Marvel's Deadly Guardian

For me personally, there are quite a few poisonous points 1. The protagonist is aboriginal 2. Being a dog for S. H. I. E. L. D. 3. An emotional drama comparable to a romance 4. Possible misunderstandings about contemporary Chinese people First of all, I would like to remind those who have not started watching it yet. Although the introduction says about traveling through parallel worlds, the protagonist actually has no idea about the plot, only knows a few names of people, and cannot recognize them in person. In other words, the protagonist is actually no different from an indigenous person. Furthermore, maybe I'm overthinking it. The author writes that the protagonist is a Chinese-American, and he always emphasizes that he is very patriotic, but I don't know why he has to write it as an American. Moreover, the parents who complained about China before thought that their children would be useless if they don't go to college, and they like the American way of education. The protagonist arrived in the imperial capital, and Hawkeye protected the protagonist. The author may just want to create a funny effect. Hawkeye changed rmb, and asked two Chinese people, one girl, Hawkeye called Miss, and the girl directly responded: Who are you calling Miss? Your whole family is young and you left cursing. Ask the uncle. The uncle thought he was a liar and called the police to have Hawkeye arrested. To sum up, the author says he is patriotic, but I don't know how many years it has been since you returned to the country and which era of the motherland you are writing about. Then the protagonist joined S. H. I. E. L. D. And worked part-time to study the Rubik's Cube. Then, because he was afraid that the protagonist would be in danger, he had to put the protagonist under house arrest and not let him go out. Then, the protagonist was tortured for a long time before being put under house arrest. The original text said "This is because Hill is familiar with me, so I dare to commit suicide." wtf? Did you sell yourself to SHIELD? And the protagonist's values ​​​​are: pay as much as you get. So, you get the venom, you pay for it, your nutrients are sucked, your organs are damaged, you can't separate, you have no privacy. This is what you paid for. What does this have to do with your Holy Mother's desire to save people? Of course, the Holy Mother is a complimentary word, and I don't hate the Holy Mother either. It's better than the protagonist whose three views are wrong, but the reason for saving people is too far-fetched. If you have the ability to save people, if you want to save them, just save them. It's so normal. As for the emotional drama, I'm also convinced. Am I here to read romance novels? When I read a Marvel fanfic, you want to torture me? Neuropathy? What you wrote is messy, don't write it if you can't write emotional scenes, and you complained to yourself: Who said that if the protagonist of the novel confesses, it will definitely succeed Do you know why? Because other authors know what most people want to see, did you write this sadistic-looking triangle scene to express authenticity? This is a novel, so authenticity must give way to readability, okay? I want to watch abuse, why don't I watch romance? Childhood sweetheart likes the protagonist, but the protagonist rejects her confession. The protagonist likes Wanda, but confesses to her, but is rejected by Wanda. Then the heroine on the label is Mela. Is this really reality? How about we stop traveling through time? This is more realistic

Lightning protection! Lightning protection! Lightning protection! Say important things three times! This novel setting! The male protagonist is a time traveler who doesn't know about Marvel!

The greater the hope, the greater the disappointment. The first twenty or thirty chapters are so wonderful, but the next one or two hundred chapters are so bad. Personally, I quite like Catherine. After all, there are many girls who are this open-minded. But it would be too stupid to suddenly reveal Venom's identity and suddenly enter the DC copy of Aquaman and fall in love with Mera easily. Looking at Marvel, DC suddenly appeared, and the heroine suddenly became Mera... If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, please write as little as possible, just downplay it. It's a pity that this book starts with fairy grass.

Overall it's pretty good, but there is one drawback. A person I met during the summer vacation more than ten years ago met the protagonist and lived in his house without telling him (they had no relationship) and lived and drank for free for a year. He also tried to undermine the protagonist from time to time and always did unnecessary things. In short, he is a person without tutor. Except for the characterization of this character, which is a bit annoying, the plot and writing are both good.

Traveling across the world, he is possessed by venom and enters Marvel. The protagonist was born in the third dimension but does not understand the Marvel plot. The author has incorporated a lot of original plots that are very interesting. The emotional scenes are not very prominent, but the interaction with Marvel heroes is also great. The writing style is a bit rusty, and the control of the plot in the early stage is a bit strong and the writing style is poor in the middle stage. The setting of the Chinese protagonist is very immersive, but the character description is not good, so there are often debates about the strength or character of the heroes in the comment area. The author has a big world view, and readers who have obsessive-compulsive disorder about Marvel character settings can retreat, but after all, they are biological children, so the protagonist must be a bug, and he can tolerate it as a poisonous point. All in all, I read the fanfic with the mentality of seeing what kind of sparks the friction between the Venom universe and the main universe will create. The main plot is well written and everyone can accept it. I look forward to the follow-up plot. I recommend a wave of Marvel fanfiction that is worth reading.

Ahem. Judging from what the author has written now, the protagonist will definitely become the evil god. After all, the fake heroine was killed, and the real heroine Venom was also asleep and was killed by the Aegis.

