Saiyans in the Marvel Universe

The writing style is a bit different, but the plot is pretty good. The main reason is that I have only watched Marvel movies, and I am a little confused when you write more characters.

Kunlun is okay. The more I look at it, the more poisonous it becomes. I say goodbye.

After reading more than 40 chapters, the power cultivation system is even worse. Is there a cultivation system? I hope the author unifies the power system

If the Saiyans do not protect their genes to resist all enemies, you will find that the enemy will create a bunch of copies of themselves, or even restart time to copy your abilities.

I watched it well before I went to Ancient Yina, but the plot after that was too blunt. I knew it was going to be bad when I saw a robbery on a plane. The conflict with the X-Men was also very inexplicable. Finally, I suggest that the author use unified names. The American is called Gage, and he calls himself Li Ji. In reality, some people do have Chinese and English names, but this is a novel, so it is recommended to use unified names for easier reading.

1. The protagonist is not an inferior Saiyan. There is a reason for his low strength at first. The specific reason will be mentioned in the mid-term 2. The Howards did not die. The Winter Soldier caused a car accident and was beaten away by Cyclops, but the two still became vegetative due to the car accident and will be awakened later 3. Charles can distinguish mutants because of brain waves, Li Ji's brain waves He couldn't connect, so he could only regard Li Ji as a mutant based on some abnormalities. The reasons for the failure will be mentioned later 4. Whether the Saiyans lost their minds when they turned into giant apes was not mentioned in the original settings of Dragon Ball. It was only mentioned in the movie version and Dragon Ball GT. If the advanced warriors did not lose their minds when they turned into giant apes, then why did Broly lose his mind? I set it according to GT, and the Saiyan royal family will not lose their minds when they turn into giant apes 5. There are many more characters in this book than ordinary Marvel books, and the battles and conflicts will also increase. Some characters from Dragon Ball will also appear in the middle and later stages 6. The timeline will be slightly adjusted for the needs of the plot, and will not deviate from the overall main line of development That's all for now, thank you for reading my ramblings

To be honest, few Marvel movies that include China or mutants are popular.

The subject matter is good and the creativity is good 👍, but the writing style is not that good 😅. It is suitable for beginners, but old bookworms really can't stand it. The whole article is full of flow, and it still has that clattering feeling! 😅 Old bookworms can just abandon the book, I really can't stand it anymore 🙂

To be honest, there is a lot of nonsense about this dragon, which is incomprehensible and feels very watery to me. Personally, I think adding the Phoenix Force to the protagonist is very different from Dragon Ball. The protagonist or supporting characters of Dragon Ball all rely on constant fighting and training to break through themselves. The development of the potential of the Great Elder of Namek, Super Divine Water, and Old Kaioshin also stimulates one's own potential. Adding the Phoenix Force is a bit gimmicky. If it were the Hokage system, it wouldn't feel like this. Anyway, the Hokage system would like to put all kinds of eyeballs and blood on its body.

I feel that this book is really good. I basically couldn't let go of the American comics at the beginning. This book came in because of the Saiyans. In the end, except for the monkey at the beginning, there is nothing else. Basically, the people who came in wanted to see the Saiyans fighting Thanos and so on.

After reading Chapter 11, an adult was turned into a little brat by you, and I was speechless.

If you want to write, write well. It's written in such a nondescript manner. After reading the reviews, I don't want to fall into it at all. You are still an ordinary person. You just traveled through time and became Broly. Your combat power is more than ten points? It's already been said that Super Saiyans are here, but there's also a Saiyan revival system for King Vegeta? Vegeta is so awesome, what's the matter with the protagonist? They ignored parallel dimensions and traveled directly to other books. How awesome is that? And a female Kakarot? Laji You came to Qidian to make money and become famous? Or is it a waste of time and the last four are different? Like me, I either can't remember some things when I write them, or I don't have time, so I don't write them. Look at you guys, you are just talking about writing a book, why not do it by yourself**

Just to make a complaint, although the protagonist travels through time and becomes a baby, his soul is that of an adult, so he doesn't know what extra things he has on his body? Also, he turned into a Saiyan baby and had to wait until he turned into a gorilla to realize that he was a Saiyan. So many days have passed in between. Doesn't his butt hurt when he sleeps at night? You must know that although the protagonist has a baby's body, his soul is that of an adult. He also said that the protagonist is a Dragon Ball fan. What a fucking Dragon Ball fan.

