Jiang Ye Story

All the soldiers of "Taoyuan Suppression of Bandits" came to report: It is well written and has been collected✊

I am a very stupid person, and many of the things written in the book are based on my own life. When a person is useless, she will want to be a writer, and she is talking about me. But I'm just a writer. The first time I really tried to write a book was really not easy. It's not smart, has few vocabulary, is too bland, and is too awkward in some places. However, when coding, I will express some unhappiness, and sometimes I feel happy that I have written something interesting. Thank you for reading my immature writing. Hope, I can let you see the growthòᆺó

Come on, it's just too short. In order to make up for 10 minutes, I turned it from beginning to end, and then from end to end.

My younger brother who has less action descriptions.

Visiting friends, hoping to pay attention to and collect each other

I'm coming to see you, come on 😁😁😁

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The fate of the collision was followed by endless exchanges of words, but I still felt quite fresh and fresh. Maybe it was because I had been away from school for too long, but the sense of youth that hit me still moved me. Adjust individual sentences to make them more exciting.

I'm coming to see it! I would like to give you some advice. There are some sentences in the novel that will affect the reading experience and make it very unsmooth. Adding or subtracting some words or changing some words in the middle will make it appear much smoother. I have never read this type of book. The number of words is still small and some problems cannot be seen yet. However, the novel has been collected and I will read it when I have nothing to do. Vote for you, come on ✌️

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update. If you don't want to write, please apply to finish the book. Quality!

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

I'm so exhausted today that I won't necessarily update, I'm really sorry :-(