
The Power of Konoha's Fist
木叶之一拳之威
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.2M Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 5y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Originally, it was nothing like selling sheep's meat to others. After a hundred chapters, the more you write, the more rubbish you write. In order to advance the plot, you write more and more rubbish in a good novel, and it is also abusive. Goodbye and farewell.
The title of the book makes it sound like an invincible novel. I went in and saw the card drawing system to persuade others to quit. Then I drew Saitama, which made me feel a little guilty. Then I read TM with so many restrictions and said goodbye. See you, it's as weak as a chicken. If you want to watch the invincible stream, just leave as soon as possible.
The subject matter is okay, but the author is very poor at junior high school culture studies. Many sentences are not fluent. I haven't finished one chapter and I really can't stand it anymore. A piece of advice for everyone, enter with caution!
It's really the author's good fortune that this book didn't hit the streets! Let's not talk about the setting of One Punch Man's percentage power, let's take the matter of Uchiha Itachi's cleaning. The protagonist is sb! Ever since you made up your mind to protect the things you care about, how could you forget about this? In the end, even Uchiha Obito (incomplete body) couldn't beat him! It's not that the protagonist has to be invincible, but you have to at least be reasonable, right? ! With 30% of One Punch Man's strength, he can't even defeat Obito, an incomplete body? Are you going to take it out on Danzo in the end? (PS: Put the blame on Danzo. After all, didn't the protagonist seem to have forgotten to clean up the Uchiha?) It's so difficult to defeat Danzo. Are you angry that your girlfriend had her eyes gouged out? The anger is over = nothing happened = later transplantation turned over? Really, I would think it would be perfectly normal if the author were single. 😤😤😤😤
Chapter 5: Persuading to Resign😰😰😰
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There's a reason why it's not popular. It's full of nonsense. It's all word count. 1+1 Equals 2. It has to be factored. Why does 1+1 equal 2? I couldn't stand it after reading 30 chapters at double speed, so I gave up.
The single heroine is the highlight. If it is an emotional story, the author will give you full marks. The portrayal of the heroine is very good. It is rare that the novel heroine is not like a tool. She has flesh and blood and is worthy of encouragement. Then the plot is a bit bloody hahaha. The relationship between the partner is also very good. The story line is also very clear. My opinion is that it may not be suitable for the style of Qidian Hokage Shuangwen. Of course, for many people like me who read too much, it will be bright. Haha
He moved the corpse and then missed the night of genocide and Shisui was killed, and also had the eyes of the person he liked gouged out. Do you know how ridiculous this plot is, author? Just because you said that the protagonist's grandma is the most important person to him, and now he is about to die, and then he goes to fulfill her wish, knowing clearly that the lives of his brother and lover are in danger, yet he does such a slanderous operation. The lives of brothers and lovers. His grandmother didn't die immediately. Even if she died, it's not like she didn't know that the protagonist could help her fulfill her wish. Were you excited to watch Izumi scream when her eyes were gouged out? ? Was it fun watching Shisui die? Protecting others, in the end? Because of such a thing, he casually makes fun of the life of the person he wants to protect. Only this book can do such SB operations.
What percentage of Saitama's physique is worse than Xiao Li who took the Chunin Exam? Sonic Sonic 🈶 One percent of Saitama's power?
Saitama's ability is the body, including all aspects of body strength to defend against attacks, and the Eight Gate Dungeon only increases attack power and speed, but cannot improve his own physical strength at all. If the Eight Gates can increase the physical strength, there will be no side effect of overloading the body. Don't think Saitama is so weak, I I've only read Chapter 20. The percentage of 7.2 Is almost invincible, not to mention the rest. Saitama's improvement is not only physical strength, but also attack power and speed. In other words, Saitama has a permanent eight gates with no side effects. It also comes with super defense. Apart from being unable to fly, he is completely the standard configuration of Superman.
To be honest, I really don't understand why you authors always like to write slow and popular books with the title of Invincible Shuangwen. You are like this, and so is the Konoha Superman next door. So it's not without reason that you guys are on the street. Do you think the cool literary fans attracted by the title of Invincible Articles will read your upgrade stream? And still feel cheated. So some authors feel that we are doing you harm by not listening to any suggestions. The author can read the book reviews of Konoha Superman or Naruto Superman
If I traveled through the world of Naruto, I wouldn't be able to understand it without killing the Third Generation and Danzo. Is it the same as me?
The good Saitama template was defeated by a sudden ghost. Is the author serious about this setting?
Both are Hokage, but there is really a gap between the authors.
