so clearly? Because I wrote a long review for this book that day. I came back to read it this time because someone liked the book review from a few months ago. Looking through the book review section, I saw that the author said that he had changed the first ten chapters. Watch it again if you feel like it. Well, the change was very successful. At least the background has become a lot more real, and it is easier to resonate with readers. After all, we all have a time when we strive for a clear goal, and every day has meaning. I read two books some time ago. Well... Should be a book and a pamphlet. A book called "The Game of Finites and Infinites" by the philosopher James Cass. Another very thin book or pamphlet called "Living the Meaning of Life" was written by Viktor Frankl, a psychiatrist who survived the Auschwitz concentration camp. These two books were recommended by friends. Because of the epidemic, I had nothing to do at home and found that I could not find the motivation to move forward. I complained a little while video chatting with my friends. My friends highly recommended these two books. I found a link online, it was pretty good at half price, and I placed an order. I was told that the logistics time would be long, so I looked for the electronic version first. Hmm... When I read this kind of physically published books, I prefer to buy paper ones. Because sometimes when reading, it is more convenient to write and draw than the electronic version. These are two sacred books. I would also recommend friends to read these two books. This will give you the motivation to move forward Well, the above is just nonsense, please ignore it. That's what I see now. Background setting, qualified. The character description is good. The plot design is good. Rhythm control, good. Conclusion: A public urban novel above the standard. Unfortunately, the first ten chapters of the first edition discouraged too many people. Well, that's it.

The girl under the math teacher's desk was a bit dissatisfied, but I can admit it. The tenth chapter later was even more dissatisfied. In addition, several consecutive chapters were very bland and not exciting, and there were even many things that would be considered poisonous now. I don't want to read it at the moment. I hope the author will pay attention to it and keep the book. I will read it again when I have time.

The subject matter is very good, but the first ten chapters are trying to persuade me to quit. Helping an unknown person for no reason and forcibly creating a villain image of a teacher is really a bit of a push-back.

I think the reason why this book does not perform well is that the author has many very mature ideas at the beginning but not enough choices, resulting in a bloated beginning and unclear style. Although there are many places where it can be seen that everyone actually has their own full motivations and ideas, but when taking into account the rhythm of the story, the characters appear to be too labeled. It would be better if the experience could be planned in a more unitized manner from the beginning (ps. Xie Siwen is not a mystery writer, and the author suddenly adds characters that are not true at all (⚭-⚭))

Today I came across an article titled "How Great Writers Criticize Great Writers" and wanted to share it with the author and book friends. Some of the criticisms are quite funny: Nietzsche on Dante: "A coyote writing poetry on the grave." Nabokov on Dostoevsky: "Dostoevsky's lack of taste, his monotonous treatment of characters suffering from pre-Freudian complexes, his way of dwelling on the tragic doom of human dignity - all this is difficult to appreciate." Capote on Kerouac: "That's not writing. , That's typing." Emerson on Austen: "Miss Austen's novels... Seem to me to be vulgar in tone, barren in artistic innovation, and trapped in the sad conventions of British society, without talent, wit or knowledge of the world. The only problem in this writer's mind... Is marriageability. " No one opinion can be agreed with by everyone, and no article can be liked by everyone. When we posted comments like great writers, we never thought that we might need the help of search engines to even write a self-introduction. Of course, most negative reviews are more objective, specific, and have guiding value for the author's writing. This is good for authors and readers who love online articles. They make online articles develop in a healthy direction. Thank them. Two recommendation votes support the author's updates.

After reading about ten chapters, let me tell you what you think As a newcomer, the author's writing style is pretty good. There are some new ideas about the protagonist, writing, and friends, and the ideas are quite creative. This is the good thing about this novel. The bad or even very bad thing is the setting of the school and teachers. The setting of the protagonist should be a school similar to the one in China. Then it will not be like the characters in Japanese light novels, everything is so direct. Even if the setting of the protagonist in this world is a poor student , the teacher would not directly ridicule and scold her like this, and the principal would not deny the writer face. After all, doing so would directly slap some people in the face. The result of Chi Guoguo's writing would be to abandon the book Author, it is a good thing that you are innovative, but you still have to pay attention to some poisonous points.