In one of the comics in Avengers: Endgame, Thanos used five infinity stones to imprison all the gods and turned himself into a god. As a result, the protagonist is like a buff and is very weak. Ask the author for answers

I don't know if it's because of the tricky taste, or because the author's wisdom-reducing method influenced me. . Generally speaking, there should not be too many inconsistencies in the writing. . I feel like what several people have written. . Anyway, after reading Chapter 74, I chose Yo-Yo. Maybe it's because I've read too many more serious American comics. If I had come across this book two years ago, I would have been very happy and decided to subscribe. I hope this book gets better and better. Yo-yo.

It's quite disappointing. I didn't want to watch the part about traveling through time to Bay King.

So what I am thinking is, can the protagonist use the space gem to control the energy tunnel (the power gem can connect many universes, the theory is infinite energy, not just one), travel to other parallel universes, and write.

I beg the author to find a chance to fully merge Ronnie and Venom later.

In fact, you can find a doctor? He developed a medicine, a dp The power of a million suns, Sentinel. Invincible.

Completely dissuaded by this chapter

Come on, author. It seems that there are no big problems in general. The writing is also okay. It would be nice if the character's image and personality could be more perfect. A good three-dimensional sense of the character can cover up many shortcomings of other stores. Just like "The Count of Monte Cristo", it is a very old-fashioned revenge story, but the characters feel very three-dimensional and real, so it is a big seller. Come on, I am a rare Venom fan, I still like this kind of painting style that is slightly biased towards lawful kindness.

Let's talk about it: Catherine pursues the male protagonist, the male protagonist pursues Wanda, and Wanda rejects the male protagonist. Then some people didn't like Catherine, so the author wrote her off. Childhood sweetheart, she has a lot of scenes in over 100 chapters, and then she will die if she wants to, pig's feet, if you don't like her, why don't you just keep her corpse? If you have time to call and send text messages to Wanda, why don't you have the time to keep her corpse? Didn't you say you treat her as your sister? And then after he died, his body was taken by Hydra and used to make a weapon against the protagonist? Is this considered whipping a corpse? Wanda, how many times have you met, and how long have you known her, and why do you like her so much? Maybe the root reason is that Naoko is older, and Catherine can't afford A? I can't stand it anymore. People behind me should consider their poison resistance 🙏

Come on, this is a very good Venom fanfic. I hope the plot is deeper and has some foreshadowing. Overall, the characterization is pretty good, not toxic.

What's the use of Catherine in the book besides making people angry?

Because you watched Aquaman and particularly liked the heroine of Aquaman, you forced yourself to visit Aquaman? ? Are you going to watch Journey to the West in two days and write about a group of four?

Can I ask if Mera is the one in Aquaman? She is also the author's original heroine. If it was from Aquaman, would it be written about DC?

Maybe my personal aesthetics are different. After I found out that Captain America lived next door to the protagonist and didn't know the protagonist, I immediately didn't want to read it. Why did I read Marvel fan fiction? It's not because I like the feeling that the protagonist knows everything. . . . . . Personal aesthetics are different. I don't like this feeling.

It's a rare Venom novel. The first few chapters are amazing. Unfortunately, your expectations are dampened by your annoying female characters in just a few chapters. I admire you too.

Bad review, insisting on pretending not to know about Marvel, it feels very bad and rubbish 😤😤😤

Isn't it too fake? As a god, with the power of three infinite stones, he can't defeat the normal Thanos?

I think killing the Winter Soldier is a bit poisonous. I originally thought that after being controlled by Loki to kill people, the protagonist would feel the feeling of the Winter Soldier being a puppet killing people, so he would not kill the Winter Soldier. In addition, Catherine also became the Winter Soldier, but I didn't expect to kill the Winter Soldier anyway. This gave me the feeling that the protagonist is very powerful, and he is a genius. It is very important. Everyone will forgive him if he kills someone, Kai Celine is the childhood sweetheart of the main character, who has to be killed in the background, and the Winter Soldier has a small role that is dispensable. There is only one Captain America in the background, so the debt must be paid with blood. The protagonist has to kill him, and Tony has to kill him. That is to say, if the protagonist is controlled, he can kill, but if the Winter Soldier is controlled, he cannot kill. Typically, only state officials are allowed to set fires, and ordinary people are not allowed to light lamps. This place makes me annoyed.

I don't know why, but when I see the protagonist in the Marvel world, no one knows who he is, and I don't know the plot, I can't watch it. . .

This chapter 404 is over... Wonderful choice! Do you just want to be 404? 🐶🐶🐶🐶🐶

It was pretty good when I read it earlier, and I understand Catherine's life-and-death situation, but the one who annihilated his clan at the slightest disagreement was really uncomfortable. He was no longer a human being, and he was not one of my own kind. His heart must be different. The plot development felt particularly blunt.

Summary: The author's book is useless 🙂 Well, come on 🥱

Just to complain, I just came to Chapter 6, where my childhood friend Catherine was added inexplicably. Too embarrassing.

I can't stand it anymore. The start was very bright. Behind the scenes, Stark's portrayal of Captain America was too poor. Very pure white text. It's not a problem if the female characters are poorly written, but as a fanfic, the characteristics of the basic original characters must be shown (just like the Venom portrayed by the author). By the way, I would like to complain about those ** who always say "if you don't watch, get out". This book is called Mom and Dad. I can't comment yet?