Changes in the Human World and the Divine Realm

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Dear author, I feel a little tired after reading five chapters. I will post a post here to share my thoughts.

Collected, good, memorable.

Congratulations on sticking to coding for 30 days! Why don't you go to the circle to promote it and increase your investment before you achieve a great achievement?

Where did you get the cover made? It looks good.

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This is all about writers complimenting each other, I've seen it.

Dude, I invested in you. Let me give you a fair evaluation again! (Non-professional) How a novel attracts readers is that the first three chapters must be interesting. All passed very well. Book title, let me give you five points! It's too long, I don't want to read it, and it doesn't have any new ideas. You can look at the titles of other books. Introduction, I give you five points. You can't tell, it needs to be concise and clear, or it should be profound and novel. I only see novelty in you (they are all imitating, there is nothing novel, the most important thing is to attract)... Content, I will give you four points. The first three chapters of every novel are crucial, and you are telling the origin of the story. The task is very complicated. I can't understand who is the male protagonist or who has more roles. (#-.-) Also, segment it! Brother, you'd better change the front part. It's not easy to tell the story. You can intersperse it! Routines are certainly routines, just like Doupo. Look at the beginning of others, and you are looking at yours. I can read Doupo, but ten lines at a glance (●°u°●)​ "I'm not capable of this! There is no segmentation, what about tasks? Can you do it step by step? People in the Marvel Universe have spent ten years laying the groundwork! That's it, this is my first time writing. If you don't like it, don't criticize it. It's great. Please write more about the East. Pirated copies of the Harry Potter series are no longer popular! You have a foreign name at the beginning, what the hell... Forgive me for speaking too hastily. If you want more people to read it, you have to change it from scratch. Only in this way can you have a chance to sign the contract. I don't know if it's because you are too imaginative or what. I am also very imaginative, but I will still write the beginning well. Look at the works of the few platinum masters, if that doesn't work. Then I still support you, it's your hobby╮(＿)╭ but there will be very few people watching. Please invite water friends! Recommendation votes are also bought with the same money! Really not, I have a case here, take a good look! I can only help you so far.