Lords of the Heavens Space

I have read the Yitian chapter. Generally speaking, I still like this subject matter. I just have a few suggestions. The author is a bit dissatisfied with the handling of Zhao Min in the second world (only for these chapters of Zhao Min, the others are still very good). The protagonist has been the emperor in the first world for decades, but he is very slow in handling Zhao Min's emotions. It's not that I am disgusted with the harem (the protagonist can accept a hundred and eighty people like this), but the protagonist is in a domineering and imperial style, don't play romance here, and you are anti-Yuan, and you want a foreigner to be the mistress (this mistress has just plotted against the protagonist, but the protagonist killed all her subordinates), and the generals under his command directly accepted this mistress to lead the troops! ! ?(Although I understand that Zhao Min has no way out, this is too hasty) Discussion is OK Spoilers go away!

The plot of this book is pretty good, and the writing is pretty good except for the beginning. But this author made a common mistake. The plot is greater than the setting. He always only cares about the starting point and the end point, and the middle journey is arbitrary. As a result, the protagonist always seems to have no IQ, because the author is too lazy to think about how to better achieve the result, so he just writes whatever he wants.

If a writer doesn't read his own work, it means that the writer is just trying to make up the number of words to earn a few cents. In fact, this will actually keep readers away from the book, so there's no point in making money!

I strongly recommend the author to block Long Kunlun's book reviews. Generally, I don't read his book reviews when I see them.

The author's main line development is too slow! At first glance, the protagonist can summon military units from the worlds he has traveled through, and then compete with others for hegemony. But you write too slowly! Also, in your first world, it was a real failure to bring those three women back. I don't know if it can be changed. If you can, change it to be the same as in the second world. Bring people first. Your protagonist travels through time. As a man, it's okay if you need it. It's okay to have two or three, but why bring them back? Also, write less about the main world. That Huang Ying, try not to bring it into the system space!

I guess the next copy should be a Western fantasy type world

This supporting character's intelligence has gone too far and the nameless supporting character has been brainwashed. If you want to wash someone like Chen Jinnan, it's no less than breaking his head and rebuilding it.

It's normal to accept girls, but don't accept them in every world, otherwise, you'll have to go through dozens or hundreds of worlds!

My perfect bed-warming maid was still ruined by Wei Xiaobao😒😒😒

Self-reports of supporters of novels without female protagonists: Some book friends cannot understand the sudden emergence of a trend without female protagonists. In fact, the truth is that they cannot accept the emotional drama written by the author. It's acceptable, but there are always some authors who like to use emotional drama to disgust readers, which seems awkward. I'm here to see you causing trouble and pretending to be cool, not to be a licking dog, or to be affectionate and unrepentant when you meet someone. When you come to the harem, you still have affection for someone. It's so unrealistic! It's hard to write a story about the relationship between a single female protagonist and it's hard to write well, especially the kind where the male protagonist and the female protagonist are having an ambiguous relationship, which is really distasteful. So there is no female protagonist at all. The protagonist concentrates on his career and is comfortable to watch. Most authors who write about female protagonists have strayed from the theme, as if they are missing something if they don't write an affectionate male protagonist. In fact, I have long been tired of it. There are not many female protagonists in Dou Po, and there are not many in Wu Dong. In fact, the old books are not that extreme. Emotional descriptions rely on writing! If it is well written, it will be brilliant, but if it is not good, it is extremely toxic! Book friends who support my idea have trouble to give me likes, letting people know how strong our army of female protagonists is!

In times of book shortage, even if the writing is almost tolerable, I can bear it, but the author has no sense at all and is enjoying himself there. I almost vomited blood when I read it! This is challenging my common sense! Not to mention the mindless recruitment of girls in the previous volumes! Let's just talk about the Lord of the Rings. There are only more than 6 billion people on the planet and they can hardly hold it? So how big is the plain where your kingdom under the mountain is located? A city that can hold hundreds of millions of troops, and a plain where tens of millions of troops can fight outside? ! ! 🔨🔨 Once the number of people exceeds 10,000, it becomes a sea of ​​​​people. Do you know how much space is needed to deploy the array? Do you think there will be a space war? Besides, for such a big city, do you know how long it would take to walk back and forth? It would probably take a whole day to ride a horse for several miles and run out! So do you have some concept of time and space? You are not flying in a space battleship! There are various terrain restrictions (mountains, rivers, forests) in the organizational space. Just like in an alley, no matter how many people you have, they can only go up in a row!

😅 The author really believes in love. If a man becomes an emperor or a woman becomes an emperor, love is a joke.

Is there any mistake? Opening a small medical clinic in the real world is better than doing nothing. Do you like giving people massages so much?

This is a novel that advises everyone not to rebel against the Qing Dynasty. Please give it away and don't read it with limited exemption.

Zhao Min's plot is so disgusting to me... It's so disgusting... I want to kill you! She also forced the word "water" as if she had a crush on me... Think through it before writing the plot🧠? I tried to kill you twice but you let it go. Are you possessed by Zhang Wuji? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? Very poisonous

This introduction has an immediate effect in blocking old book friends. When you see this introduction, you seem to see how imbecile the protagonist is. . . I haven't read it, but if it's a good book, I'd better advise the author to revise it.

It's 9012 years old and you still have a harem? It was very exciting to watch the rebellion in the Qing Dynasty, but I was a little speechless when I saw the harem. What is the purpose of traveling across the heavens? If it's just for collecting stamps, forget it. If you can't be wholehearted about your feelings, how can you control your inner desires? Sooner or later, your inner demons will come back to bite you and you will die.

This book made me laugh to death. The protagonist is the best in martial arts in the mission world and has been the emperor for decades. After the mission ended and returned to the real world, he sold the thumb ring he brought from the mission world and opened a massage parlor by himself, giving massages in person🙂🙂

Can the protagonist of the Legend of Two Dragons of the Tang Dynasty defeat the Ancient One with his peak strength? Or does the Ancient One rely on the Time Stone to gain the upper hand?

It doesn't matter what a harem is. But you *** have actually become the emperor of two worlds. In the real world, you actually give people massages? ? ? ? ? ? ? The author really likes the massage industry. This is very uncomfortable.

This book is really disgusting to read, the protagonist looks like a self-righteous retard, and most of it is based on the author's own shallow words.

After reading many chapters, I would like to ask the author, after all, the protagonist is also the master of several worlds, why is he still so holy? Save this and that? And the protagonist's identity is awesome! In Lord of the Rings, the three protagonists are all brothers and sisters? Such as the King of Rohan. Such as dwarves and so on. What is your identity? Real world or massage? ? ? You say it's poisonous or not.

Why do I feel that this book is a team effort? I always feel that the outline, main plot, emotions, and writing are all done separately.