From the beginning of the high school entrance examination, I was all unhappy. The main character was described as brain-dead, but he didn't dare to kill the person in charge of the finish line, so he knocked the person in charge unconscious. In the Iwa ninja ANBU, he didn't say anything to his own people, and then he was knocked unconscious by his own people. If he had the ability, he would just kill him. Afterwards, he looked like a brain-dead second master.
There is too much rubbish, no, there are too many rubbish chapters. There is no point in wasting time and energy to write so many rubbish psychological activities and dialogues. Your poisonous point is that you can solve something in one sentence. You insist on using tens of thousands of words to describe it in seven or eight chapters. It is impossible to read it. Most of the people who say good things below are just bastards.
I haven't wanted to watch it since you started learning Rasengan. Aren't you in one-punch mode? Why do you do so many bells and whistles?
There are so many restrictions in the Invincible novel, then you write a Garp. Do you think you can write a Garp if Saitama is invincible for three years as normal? It's okay to practice it for more than ten years. But you have to give Saitama and then add so many restrictions. I'm really convinced. If I don't feel comfortable with this, I feel that the protagonist is in a restricted system. It's like he can't survive without the system.
Look what I found
It's really confusing to read, why Ryohei's psychological activities have so many words, several articles, too much nonsense, I can't stand it The character of the heroine is honestly very annoying. I think she is too pretentious. She will be mean to the protagonist all the time, and I can't seem to like the protagonist at all. There is a problem with the character setting. It is better to let Itachi be the heroine. At least she has a good personality, likes the protagonist and looks good. I hope the author can change it, it's too poisonous.
When I saw in the catalog, Orochimaru only defected when the night of the genocide was approaching, I knew that this was another piece of writing that was written randomly. It couldn't even sort out the basic timeline. How could it be possible to write a good plot? The various settings were probably written in randomness. I just don't know if the author had it. Take a good look at Naruto, and I feel sick when I see the protagonist kneeling and licking Uchiha Itachi. No matter how Uchiha Itachi clears his name, he can't escape the fact of his birth. The so-called disciple control is even more nonsense. With his strength, he can't live without leaving Konoha? Maybe some people will scold me for being ignorant, and there are a lot of excuses for kneeling down, but I would like to ask you, is it possible for you to kill your parents and relatives for one goal? If you do this, you are inferior to beasts. You can do it with the bushido spirit of the brat, so you are called beasts.
Awesome! I just read Chapter 5, and it overturned my concept of systematic writing! Traditional system texts are either directly invincible, or rely on system points to exchange corresponding skills to practice step by step, or they give you a template of a certain character and let you work hard to cultivate the skill system of this character. Although the routines are old, it is not bad to watch and kill time in your spare time. But the system of this book is really amazing👍🏻. It first gives you the invincible text template, and then tells you that you need to practice to unlock it. The important thing is the restrictions! 0.02 At a time, and it can only be completed once a day (whether the protagonist can complete it is another matter). Is this telling us that we should wait for work in cultivation? By the way, you have already cheated the system and you still have some restrictions? Can you be serious? (The physical education teacher was pleased with your calculation ability and pressed the math teacher's coffin.) There is a bottleneck in template cultivation, and I can understand it. Just like in some DNF templates, awakening and awakening are all about breaking through the self and reaching a higher realm. And you just use fragments to break through the bottleneck, are you serious? The fragments are spicy🐮🍺, what are you doing with these pieces? Recharge money and draw cards! Oh, yes, I don't think I've ever seen the entrance to the money-charging lottery. There are still some flaws that I haven't mentioned, really🐮🍺! This is the most baffling book I have read out of so many system articles. The invincible system flow has to impose seven, seven or eighty-eight restrictions, making it the same as the waste wood rising flow. Is the waste wood rising flow more enjoyable than this? You can either start with no restrictions, create a template for early transition, and then upgrade to advanced templates later, or you can just become invincible. What are you doing with restrictions? Slip away, I can't stand it anymore. I feel really uncomfortable if I don't complain 🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶 🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶 🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶 🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶 🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶 🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶
He has the Saitama template and has been apprenticed to three generations of chickens. It feels like a failure. And the protagonist knows who the third generation is. Also, I've been bragging about being a genius before, so don't you feel a little embarrassed when you write too much?
If you want to warm up slowly, don't mess with that NB thing. It's not worthy.
He even became friends with Itachi Uchiha, who killed his father and mother. . . . The author has a really big heart, and so does the protagonist. . .
The most disgusting thing is that he has been apprenticed to him for three generations
If you are invincible, you are invincible, but you also have to suppress experience points. If you can't control it, don't write this.
Don't write a book, go to an elementary school! 🙂
What I admire the most is that the protagonists who travel through time in anime can understand Japanese from birth! Travel to the world of martial arts and pick up secret books to practice martial arts
What is the difference between the two