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I build my own building and am invincible.

How can I put it, this book violates a taboo in online writing! 1. Academic 2. There are too many people on the scene and the character descriptions are unclear 3. So many brothers? Believe it or not, the person who stabbed you is a brother 4. If you are too close to the country, you will be blocked easily There are many more, so I won't mention them one by one.

Dear author, I originally wanted to give you all 7 tickets, but there are too many typos and I feel tired. I will give them to you after you correct them!

Let me express my personal opinion: There are occasional typos in the article. Although it does not affect reading, it is a bit uncomfortable to read. The subject matter is very good. The subject matter is very novel, but there are some pitfalls that may be foreshadowed. I don't know if I didn't look carefully. For example, the world will awaken talents. What about children, some children who have no independent ability? It's also possible that the author wrote it in big letters, but I didn't see it clearly. The writing style is also good, but I personally feel it's a bit confusing. Please give it a try, author! Just my personal feelings, don't mind.

Come on, come back and visit me when you have time

I came in after reading the introduction, and then I didn't really want to read it after reading the content. Throw it in casually (I don't want to see the grouping when I look at it)

I read your introduction correctly... The power system, character personality, real-time encounter changes, character changes outside the protagonist's perspective, players, just thinking about it, is a mess. This kind of hodgepodge, what is difficult to write about is the collision of plot characters outside the protagonist's field of vision, and the real-time actions outside the field of vision. The more people present, the more difficult it becomes. I don't even have to click in 😏.