There is no doubt that the combat power collapsed at the beginning. Dragon Ball has more than a hundred combat power and can smash the moon. No matter how low the combat power of a Saiyan baby is, it still has dozens of combat power. The protagonist's giant ape transformation has nothing. Farewell

It feels like the protagonist is developing in an inexplicable direction. If someone wants to cure Harry, you stop him. Peter goes to find danger on his own and you just watch from the side. Speaking of which, the protagonist doesn't regard Peter and Harry as friends at all. Did he really inherit the indifference of the Saiyans?

By the way, shouldn't the protagonist be a muscular brother when he grows up? The muscles all over your body are very intimidating, right? Why are there still plots like blackmail by gangsters?

After going to Kunlun, it became more and more rubbish. Can we also unify the names? In Marvel, we are still talking about Tenderloin all day long.

Go read the book Saiyans in Marvel. Look at what others have written. Saiyans are warlike and cruel from the very core. Otherwise, how could they be called a fighting nation? What you wrote is similar to what other fans wrote. You are a person with Saiyan blood, not a real Saiyan. The writing of Broly is really good.

A Saiyan also needs the power of Phoenix and Dragon, so what's the point of writing about Saiyans? It's too poisonous, so I have to persuade you to retreat 😅

What a mess, can you thoroughly understand the original work before writing a fanfic?

The logical deficiencies in some details can be ignored. The plot is simply too simple. The conflict with Tony and the bad relationship are not foreshadowed at all. If it is not good, it is not good. It is like a lunatic. The reason for fighting the X-Men is also nonsense. Would a good old guy like the professor be so suspicious? If you don't join, fight. This is Hydra, right? I don't know if this is a movie or a comic book world. If it's a movie world, the time doesn't match up. In the movie, Spider-Man is almost in the civil war when he is in high school, and it has been 7-8 years since Tony became Iron Man. However, at this time, you wrote that Tony has not yet become Iron Man. Is it true that the American imperial high school has a 10-year system? Let's just say it's a comic book world, and Gu Yi is not a bald woman either. Even if your world is integrated, will the subsequent development have to go through the plot from Iron Man to Avengers 4 within 1-2 years? After Avengers 4 ended, Spider-Man was still in high school for another year. And why did you join Snake and Shield out of nowhere? There are too many questions to answer. Farewell! !

I hate the main character who just messes around with the plot and doesn't do anything. I won't complain about the protagonist's fighting ability. Since the protagonist is a time traveler, why not invest in e-commerce, smartphones, search engines, instant messaging, Weibo, and payment platforms~? With these industries, let Stark Industries transform in advance and make steel armor early. Do we have to wait for Howard and Tony to have an accident? Since the protagonist is a top student, why doesn't he just go to the senior year of high school? In order to keep up with the plot, I sit with Spider-Man at the same table.

Haven't watched it yet! But after reading the comments, I have something to say: First, all time travel items in Dragon Ball can only span parallel universes... Second, the Dragon Ball system cannot be invincible in Marvel. The Celestials have appeared more than once as a background panel in the movie... Third, there are People who can truly cross the timeline... Fourth, if we write about the movie universe alone without adding the comic universe, we won't be able to write much... Fifth, there are omniscient and omnipotent guys in Marvel and DC, such as OAA, Jin Chao, omniscient Wolverine, Deadpool, Ancient One, and Bio. The Tribunal of Life, Death, etc. Most of the Marvel heroes who are powerful in the later stages or some special characters have the power of the rule type. From the beginning of Dragon Ball to the latest Super, no Saiyan has ever mastered the power of the rule type... Saiyans have always only had the power of the rule type. Powerful destructive power, and all power is based on Qi... Saiyans may be very strong, but they are not that exaggerated. Of course, this is the author's novel. You can write it however you want... Having said so much, I want to ask you whether the power system in this book you have read is balanced?