Di Qing

1. This book title has not been taken, what a blessing! The introduction is well written, and there is no fault in it. It can be used as an introduction template for novels with similar themes. 2. The author's writing style is above average among women's videos, and his wording has just the right ancient rhyme. He ranks among the top five authors of the same level that I know. 3. I feel that I chose the wrong category, it shouldn't be ancient romance. However, in the general environment, the stereotype of female fans only remains in the realm of romance and palace fighting, which makes people helpless and sad. 4. The beginning is too slow. It is not recommended to write a wedge for the first book. I feel that the author wants to write a lot, and I feel like I can't contain it in some places. I suggest you control your desire to talk and learn to leave blank space. 5. The transition processing in some places is a bit abrupt and needs to be strengthened. The proportion of language description is relatively large, and a description of action, psychology or scenery can be appropriately added. 6. The author has made great efforts in textual research on the classics, and really likes some of the opinions of the masters in them. His words make a world of difference. Summary: This is a good book, please keep working hard.

Title: "Di Qing" Author: Gu Minglou Introduction: Barbarians raided the country, and border wars broke out frequently. He wore armor and rode a horse to serve the country with his own life. Besieged on all sides, her family and country were in danger, so she strategized to fight and survive. The prime ministers and ministers are in separate courts to resist the ceremony. Should the five roads advance in one fell swoop, or should the walls be clear and the country is quiet and wait for good times? The people are miserable, should they take advantage of the victory and drive north to become the emperor, or should they return to their horses and herd the cattle and bow their heads and proclaim themselves ministers? The political situation is turbulent, and the political situation is undercurrent; the war is endless. A love affair between family and country, a period of troubled times, where will it go? Evaluation: ①The writing is good. But one problem is that the title of the book is Di Qing. It tells about Di Qing's family breakdown, his acquaintance with Ling'er, and his chance encounter with Baihua. Then here the text starts to focus on Baihua, which feels a little off track. It is recommended that if it involves supporting characters, it can be treated as a side story and a separate chapter can be inserted into it. For example, in the last chapter about the conversation between Di Qing and Master Monk, write "[Extra: The Mother of Baihua], [Extra: Ballads on the Prairie]". Because there are too many things related to Baihua, it is not easy to intersperse the protagonist Di Qing in the space, because it will feel like watching Di Qing fascinated, then cut off and force the reader to see Baihua, and then watch Baihua fascinated, and return to Di Qing after 20 chapters. (Just like the feeling of being forced to read English by my mother while doing math problems) ②The allusion is good When negotiating with Princess Huaiqin, she used the phoenix to only drink from the sweet spring and only live on the sycamore leaves to show her wings, which established the knowledge and image that a princess should have. Compared with many ancient romance books, this is a special feature. In the future, we can consider using it more frequently to bring the "strong style" to it. Suggestion: You can give more details to the supporting characters, such as giving some extra stories, giving them some interactions with the protagonist, and their relationship with each other. Because the supporting characters are well controlled, you can draw the duplicity of different characters (respective positions and concerns), the character's information channels, the ability of certain people to see the subtleties, and his or her chess game. It can also enrich the emotional world of the protagonist. I feel like this is the key to not collapsing in the later stages when the word count is too high. When it is written that the supporting character strives for a happy life by himself, the readers will smile happily. This is the highest state of romance. If you think of a song when writing about certain scenes, you might as well suggest it in the front or in the author's words~ (Of course other media are also acceptable) Think about it, if there is a For some major events or important national policies, you can consider adding a movie-like prologue, with a timeline, to bring up the atmosphere and rhythm of the whole chapter: On a certain day, a certain year, a certain year, a certain country, a certain dynasty, the Holy Emperor was furious because of the rebellion of the (official) Wei Mu family, and the cavalry rumbled in the capital, and the lights were bright. It's not a big problem. It feels like Mulan has no elder brother. Although the female channel may not have a large audience at the beginning, I hope I can continue to make progress and write. If you have the copyright in your own hands, if you have the energy, financial resources, and time to revise and revise it, you can consider publishing it. ps: Is it true that the male protagonist is the female lead?

Oh my god, it's actually a female channel! I still have the tickets in hand! Sister Xiao Gu's writing style is so handsome, it has a girl-next-door flavor, with a faint fragrance between butter and licorice. I don't know if I can allow this?

Jiangjiang left little footprints here. By the way, she moved a small bench and sat down. She brought her own small cakes, melon seeds, and spicy strips to watch the big book~

The introduction is deeply rooted in people's hearts, and I personally like this feeling very much. The description is relatively detailed, with an average code word length of about 3,000 words. Seeing that this book is a historical fiction, this kind of writing is actually very controversial, but I believe you can handle it well. Come on!

The Song Dynasty was not an era of unification in the true sense, but was closer to the rule of the Southern and Northern Dynasties. When several countries were at the peak of their power, the climate happened to be at a low point - the temperature dropped - causing conflicts among the nomads heading south, and domestic agricultural harvests were poor It was under such internal and external troubles that the Song Dynasty achieved a commercial revolution - of course, this is all a story later. Before this trend, the Song Dynasty advocated stability and had a relaxed political and cultural atmosphere, which gave birth to many wonderful characters. In Song Renzong's dynasty alone, there were Yan Shu, Kou Zhun, Fan Zhongyan, Wang Zeng, Ouyang Xiu... And of course Di Qing. I have been truly moved by them and continue to be moved. I hope I can describe their lives in a few words and share my feelings.

100 Points on the first floor. If you reach 10,000 points on the first floor, you will be rewarded with a Silver League for your work. (The author paid for it himself).

The pace of this book is quite good. It is not common for scriptures to read about the life and death of the World Honored One. The author must have made some preparations, and readers will probably gain something from it. The fictional books have a wide range of visions, and all historical celebrities appear, with personal emotions mixed in. It is refreshing and less charming. We lack some delicate and warm historical and humanistic stories, with more specific adjectives, which can be more literary and sunny, with less pretentious protagonist aura and more romantic stories. Occasionally, I will feel sweet when I think of them. I think this book is an effort in this direction, and I look forward to the author's better performance.

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Thanks to the author for the update. As a reader, I would like to thank the author for his hard work. It's just a few votes and not worth mentioning. I will continue to support it. Come on

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Di Qing really doesn't know how to flirt with girls [bad smile]

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Is Yelu Zhongyuan a cannon fodder with a male face?

I am going to learn from you. I can write up to 3,000 words a day, or I will finish the book very quickly.