Disaster Collector

It feels like the protagonist is just a model puppet produced by the government, without his own observations and thoughts about society. It is quite different from the public articles...

If there are any typos in the work, please let me know. I corrected most of them last night. Thank you for your support!

From now on, I will start with at least 2,000 words a day. I hope everyone will support me. ps: There seems to be a small problem with my author account, so I can only use this account now. Pityful, I pretend to be pitiful online.

The previous chapter was fine. In Chapter 19, my fate was inexplicably decided by nature. The high-quality protagonist instantly fell into the role of a fantasy novelist.

Emmm, how should I put it? The author has obviously just started writing the book recently. In fact, the setting is quite good, but the details are not appropriate. The world background is omitted when it is time to popularize the world view to the readers, and the settings are overdone when it is time to popularize the world view to the readers. This leads to the reader reading in a fog. Without the pleasure of being deeply involved in it, it is easy to lose the reader. I suggest the author change it and learn from the writing experience of some big guys.

The title of this book is wrong -_-||. The title of the book is completely inconsistent with the content we expected. What did you think of the name, author? Since the theme is love and justice protecting a strong country, why choose a name that makes people feel that the theme is selfish and ruthless? A lot of people gave up the book after seeing the name. Maybe those who like books gave up when they saw the name. I have to say that you, the author, are truly a talent.

"Ding, release a long-term mission: Wuxia" Task: Wuxia Level:? ? ? Requirement: No novel is perfect without typos, but dreams still have to be there after all. Find typos and leave a message in the discussion area! Time: Permanent Reward: As a reader who finds typos, you have made an irreplaceable contribution to the novel. You will receive "the favorability of the author and the deputy leader of the book club +100" and "the verbal reward of the author or the deputy leader of the book club +1" ps: Dear little monsters, please do your work for free, I will remember you.

It feels a bit awkward and stiff, but I have a good idea

It's better to write slowly like Jiuxing Poisonous Milk. The background is not introduced clearly, and it is an inexplicable explosion. At least it is written about China. Chapter 20 is in line with international standards. Could it be that in the following chapters, you will be patriotic and heroic for your country all day long? This goes against the protagonist's salty sexiness.

After listening to many suggestions from readers, the author reluctantly found that the previous content was too confusing, so he re-wrote a new book. I hope everyone will like it. New book "The Broken Fairy Tale Castle" The spiritual energy revives the flow of dreams, and the protagonist is good at cutting paper figures and making dolls. Clear thinking, not holy mother. There is nothing to save the world, it is just to make more people realize the appearance behind their masks. Taking off the mask of hypocrisy, everyone is a puppet controlled by the devil, and a pure person is just an unreachable term. What comes to the protagonist at his most painful moment is not comfort, but another event that breaks his heart. "Broken Fairy Tale Castle" Introduction: In an era where all people are building dreams, dream monsters are everywhere, creating panic. Some people climbed to the top of the world naked, walking against the snow, and every step was difficult. Some people are in the lush cherry forest, playing the piano with their jade fingers, thinking about the blooming cherry blossoms on the peninsula. Someone is standing on the golden tower, pointing to half of the desert, and the undead are forming an army. We, our hands have been stained with sin, We, our hearts have been polluted, A broken fairy tale castle, a reality like a dream. In order to better prepare for the coming of war, Broken fairy tales!

Well, emmm, the book is good and good, but it's too jumpy. A lot of the plots can be covered in just one chapter, but overall it's not bad. You can read it if you are short of books.

