Defeat All the Bosses in the World

As soon as I started editing, I knew it was imitation (projection from the heavens). If the author had some creativity, he would be able to copy the book so badly.

The protagonist is quite mentally retarded. If the talisman of life and death is displayed in front of the emperor, he won't want to come and control people? Aren't you afraid of you? Too brainless.

The plot jumps too much. It looks messy.

Can you recommend some worlds you want to visit, characters or monsters you want to challenge, and what they will drop

That story is a long story. It is said that the era of 5G is coming, an era of reshuffle of the Internet. The security guard at the door of the God of War's house accidentally understood a formula... But was unexpectedly discovered by his good-for-nothing son-in-law. The son-in-law turned into a billionaire and divorced his daughter. The security guard was so angry that he died in depression. Before he died, he told the God of War that he hoped someone would guard his tomb for three years. Three years later, the daughter who was supposed to be married by the God of War was suddenly annulled. The God of War was furious and tens of thousands of retired soldiers from China came. Unexpectedly, the plane crashed and the God of War and nine stewardesses were stranded on Huangdao. Ten years later, 49 people were found. After returning home, God of War's family fell into decline and his daughter was seriously ill. Faced with the high medical expenses, he silently turned on his mobile phone and dialed the number that he had not dialed for ten years... Uncle Da! It's me! Are you still recycling equipment? Right! The kind where ingots arrive instantly...

Flow-flowing writing, primary school student thoughts, mainland stallion writing, scumbag host, get out of here, it's really filthy to the eyes.

How long has the protagonist lived in his last life and he keeps swearing in the first few chapters? I felt like I was watching a 10-year-old kid travel through time! People like this promote Chinese culture Pfft hahahahaha, who do you want to laugh to death🤭

My writing power is limited, and your style looks like a projection from the heavens to me.

I hate Japanese comics. People who watch too many Japanese comics are always a little nervous and always say things they don't understand.

This is the ninth episode of "Romance of the Three Kingdoms". It tells the story of Lin Daiyu uprooting a weeping willow. Schwarzenegger refused to accept it and brought Li Yunlong's Italian cannon to knock down the Leifeng Pagoda. In desperation, Fahai and Pan Jinlian eloped to the moon. They met Cheng Yaojin on the way. Thanks to Yu Zecheng for saving him, he burst into tears. , Betrothed his sister Yang Guifei to him, and later gave birth to his son Nezha, splitting Huashan Mountain and letting go of the snake spirit. When Michael Jackson learned about this, he was shocked and posted a hero post, inviting Zhang Sanfeng and other masters to fight in a bloody battle at Hacksaw Ridge, and finally captured Zhang Zuolin alive and took the Titanic to the West. This show has grand scenes and excellent production. Don't miss it.

In fact, I really hate the kind of realm that I think I created by myself, which is like a good comparison. That kind of realm blindly fills in what-so-and-so, heart, liver, spleen, lungs and kidneys. This kind of realm means that most people need to accept it.

She is a Ritian, a younger sister, and has a middle school disease. She has no cultural accomplishment at all. She might as well be called a native, which is an embarrassment to the Chinese people.

To be honest, sitting through your three golden chapters is no different than trying to persuade them to quit. How many people will continue to read it? I think you'd better change it. Not many people will read the waste stream unless your writing is very good and attractive.

Swordsman, Linghu Chong has no inner strength, but he can be the best in the world with the Dugu Nine Swords. There is only one master level above, there are only two of them, Dongfang Bubai and Feng Qingyang! With your 500 years of internal strength, even if you just swipe it with an iron stick, you are the best in the world. Who can break through an internal body protection? Not to mention, your great martial arts skills! There is also Shaolin. With the exception of the sweeping monk, who else? There is no best monk in the world in Shaolin Temple. They rely on quantity. There is no top one, but there are more than one level in the major heads! Is there such an awesome eunuch in the palace? Even in a world where it is difficult to release internal strength, strong crossbows are enough. There is also Dongfang Invincible, the imperial court, that is the largest sect. If they want to practice martial arts, the same, there may not be top ones, and there may be few leaders. There are not many elders like that in major sects! The crowds are stacked against you. They are getting powerful crossbows, and there are troops beside them. Dongfang Bubai and Feng Qingyang can't even kill them all! Why, here you are, both a glutton and a monster! It's almost the same. Even if you are in trouble, you can just say it. You are just a proud man, as if you can stop ten thousand armies by yourself!

What I wrote is really rubbish.

The subject matter is quite creative, but the writing is so poor that I feel like a primary school student writing a running account.

It's really bad. The front is fine but the back is rubbish.

The writing style is limited and there is no sense of immersion at all

You have to listen when others scold you, but don't believe when others praise you.

Stallion's writing is rubbish and he's a eunuch!

After reading a few chapters, the logic is confusing, there is no outline at all, the word count is low, and as for the writing style. . . . . . Novice, no sense of substitution at all, too dry and too white