My Tokyo Ghost Story

What the previous author wrote is very wonderful and great, it is true. But starting from the appearance of the silver-haired girl, it felt like something was wrong, and it turned into a harem + stallion type urban romance novel... ┐(´-｀)┌

Your name is Shirakawa Haru? Have you ever heard of Kitagawa Gogami? It's the Gogami Kitagawa Gogami.

Oh my god! You... How dare you believe I read pornographic articles at Qidian!

Let me share some of my opinions. I just read about chapter 260, where Ferris Wheel confesses his love, and I feel that the problem is really big. First of all, the protagonist and Hao Er have known each other for a long time, but it was always just a friendship before. It didn't take long to find out that Hao Er was a girl, and they didn't have much contact during that period. However, within a few chapters, he came and I wanted them all. Is this just a matter of lusting after someone else's body? The harem plot has been expected for a long time, but I originally thought that there would be a period of excessive emotions, such as Shenyin Qingmei, and then focus on cultivating a relationship with Koji. Emotional drama has always been a flaw in many novels, but this flaw is too big.

Emmm, the author is great. I have read the first dozens of chapters and my impression is a bit bad. Personally, I think there are two major flaws: forcing the character to be sold (for example, from time to time saying what the protagonist will be like if he doesn't meet him, but what if he does meet him), and forcing comparison with other people's practices (for example, when encountering an event, what will happen to others, and what will happen to you). It doesn't matter if you mention it once or twice, but if you mention it from time to time, it will affect the perception. I don't know about others. As for me, I prefer to explore the protagonist's personality myself. If you think this behavior needs to be written, you can write it in other ways (such as dialogue). If you say it directly, it won't feel that way. If you don't have any ideas, you can refer to the popular "My Senior Brother is Too Steady". Of course, the novels written by you, the author, are quite good, but I still hope you can make changes.

I think you should let Selena recognize the reality and just use this method once or twice. She will get tired of it if she keeps doing it.

Keep up the good work and look forward to the future🤗<(￣￣)/

Come on, come on, I like the author's book very much

It's very well written, please support it

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Why do you write so many female characters? Is this a weird novel? I don't understand what you want to write, and the more you read, the more confused you become! There are so many women... Just because you have to write a plot, why do you write so many women? Men can't have plots? Still a childhood sweetheart, a schoolmate, a host, and a flower gardener.

It makes me so annoyed. The heroine obviously likes the hero so much, but the stupid hero doesn't show any signs of it.       ，，…………       ，，，:                        ————

Your introduction reminds me of a program called Hachishaha Chapter Happy Patrol, which is a work in the Urban Ghost Story series. This work perfectly expresses the relationship between humans and monsters from acquaintance to mutual understanding and love. Unfortunately, the male protagonist had to leave due to the obstruction of his family. In the end, the scene where the male protagonist watched the female protagonist chase the car while crying and begging was really touching! But which male protagonist who grew up ten years later met a similar woman on a rainy night? It seemed to be the female protagonist ten years later! It is estimated that there will be an unforgettable night 🤭 Fate is so wonderful!

I know about the eight-foot girl. I saw it on a video with a little boy.

? ? ? I remember that Cthulhu and Foundation fans had an agreement not to write them together, right?

It's pretty good, but I don't know why the more I watch it, the more boring it becomes, and it feels as unappealing as a chronicle. The most important thing is that it is not scary, even if it does not give readers a sense of weirdness. This is a romance novel that is not about the topic. I am really disappointed 9 out of 10 people who came to the evil god novel. The evil god element in the first 80 chapters is just to connect with the female characters. I won't talk about it later if I don't know.

Mr. Hachisha😃😃😃Forgive me for thinking of something not very good.

Can you answer me, why do you have to write so many women for the plot? If you look at the supporting cast, there is not a single male character. NB! Just write all about mating later.

MMP, I shouldn't believe that there is such a thing as a single female protagonist in Qidian's urban light novels

Oh oh oh oh oh

How come a good single female protagonist turned into a harem story? But to be honest... It's so fragrant The single heroine is good, and the harem is also good... Actually, the main thing is the portrayal of the characters. As long as the characters can be well portrayed, I can actually accept it! As long as it's not the kind of meeting one after another, that's really disgusting.

The biggest flaw of this book is that there are too many female characters. The biggest characteristic of the old days is that it is unknown. The main plot is forced to be written as a love novel and turned into a Shura field. It could be renamed "The Tokyo Love Story of the Old Gods"

Seeing the eight-foot-old girl reminds me of some indescribable images. Is there no hope for me?

When I saw the eight-foot-tall girl, I thought of the country woman wearing a straw hat and a white skirt 😏

The author is too keen on writing emotional dramas, and his writing is not very good. The plot is about the resurrection of an ancient god, and then the characters are exciting. There should be less emotional dramas and more mysterious things. I feel like it is a bit broken now.

Heehee

Good guy, there are so many female characters, are you hungry for literature?

How about 🙂

The writing is a bit poor, (￣ー￣)