My System Is Captain Titan

Every recommendation vote is an affirmation for me. Thank you for your 11 recommendation votes.

The writing is smooth, but a bit jerky. Keep working hard and you will get better and better. Everyone has been through this, believe in yourself.

Not afraid, I have the confidence to describe the first boat well. In fact, the structure of underwater ships is similar to that in space. Ultra-miniature mining submarine. Diesel-electric drive, while the alien creatures are adapting to the earth's environment, disintegrate the Potsva and transform their own submarines. Complete system tasks and obtain high-efficiency fuel thrusters. Evolved fusion engine.

I just started reading it, but I didn't get into the first chapter. The second chapter is a bit interesting. I'll wait until I see the latest chapter before commenting. There's nothing wrong with the sentences. Too many English characters are not very good. Not many people can understand it, which will slightly narrow the reading area. You said you don't need to read the first ten chapters, and there's no need to write about things you don't need to read. Come on, believe in yourself, the most important thing in this business is persistence.

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Some paragraphs have too many words, making them uncomfortable to read. Especially when there is a short side, there is a long side, and there is a short side among the long side. It depends on the difference! This is a common problem among novices. If there is a disease, it must be treated!

The atmosphere is well created. If you modify it a little and don't use sensitive words, the signing will be no problem. Come on, you can do it!

I support the masterpiece and have added it to my bookshelf collection. Please return for a return visit.

It's not that I don't want to write well! But too tortured. There was a serious mistake in the initial background concept. As a result, the more I write, the more sensitive I become. Now at least there is an explanation.

The return visit has been received, the author would like to support you!

It is planned to be renamed Titan Virtual Position to abandon the system and web style after organizing it. It only describes life after the invasion of alien creatures in the future. Describe human nature and desire for control more deeply and reduce dialogue. Star setting. Continuing to accelerate the completion. Later, the span will be wider, there will be more dialogues, and there will no longer be descriptions of technological scenes.