A Wizard's Journey Through Marvel

To be honest, your grades are so poor. Your two female supporting stations deserve a lot of credit. I really can't stand it.

To be honest, I was confused when I read this book. The last chapter was in Kama Taj, and the next chapter is in school. There was a sense of separation. Moreover, the narrative feels like talking to oneself, and the whole process is the inner activities of the protagonist.

I feel like that Claire is a bitch. . .

After reading all the updates, I have a few words to say. First of all, the description of the protagonist is not very good. It's not that it's not good, but it doesn't contain the knowledge or concepts that a time traveler should have. I was very confused when I first looked at it. It wasn't until later that the author probably discovered the problem and then added a meditation method setting. I can't say it's not good here, but someone has pointed out the problem with the protagonist's ability in a lot of previous chapters. There is no corresponding solution, and most of the protagonist's operations here are very confusing. It's okay to go to the library to check the information when you don't know where the problem is, but after you know it, you don't think about how to solve it immediately and instead go to the ** area to check it. Not to mention that Occlumency is a simple mental restraint. You should know it. Then, wouldn't it be easy to find the relevant information in HP? As for whether the first grade can learn and be exposed to it, you have an uncle who teaches Defense Against the Dark Arts. Why not use such a good tool? Also, the two supporting female characters give the impression that the protagonist turns into a nympho when they are around them. Are they giving in at every turn? Or is it intentional where the author wants to place one or two female protagonists? I feel that there are some things that I don't need to get used to. As for other things, I just want to ask Kama Taj, won't he contact the wizarding society? So what kind of status does Kamal Taj have here? Why doesn't the wizarding society know about such a force? Or is it that the author hasn't thought about it yet? These are almost all the questions I have now. The author's writing style is relatively strong, but there are some loopholes in the arrangement of events and the relationship between the characters. It is not a poisonous point, but it will still feel uncomfortable for picky readers... I hope the author will continue to work hard.

Now that the world view is integrated, I am afraid that mutants have long been controlled by the Ministry of Magic and gathered in magic schools... With the existence of confusion spells, even so-called surveillance, or record checking of electronic equipment, it is almost meaningless to wizards... I am afraid that the world view should be developed to establish diplomatic relations between wizards and Asgard and other cosmic forces, and they no longer look down on the earth.

My head is buzzing. The author is setting his own settings? He said he was reborn at the beginning, but later said he just read the memories of the time travellers. Oh my god, you are soul fusion, not memory reading. How can an adult be fused with a child? Not to mention other decades of memories that can wash away his consciousness. Don't tell me about mutants. The soul has nothing to do with power. The X gene is set to consume physical strength. It is completely unreasonable, and the soul is even less unreasonable.

If your writing is not that good, don't write so much about the worldview. There are many better comics than you in writing about the reincarnation of a wizard.

Kneel down and lick Natasha? What's the use of this old woman?

I failed after one chapter, it was such a mess! Withdraw

The writing is good, the various jokes can be played well, and the connection between the two world views is also good, but the transition between scenes still seems a bit jerky. Also, is there a fan base?