Marvel's Heart of Valoran

Personally, I feel that this book suffers from a common problem among most Marvel writers, that is, I don't know much about the backgrounds and personalities of Marvel's characters, large and small, which leads to the description of the characters' actions not being appropriate enough. The words used in the book are too inconsistent with the behavior, location, and situation. It just blindly sticks to the single most conspicuous feature given by the movie, and the writing is not very good. In the final analysis, the writing details are not very good, that is, I cannot write a story that fits the original characters, and I cannot make the background and behavior of the characters I write convincing, resulting in a low sense of substitution. Among the many Marvel and Alliance articles, it can only be regarded as quite satisfactory, which is really useless (no derogatory meaning, purely descriptive). I hope the author can improve his writing skills or write character biographies. At least the Marvel characters in the main and supporting roles must be in line with Marvel. This will give people a sense of familiarity or familiarity. Now it seems a bit nondescript, and I feel like I wanted to write it but didn't.

Please update quickly, it's totally not enough.

The profile says that character is guaranteed. The result is too cheap.

It hasn't been updated yet, look! This is a recommendation vote! ! ! Tear! ! ! There is none left! ! !

This book suddenly disappeared. Am I stuck?

What happened? Did you get a 404?

What happened? More updates?

What happened? All chapters were deleted?

Like this book, the story is novel and the writing is okay, but the writing is very confusing, mainly because some settings are really hard to accept.

Write it for yourself. . . . . .

Old version background, plot cerebral palsy, withdrawn

How about becoming a demon swordsman?

Thinking about it, I still think it's poisonous. There are two strange poisonous points in the beginning Where does the strange idea of continuing takeout come from? The straight line between two points is the shortest. This system is only used by express logistics across large regions. And in the simplest terms, this system is bound to happen (who has a double delivery person? Why do I have to run more and he runs less? If there is an accident, will the other one also deduct wages? I got the wrong takeout at the wrong place, and the veteran is unwilling to take the newbie's order), and the probability of occurrence will be very high, because the express delivery company can blame the blame every day and say that the car did not come, it is none of my business. . . If you think about it, you will know that this kind of positive effect is almost non-existent, and a strange thing with overflowing negative effects is so weird The other is how to calculate energy. If you want to talk about the mystery, the thing on the chest is hairy and mysterious. If you want to talk about the material, no one can get out after eating a ton of vibranium. . . If you want to talk about pure energy, one ton. If you put the original work in exchange for the combined energy of thousands of Stark chest gadgets, I don't believe that Tony would not exchange it. He would make a huge energy source and exchange it for a ton of vibranium ore. According to the original work, he would be willing to do anything (especially the vibranium in the original work is not much and is very expensive).

I wonder if the dragon girl was transformed into a dragon by magic. When writing a fanfic, at least respect the original background story.