Eternal Corridor

I really can't recommend it to you... It's only Level 2...

The contract has been sent out, but due to my studies, it will still be updated weekly (about two updates a week), or even by chance. After all, writing is just my hobby and cannot be used as a homepage. I hope you can understand 😢

Can you have more...😒🔪

It is full of the wild imagination of adolescent boys. The lonely boy, the girl with misfortune, the beach of death, the golem, the athletic park, the peaceful zone... The strong Japanese wind makes it feel very picturesque when watching it. But the author didn't write an outline, and many professional settings came out without explanation, so it's a bit messy. There is also over-description. The author can use the technique of line drawing appropriately. Excellent authors often don't need to write out all the scenes. As long as they capture the key things, such as the sunset, the sea, and the dead silence, the readers can outline such a picture themselves. It is necessary to use more pen and ink on the plot. It is not good for the plot to be completely driven by the protagonist, and it seems a bit stiff. It's best if the plot drives the protagonist's actions and choices. The plot serves the protagonist, but not just for the protagonist. There is quite a market for light novels these days. Come on, author!

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Good job, keep up the good work, your book review has been published in Diandian Daily.

I searched your group account and couldn't find it 😵😵

Love this book so much! First of all, the suspense is very high, and the digging is not blunt, which is really rare! I don't mean to step on others, but many authors feel like they are pushing readers hard. This book is very comfortable to read. Secondly, the low sense of reader involvement has always been a flaw in Western fantasy background novels. How to lower the reading threshold has always been a problem that needs to be solved. The author's writing style takes care of the readers and makes it very comfortable to read. Then, the protagonist is well portrayed, not a paper character, and not annoying. Finally, the description is in place, which shows that the author's writing power is sufficient. Come on for more, I'm optimistic about you!

Come on! The writing is good, but the progress is too slow. If you want to focus on your studies, just send me a leave request. I'll be writing it during the holidays.

I really hope that readers who have collected my books can continue reading. Because it is my first time to write a book, the plot of the first volume may be a bit confusing and jumpy, but I have been seriously improving it in the second volume, and the main plot will be fully unfolded. If you like my book, please give me a recommendation vote to support it. Thank you very much 😭

Be prepared for danger in times of peace! The author's skillful writing draws people in, and he wants to learn from you!

Tickets have been sent, I hope it can create a better plot

I'm reading the second volume, Uh, wait until I rub my eyes... The various descriptions are very sufficient. The shortcoming is that the plot is a bit slow. I know this is the sequelae of too sufficient description. In fact, such a full description is not necessary. It is good to leave a little room for readers' imagination.

Xiao Ling'er, can you update the second volume quickly... Although the first volume feels like a very important plot, it's a bit jumpy and confusing Hurry up and update the main plot. I've given you the tickets, so why don't you update it quickly 😡

I almost thought you were a eunuch🙂🔪