The Rise of the Doomsday Spirit

Good water, obviously a lot of it is unnecessary to write, but it takes several chapters to explain it.

Jiangjiang is bubbling again. After bubbling, dive down 😌

The sauce keeps bubbling and gurgling

Seeing it now, I don't feel happy about it so far, but I still watched it and look forward to the future development. I hope the pace can be faster.

Gkd, gkd, there are too few updates, not enough to read. I vote for you as the author every day, gkd.

The realistic and dark writing style gives people a sense of immersion. The only thing you have to pay attention to is not to get too carried away. There are only a few Pokemon books left. I hope the author can stabilize his development and don't waste time.

The next elf is probably the Sting Bee, but it is not ruled out that there will be a third elf before the Carapace evolves. The priority now is the survival of the protagonist, and now the protagonist can have a more in-depth discussion on the application of various props. For example, Use existing tools and materials to make traps and ambush various elves Use various elves to collect the venom of poisonous elves, and use the nature of elves to achieve your goals. At present, the most suitable ones should be insects and grasses, which are relatively common elves and can easily form combat power. These two types of elves basically consume less food. An extra point should be made about difficult creatures such as the Dirk. Basically, the novels about elves nowadays are a little darker and all have Dirks appearing. I believe everyone knows the characteristics of the Dirk, so I won't go into details. Writing a book review for the first time, please keep improving, keep improving, keep improving🙏🙏🙏 Dear guests, why don't you come in and give it a thumbs up so that the author can see it. 😄

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The first phase of the supporting building is now open and everyone is welcome to sign up! Format Name Age Character Simple appearance description Occupation before the Day of Arrival No need to bring Pokémon

Why can everyone else have Pokémon? I feel like the protagonist's information advantage is not obvious.

Can you stop being disgusting? The latest five chapters are all from the past. Are we spending money to buy memories? ! 😡😡😡😆🔪🔪🔪🔪🔪🔪[fn =54]🔪🔪🔪🔪🔪🔪🔪🔪🔪🔪

Don't do anything to prevent theft, okay? As for anti-theft, please change it back within half an hour. It's really disgusting to post the previous content first and then not change it after a few days. I have seen so many good and bad ones, but you are the only anti-theft like this. I have never seen money. It's really ugly. I couldn't bear it anymore and squirted first! I also read pirated copies. I also started subscribing chapter by chapter. I didn't become an apprentice because I couldn't stand it! (Deleted and reposted)

I hope the author can avoid some problems. I have read a lot of doomsday novels, such as Rebirth and Goldfinger, but they all have a characteristic that the growth of the supporting character's strength without a plot is very buggy. No matter how the protagonist cheats, as long as he changes places, there will definitely be a bunch of supporting characters who are stronger than him. Moreover, the things that the protagonist's aura has figured out do not seem to be unusual at all. Take this cone, for example. How long will it take for someone who doesn't know the plot to discover the secret of the cone? There are so many things in the new world, but you can tell at a glance that the cone is extraordinary? You can tell at a glance that you need to burn it? You can tell at a glance that you need to assemble parts? You can tell at a glance that you can collect Pokémon? If the protagonist goes out and meets other people who already know how to use Poké Balls, that's really the only cool thing. Um, I feel like I should also highlight the main plot, whether it's doomsday survival or elf battle. After all, the word count in your update is really... If you write a battle in detail, you have to wait two or three days, which is really too long.

The author updates too slowly. So I just keep watching. The last time I kept it, I stopped updating it. I thought I was a eunuch! Later it was updated. Now give me another update. Death eunuch, Death eunuch, Death eunuch, Say important things three times! ! !

Pig's trotters are already a long way ahead and will still be tricked by others. If you write about being bullied by elves, that's it. Being bullied by others is really unbearable. Besides, are elves so common? I met two people in total, both of whom were elves. I was really speechless.

As long as the author doesn't write about a harem or having an affair with multiple maternal creatures, everything is fine.

Can you please stop using the past to disgust people? There's no need to be so disgusting during the Chinese New Year, right?

If not, don't send it out. Such fake updates are really dangerous, 404 warned.

He must be a eunuch! If you can't write, ask for leave!

It seems that your failure to update is of no use at all. It would be better not to update at all.

Why don't you apply to complete the book if you are already a eunuch?

Look, this is a body filled with tobacco and alcohol. There are dark circles under the eyes, pink eye, and secondary diseases. A perfect, middle-aged man.

The setting is too criticized. For example, the firepower at the beginning is lost. What is this? With the current technological level of mankind, can we defeat the elves without using nuclear bombs? This is not a zombie apocalypse novel. Is it possible that you still want to become an immortal? Humans will soon be able to survive the difficulties by relying on the elves who are close to humans. It's okay to say it too quickly, but what the hell are you doing by wiping out communications? Without information dissemination, how can others know that not all elves will attack humans? Do you really plan to annihilate most humans? Just leave a small part?

Sorry, I should have read the comments

It has been approved, but it is still producing false content. The subscription point in your hand is waiting for you to change and subscribe. Although I feel that I have reached the limit of my tolerance, now I check every day to see if the changes have been made and then report them and leave. Let's see who can survive each other, it's disgusting

I see you are a hammer. Every day you open it, it's all from the past.

I want to ask, how many pictures of Yi Renwen died?

I used to read it as a super good book, but it only had 20 chapters. I didn't expect it to be 450,000 words long.

Where has the author gone? T^T