Almighty Elf Trainer

Hezhong NO.1, Hezhong is the best in the competition, and the peak competition is the best!

Jiangjiang left little footprints here. By the way, she moved a small bench and sat down. She brought her own small cakes, melon seeds, and spicy strips to watch the big book~

Sure enough, he is an "all-powerful" trainer, with a training level of 3, an "all-powerful" (emotional line) of 7, and a lot of girlfriends. Ash's harem is not as experienced as you, and he doesn't agree with each other in bed scenes. Where did you throw the elves? Gardevoir is not dead yet!

What you wrote is really boring. Some friends who like to read will probably feel very anxious when they have time but no books to read. However, reading your book made my already anxious mood feel more unworthy.

After reading the whole process so far, I feel that this is a story about the dark reality of elves that abuses a scumbag man in the skin of elf training. Life is very tiring, and it becomes even more tiring after reading it. The early stage is mainly black and white, and the later part integrates FGO mode. The process is a bit confusing, and there are various skipping levels. Let's not talk about the writing style. After all, I am a newbie. In terms of the script development process, I'm sorry, I can't explain the bad feeling. I ask the author to sort out the script writing process next time. In addition, if you want to write a dark novel or a realistic novel, please express it in the title or summary. After all, reading novels is just to change your mood, right? I'm not a lover of dark literature.

This is no longer a matter of leveling up quickly, but of wanting to become fat in one go. Since you want to write an invincible novel, don't cause trouble for the protagonist. If you want to make trouble, you should reach a high level all at once. To be honest, if Goldfinger is directly given to champion-level elves, is there a second time? Now that you are reborn, you can grab your favorite elves and adventure around. Although Pokémon has darkness, it is a beautiful world.

Damn it, he always has the strength of a king or a champion. The senior members of the Rockets are all champions. So isn't the big boss a world-destroying level?

After 84 photos, Gardevoir disappeared out of thin air. When will Gardevoir come out? I am a Gardevoir fan.

Now that the past wife has come out, let's continue writing like this, otherwise it will be very uncomfortable to dig a hole and not fill it. Personal opinion

I don't think you should use levels to indicate elf strength

Speechless, all are confessions, and there are too few direct dialogue exchanges between the characters.

The level up is too fast, be careful to die suddenly 🤭 Come on Others are pretty good. Support!

The writing is a bit tender, a bit like a running account, and it's still a matter of details. Don't try to describe the whole story deliberately, but try to write it as naturally as possible. In fact, it doesn't feel immersive when I read it now. This is a problem. Write it slowly. You will get better with more practice. Come on.

You can read this version in the elf text, which is better written, and read other people's thoughts, battles, plots, etc. Darkness Rises, Court Tree, Elf Leader, Legendary Trainer, and Above the Mountain are all for reference and study. You need to work harder to practice writing a book for the first time!

I've always seen Nobunaga's ambitions, and it always gave me the feeling that the power system was out of whack, and then the map was constantly changed, and stronger enemies appeared. And how do you describe the feeling of the protagonist? Let's not talk about the peak of Iba Ku. According to your system, levels 1-100 are the first level. You already have level 7 mythical beasts. You are still afraid of being hurt by others and don't dare to expose the people around you. I really can't understand it when the strongest opponent is not even level 100, okay? Then an enemy of the same level immediately appears and fights to the end and dies with him. Then the soul encounters the alpaca and learns that there is a stronger civilization ready to invade, and then changes the map to collect slates for the alpaca... To sum up, the protagonist is clearly at the top but has been cowardly. He has just gained several dimensions of strength that exceeds the highest combat power of the first, but within three seconds, there will always be an opponent who will blow him up or die together, and continue to change maps to cowardly.

Very well written, please update quickly

What the hell is Qianmowei's name?😅

You, the author, think the book is not good, so why not be direct? The eunuch keeps writing. Isn't this a waste of time? And you also said that you might not publish any new books.