My Starcraft System

Self-pleasure text wearing the name of StarCraft

I remember reading Blizzard literature before. The fanatics themselves can form psychic double blades, and the rings on their hands are used to concentrate psychic energy to strengthen the psychic double blades. Therefore, ghost soldiers and fanaticism should not be at the same level. Moreover, the spiritual power gap between the protoss is still huge. Fenix ​​is ​​too strong, so Blizzard's settings are definitely different from what the boss thought.

"Excuse me, does this gentleman need a female companion?" In front of the elevator, the mother of dragons in a V-neck dress stood as graceful as a delicate rose. "Me?" Qian Xu looked to the left, and there was only an elevator boy holding a towel. On the right, the pouring girl is holding a teapot. I can only say doubtfully "Could it be... Is there anyone else here?" Dragon Mother covered her mouth and smiled sweetly, with an indescribable charm. "Of course, it's always refreshing to be in the company of a beautiful woman." Qian Xu tried hard to look away from the indescribable beating. His brain said he had received it, but his eyes were saying wait... "Introducing myself, my name is Valrhona Schlover Nidhogg Loki Jormungand. People who know me well call me Dragon Mother." Not paying attention to Qian Xu's gaze, the young woman Dragon Mother said softly, and at the same time handed her hand to Qian Xu. Qian Daguan's eyes lit up, he grabbed the white and tender little hand, and at the same time replied "I understand, Sister Fa." The Dragon Mother widened her watery, gem-like eyes, and the jaws of those around her who were paying attention dropped to the ground. "You are very interesting." Dragon Mother came back to her senses and said with a sweet smile. There was a different look in his eyes "I like beautiful women." Qian Xu answered the question incorrectly "With unintelligent men." The Dragon Mother's eyes narrowed again, and she looked at the strange faces around her. "You... Are very interesting." Disdain, gloating, frowning, beaming... Collecting these expressions in her eyes, the Dragon Mother repeated again excerpt

What the hell is this author writing? I can't even understand it.

The subject matter is good. I tolerated the flirty stuff at the beginning, but after a dozen chapters I started to get confused. I gritted my teeth and read hundreds of chapters. I finally realized that it wasn't my ability to understand that had become worse, but it was the author who was overly flattering himself. The details are not explained, the scene transitions are not divided, and the number of words in the subtitles makes me personally feel that the content is very confusing and inconsistent. I saw that greed was awake, but I didn't look back. A BUG that will have a major impact on the future appeared, and Kerrigan did not appear. As a reward for the second Dead Apostle custom mode, the main characters Old Gentleman and Old Betty appeared among the thousand people in the campaign, but Kerrigan in human form was forgotten by the author. I guess the author got too carried away and forgot about it, and I was persuaded to quit. Come on, I hope the author's next book will be better.

I read the introduction. I am a self-motivated author, so I don't need to read the content.

Change your profile, this one is too discouraging 😭

I think I have read a lot of StarCraft articles. Although I have never played the game, I know some of the nicknames. Who can tell me that the cross in the first one is a hairy one🤔🤔🤔🤔

It is not easy to maintain this result to this word count. Regardless of good or bad, perseverance is a kind of victory in itself. Take a rest and summarize and improve. There will be opportunities in the future.

It's so tiring to watch. The male protagonist is too naughty and the funny elements are forced into it. I didn't find it funny. It's too tiring to watch for non-StarCraft players. By the way, the protoss don't have the mouth to express their feelings and use Kara to teleport. I guess I can't feel the "humor" of the male protagonist.

Let's not talk about ideas. D(ŐдŐ๑) In one sentence, your writing skills are completely insufficient to support the expression of your meaning. The expression is confusing, the sentences are inappropriate, and the words do not convey the meaning. If you really want to write a book, you should first receive some standardized writing training.

The book reviews written by everyone are more fluent than your novels. Man, go take a composition class in junior high school.

It's interesting to make the protagonists a bit funny, but you have to keep your priorities straight. If it's too funny, it's disgusting. I'm sorry, I really can't stand it and I want to say something. I hope the author will take a look at it himself.

Come to a place with interstellar readers and recommend your own book "Commander's Journey to Infinite Work"

I want to say: the introduction is better than the main text

Um, I don't know what I wrote, it seemed like I was talking to myself, and I wrote something that only the author himself can understand

I'm confused by what I wrote.

Having written so much before, I thought I was a veteran and could read a good novel. After reading 3 chapters, I was just in self-pleasure mode.

I can't stand a single chapter 😓

I read Chapter 2-3 and it's all a mess.

What is important is the joy of writing. Although the writing is not good, the spirit is worthy of praise. Just watch it as a comedy.

The third piece of advice to quit is a complete piece of writing!

A newbie is posting a book, please follow me! Interstellar Invasion: Starting from the Insect Egg I have come to the short site, please collect it and read it, please leave a comment!

Oh my God, the Archbishop mustered an army, it was incredible.

I listen to books, and after ten minutes of listening I was so bored that I didn't know what I was listening to!

After reading ten chapters, I didn't understand what was being said. Unfortunately, I gave up.

What are you writing about?😒

Seeing how bloody the beginning was, I stopped watching the rest for fear of being poisoned.