Chapter 57: Sudden extra drama At this time, four options appeared in front of Gu Yusheng again. One: It's not appropriate to stay here for a long time, let's leave as soon as possible. Two: Kill her, once and for all. Three: To completely destroy her personality, tease her first! …… Gu Yusheng decisively (after hesitating on the third option for a long time) chose the second option. I saw the long sword in the puppet's hand immediately pulled out from the head of Snow White's horse, and then stabbed the beauty in her arms fiercely. Ding! A dagger came through the air and hit the puppet's sword, knocking it away. Snow White in the puppet's arms looked at the man who wanted to kill her with a look of fear on her face, and her little face suddenly turned pale with fear. "Beautiful princess, please allow me to be irrational just now." A man in black clothes jumped down from the big tree nearby and said to Snow White sincerely. "Damn!" Seeing this, Gu Yusheng dropped the mouse in his hand. He knew that this game would definitely not be that simple! Why did he forget that there is a dog-licking killer beside Snow White! "Huu~" Gu Yusheng took a few deep breaths, then exited the game directly, opened the archive "Puppet", and started again. The puppet appears, the same forest, the same area, without any change. Gu Yusheng skillfully operated the puppets and came to the only path that Snow White must pass. Ta-ta! The sound of horse hooves sounded, and Gu Yusheng became more energetic, and the puppet also raised the long sword in his hand. Pfft! The long sword stabbed into the horse's body, and blood splattered all over the ground. Due to inertia, Snow White fell into the arms of this strange man again. Her face was slightly red, and she raised her head and looked at the man's face curiously. At this time, four options appeared in front of Gu Yusheng. One: It's not appropriate to stay here for a long time, let's leave as soon as possible. Two: Kill her, once and for all. Three: To completely destroy her personality, tease her first! ... Gu Yusheng clicked on the three options without hesitation this time. The puppet looked down at Snow White, who was looking at him curiously, and smiled at her. At the same time, the puppet held Snow White's calf with her right hand and put her left hand on her back. Then she picked up Snow White in a princess hug and left quickly. At this time, the killer who was standing on the tree waiting for the opportunity to heroically rescue the beauty looked confused. Wait, what about the hero who promised to save the beauty? Why was the goddess taken away by someone else? For a long time, the killer took a breath. I don't have the ability to give her happiness, so what if we are together? I wish her happiness. After standing there for a while, the killer left silently. (Author: Licking Dog, he really doesn't deserve everything! Look at him, he ended up without even a name!) …… At this time, in the forest. Snow White was hugged like a princess by this strange man and she forgot to struggle. She just buried her little face deeply in the puppet's arms. Gu Yusheng looked shocked when he saw this wave of horse bug operations, and exclaimed, "This guy is so terrifying!". "Why did you kill my horse?" Snow White hesitated for a long time and finally asked this question. Just as the puppet was about to speak, Gu Yusheng had three more options on the screen. One: That horse is going to hit me. Two: Why do I, Mo Ying, need to explain to others what I do? Three: I like you, and I don't allow other beings to observe the love between us. …… As domineering as I am! The other creatures Gu Yusheng decisively chose the three options. "I like you, and I don't allow other creatures to observe our love." After saying that, the puppet ignored Snow White's incredible expression and directly lowered his head and kissed Snow White's gently opened pink lips. Gu Yusheng gritted his teeth and looked at the puppet he added on the screen. There was something slightly bulging and moving around his mouth. He didn't need to think about it to know that this bastard had stuck out his tongue! ! ! ! You bastard Wan'er! (Wa'er) Who allowed you to add drama privately! ! Gu Yusheng relaxed for a moment, he was too cold to relax at all! Watching this kiss scene, Gu Yusheng was already a little numb at this time. This broken game first aroused his expectations for love, and then ruthlessly shattered these expectations, making his heart extremely fragile. Every minute is suffering. Falling in love is indeed the beginning of death. Gu Yusheng felt that he must forget this damn episode after the game was over. However, the more he thought about it, the angrier he became! Even what has been lost has to be lost, and I don't even deserve the right to remember. It seems that I might as well be a dog licker! …… Finally, the puppet stopped when Snow White was kissed so much that she lost control. He raised his head slightly and retracted the tongue from Snow White's mouth. A crystal clear water thread was pulled up and connected to their mouths. Gu Yusheng: Ah ah, I don't want to play this crappy game anymore! Snow White finally came to her senses. She actually kissed a man she had not known for half a day? And he didn't resist and allowed him to ask for it? What's going on? Snow White suddenly had a flash of inspiration, could it be... Did I fall in love with him too? Thinking of this, Snow White's originally reddish face suddenly turned extremely red, like a ripe apple, making people want to take a bite. At this time, Gu Yusheng once again had three more options on the screen. One: How do you feel? Two: It feels good, let's do it again! Three: How about something more fun? …… Looking at these three options, Gu Yusheng had the urge to smash the screen immediately. Do it again? ! One time is enough for me. Do you want to do it a second time? Still taking option three, today, even if I, Gu Yusheng, jumped out from my door, I would not choose this option! Isn't just kissing enough to make you angry? Want something more fun? ! Why don't you go to heaven? "Hmm~" Seeing that Gu Yusheng was showing signs of going berserk, Yanyu cupped Gu Yusheng's belly as if to comfort him. Gu Yusheng, who was angry, calmed down when Yanyu hugged him like this. Touching Yanyu's little head, Yanyu half-closed her eyes and enjoyed this comfortable moment. After rewarding Yanyu, Gu Yusheng turned back to look at the screen again. Suddenly, his chest heaved up and down. I saw that Gu Yusheng had not made a choice for a long time, and a blue light kept shaking on option three, as if he wanted to choose it. Gu Yusheng immediately became anxious when he saw it. Is this okay? The mouse award immediately moves to option two and clicks OK. On the screen, the puppet wiped his saliva, looked at Snow White in his arms with a wicked smile, and asked: "How do you feel?" When asked by the puppet, Snow White immediately buried her red little head in the puppet's arms and did not dare to come out. "Huh, bad guy!" Snow White said angrily. This was the first time Gu Yusheng heard Princess Snow White speak in this way. She was immediately burnt on the outside and tender on the inside, and did not dare to speak. While watching the puppets, he felt no emotion at all when he heard Snow White say these words. Gu and Sheng compared and expressed understanding. After all, he is a puppet, which is normal.

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Hello fellow Taoist! ! ! Goodbye fellow Taoist! ! !

I just discovered this book today which is quite to my liking. Why did you cut it? . It's still a matter of publicity.