My Ode

I have read the first three chapters. The writing is good and the writing is smooth. The story setting is okay, but the introduction is not good. I suggest changing it. The plot is a bit slow. The overall impression is good... Come on...

Nice writing, keep it up＾0＾~

The two-line opening is still clearly written. The author is very skilled and has great skills. Thumbs up. Already invested, go for it.

It's well written. Good luck to the author. I hope you can keep it up and don't forget your original intention. I look forward to the follow-up story being more exciting, and of course I also hope that the background and history are magnificent and rare to see.

Already collected, come on

Come on, come on, come on, I'm optimistic about you

Suddenly a treasure was discovered😏

Not bad, I have already invested, keep going ✊

It doesn't seem to have any impact on me, and the data is not good either. I still have to pounce on it!

This article is wonderful! Please allow me to recommend an alternate history book; Struggle in the New Red Mansion!

This book has been signed, thank you investors. From now on, this book will be updated to a minimum of 3,000 words per day. I hope all book friends will invest, collect and recommend 🤝

Adding it to the bookshelf is a must, come on

Well written and rich in content

Very nice, thank you for your recommendation, I have saved it!

In fact, I read very few historical articles, because I think those who write this kind of articles are all big guys. Then I may not understand some parts, and then I opened it and saw, well, it turned out to be another big guy. No time travel, no cheats, no system, just a story about a very ordinary boy who likes reading, has a flexible mind, observes things more meticulously than others, and then grows up step by step. There are many characters in the article, and the descriptions are very good. There is no thorn in the writing, and the characters are well created (forgive me for not having much writing skills, so what I said is very simple). Next, let me talk about my opinions (not nitpicking, just some reflections after watching it 😂). First of all, I think there are a lot of characters in the beginning, and I can't remember it because of the language. It's a bit complicated for me, so I have to watch it very carefully, and then the scenes jump again and again. It can be understood that the author wants to create other characters, because the author has said that other characters are also flesh and blood, but I think, since the protagonist is Yin Nian, I think other characters should be created around the protagonist, otherwise it will make people feel confused. The scariest thing is that for me, who is a bit stupid, it is really difficult to remember people's names. I can only remember a few particularly key people at most, wow⊙∀⊙! , A lot of nonsense. To sum it up in one sentence, great!