Happy Mid-Autumn Festival. I want to say a few words. In the field of online novels, it is undeniable that I am a newbie and have no trumpet. This is my first book. Before writing, I set two small goals for myself. First, I hope there will be thirty book friends who are willing to read. Secondly, I hope that I can gain a better understanding of online novels through the feedback from book friends. Now I think there is hope for my goal. Thank you all readers for your comments. Whether it is encouragement or criticism. But I may have some thoughts about the comments. One piece of encouragement will make me happy for a long time, so that I can't write. A criticism will make me sad for a long time, so that I can't write. This is dangerous. So I think, in the future, I will try my best to read the comments every week and write a long reply like this once a month (or bi-monthly). If necessary, I will also make modifications to the previous article. I don't have any literary ambitions, and I'll try not to irritate your eyes. The following are answers to frequently asked questions: (1) Style: Do you think this is a light novel? The characteristics of light novels (Light Novel) are mainly reflected in three aspects, relaxed language, character-centered, and fantasy settings. I think "Literary Players" meets the requirements. If you think this is not a light novel, then it is not. (2) Writing style: This is a Chinese online article. Your writing style is too light novel? Some chapters may be like this. However, I still want to explore all kinds of cool points, including urban superpowers, fantasy and heavenly ones, and light novel-style ones. The addition of fan support characters is to serve the light novel-style fun points, and maybe some readers will like it. If you think it's too light a novel, just bear with it a little bit, things will be different later. (3) Plot: The plot about Zhang Shoubai and Chang Yongjian is a poisonous point. Specifically, there are two views. One is that Chang Yongjian cannot confiscate the protagonist's final qualification certificate. One belief is that even if it is confiscated, Zhang Shoubai, as a well-known writer, cannot fail to strive for it. I admit that this may not have been handled well enough. But I also share my thoughts. I don't know how other people spend their school days. In the environment I live in, I have seen countless teachers who only care about grades and not the interests of students. Confiscating things is commonplace. If you want to participate in some novel competition, it is simply not doing your job. It's okay if I don't tear up the certificate for you. On the other hand, although Zhang Shoubai is a great writer, he has no rights at all in the school. Mo Yan doesn't care what your school teachers do. It is recommended to watch the movie "Outstanding Citizen" and you will see the helplessness of the Nobel Prize winner. (4) Details: There are too many discussions. Everyone just wants to read novels and not take Chinese classes. Makes sense. I used to write more narrative texts and less novels. Maybe he's really a good teacher. Frequent modifications delay updates in the past, but I will be more restrained in the future. Above. Best wishes.

I'm leaving. The teacher's part was too poisonous and insulting to the IQ.

I think it is impossible for Teacher Zhang to be forced to have his own will. In front of a well-known writer, a high school vice principal is nothing (even if he has an administrative level)

In the first 10 chapters of this book, two waves of people are persuaded to leave: one is from the female classmates, and the other is from behind where the teacher grabs things.

The more I read, the more frustrated I feel. The author doesn't have to make everyone look like they are brainless 😭😭. The teacher is so poisonous

Among literary novels, this is the first work I have seen that can combine the style of a light and funny light novel, the recommendation of serious and serious classics, the real (???) Touching emotional expression and the novel golden finger concept without any sense of contradiction. Not much else to say, I hope the author will add more chapters every day (๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧

Maggie's gift has been changed, but what the hell is the figure given in the article? The grade has been lowered, and the protagonist is too good at being a teacher. It is better to turn the system into a great teacher system.

Why do we like to read this kind of literary novel? Isn't it just to see the works you like and learn more about good works? It is a pity that more and more articles copied from public websites have fallen into the cliché, which makes people feel uneasy when reading them. Not to mention giving rewards, it would be great if they can all be ordered. In fact, the prop-drawing mechanism in the author's novel is also an improved version of the lottery system, except that simple and crude skill books are replaced by more literary props. In addition, the description of the characters in the novel is also very vivid. The principal and head teacher of the protagonist's school are so hateful that it makes people itch. The communication between the protagonist and other characters is quite lively. It would be better to have more emotional scenes.        ，，，！

There are a lot of bad money comments in the comments

I read the reviews and said it was pretty good, but when I read the first few chapters I felt it was too toxic and I couldn't stand it.

It's really interesting. Maybe it's because I particularly like science fiction literature and have briefly read O. Henry's short stories, the "Three Body" series and the "Foundation" series, so I'm very happy.

This story really makes me feel more and more uncomfortable the more I read it. Why do you write so many women? Author, can you take care of this? Moreover, each supporting character is more disgusting than the last. I don't even have an impression of the protagonist in my mind. All the supporting characters have disgusting faces.

Emmmmm, I was persuaded to quit by the teacher and principal

Not bad. Although it is a copy of the content, the author has written new ideas, and the setting of item extraction is excellent, which can be said to have brought the entire book to life. If you put more effort into the plot and development, it should be a good novel. Looking forward to future developments.

Used two trumpets to vote for (ง •̀_•́)ง

I was still reading the first weekly exam, and this teacher Xie made me seem to see the shadow of reality... Other feelings, whether it is the works written in the article or life, are quite good. The characters in school life are real and unique, and the understanding of literary works is also interesting. It's just that the author's description is not satisfactory enough, and there are still some shortcomings. For example, it was clearly mentioned earlier that improving mathematics is very important, but I spent three days writing "The Devotion of Suspect X". However, the writing process and the hard work were not written, and my understanding of the work was a little less. In the end, I only got a limited time and limited number of skills... The charm of my stone god was not shown, and the protagonist did not get much improvement, which made people unhappy. I haven't read the rest of it yet, but I hope the author can arrange the plot more reasonably and smoothly, and write more about his insights into the literary works. This is the essence. I hope to arrange more useful skills and items, and combine them with my understanding of literary works. Also, I hope the author will try his best to combine the works and plots in it, and not neglect any work. Those are all masterpieces. In short, I hope that the author will carry forward his strengths and write more about his understanding of literary works. Because I have never read many of them, I want to read and understand them more. I have read famous works and I hope the author writes more. After all, I like that work.