I Can See Opportunity

You are also a cultivator, why do you look so fresh and refined?

I came back and looked again, and the author is still insisting. Your character is really good, and I really hope you can get better and better Seriously This book is useless to me now. I don't want to throw it away or read it 🤫 The main reason is that the poisonous points are as prominent as the interesting points! ! ! I tolerated the scattered and jumpy first dozen or so chapters at the beginning, and I also tolerated the later chapters that kept writing in dangerous situations and forced me to save my life, and then I couldn't bear the supporting characters who were all having nothing to do. He is all around the protagonist, waiting to be stepped on and slapped in the face, and he also acts as a treasure-delivery boy! ! (I originally wanted to use data as an example, but it took too long to forget the plot 🤫) What I have seen so far are all tool NPCs who are mindless and hate the protagonist. I don't know if there will be any improvement in the future (I saw that Mr. Tian probably summoned a group of mentally retarded people to hunt down the protagonist, and the protagonist sneaked in to fight back. It was these mindless and irritable boss monsters that poisoned me away.) Let me talk about what I like about this book. The standard configuration of a lolita is just like having a portable grandfather in the past, which makes people tired of eyesight, so I was disgusted at first, but with the humorous interaction between the protagonist and her, I felt that it would be good to have such a vicious lolita to spice up the boring leveling plot👌Then the biggest highlight of the book is the father who remembered his daughter even after he died! Today's novels tend to develop various imaginative and novel settings, but they are also increasingly lacking in emotional investment, which inevitably gives people a plastic feel. The author's writing here is really good👍 The other one is the young lady who appeared wearing little boots and showed off her beautiful legs. Well... I am leg controlhhhhh It would be better if I had a car haha The world structure is also quite interesting It is a pity that these are confusing. . . Baba came here to say so much not to find fault and show off how smart he is, but because he likes the author's writing style and wants the author to see his own strengths and weaknesses, so as to write good works that can satisfy our hunger

It feels a bit messy, but if you read it as a short story, it's actually pretty good.

A bunch of people who are in a mess, just write novels and write some prose from time to time. What the hell is that?

There is good water in the back, the protagonist has lost sight of the opportunity, Xiao Yao 💊 has also disappeared. At the beginning, the woman named Shui was soy sauce. I thought she was a key figure, but it turned out to be a supporting role.

Damn, this book is really amazing. Wherever the pig's feet go, a group of people die. Almost all of them are dead, but the pig's feet come out to save people.

What are you writing? What a mess!

Chapter 8: Searching for Souls Without Demonic Paths is written very vaguely, but he didn't die. If the soul search is successful, it will definitely be known that the Dao Fruit is in his body and that he is not from this world. Logically speaking, a mortal should have no secrets in front of a top master. If I were a magic master and you were so suspicious in the tree hole, I would use fire to turn you into ashes and scan you bit by bit with my spiritual consciousness. But the result is that there is no injury at all, and there is no explanation. It's a flaw. .

What the hell, do you want to write about immortals or heroes? It's so confusing.

970,000 Words less than 1,000 words recommended 😅😅 The quality of this book...

I felt suffocated and couldn't watch it anymore. Although I was curious about the ending of the spirit body, I decided to forget it.

So narcissistic, it makes me feel... Very uncomfortable to watch

Can you write a protagonist? We don't just watch a fool write a book and see that he always has great luck and gets promoted all the way. What is a protagonist? We are just reading short stories. Who wants to read novels?

Does anyone understand? It was so baffling to watch, the plot was so foggy that one couldn't find a clue and couldn't figure out the main character's thoughts.

It actually appeared in my app guide. Yes, it's recommended.

How long has it been? Why haven't you published a new book yet?

The author's writing style is pretty good. I almost finished reading it, but then I skipped to the end. I don't understand the author's logic: Why does the protagonist become more incompetent the more he practices? At the beginning, you can also fight in higher levels, but the higher the level, the more you will be tortured. It doesn't matter if the opponent is a high-level one, even the high-level protagonist can't handle it. Internet articles must have a sense of substitution. If the substitute is a weakling, no one will feel uncomfortable. I don't think it matters anymore whether it's a bad ending or not. Even if I write about returning to the world of human cultivation, I won't be able to read it. He was such a weakling in the demon world and returned to the human world to kill and bully children? So I feel that the author has a big problem with the rhythm and is unable to continue the lead.

Um, I think it's okay, pretty good, it's just a little messy at the beginning, but it's pretty good in the middle. Come on.

Come on, author, I like your style. Although there are many pitfalls, poor emotional lines, and some things are inexplicable, it does not affect my love for Xiao Yao.

It feels a bit strange to watch it

Well, I think you're doing okay. Come on!

Damn it, I don't play like this with you.

Sure enough, we can't have high expectations for this kind of lv:1 author.