Fight, Kira

The writing is pretty good. But... After reading a few chapters, I wasn't very interested. You should think about the reasons. You are not a great person and have no regular fans. Although the Three Golden Chapters are relatively old-fashioned, there is still a reason for their existence. How to catch readers at the beginning and attract them to continue reading is a very critical thing for new authors. I skipped the competitive plot at the beginning of your game because I don't like competitive games. Later, when I saw a new game, I endured it a little and continued reading. Although there was a battle with others later, I still didn't see anything attractive. The specific reason may be that this kind of plot does not capture me, or that similar plots are so commonplace that they are already tiring.