Infinite Universe Stars

The subject matter is novel, the description is delicate, the characters are vividly depicted, showing the characters' subjective consciousness, overall: very good!

First time writing a book! ! Because I thought writing a book was too easy! ! Many places were not carefully conceived! Just write whatever you want! In the end, after digging huge pits, I got myself into them! ! I used to look at a lot of god-making works on the list! ! There are a lot of complaints in there! ! The storyline is awkward, the protagonist pretends to be 13 and sweeps everything away! ! ! …………(I have omitted tens of millions of words above because I am afraid of being sprayed to death by fans of those books!!) As a result, reality hit me and told me again and again that writing a book is not as simple as I imagined! ! ! Thank you for your support! Thank you for your attention! If you are interested in novels of this system! ! I suggest you read the following book! ! Although I am very reluctant! ! ! But this book is a hit on the street, and it will be a hit on the street after all! ! I will learn my lesson seriously next time! ! Reflect on your own mistakes! ! Inspiring new pictures! !

Come visit friends, with sincerity and respect. I hope we can pay attention to each other, support each other, and rise together 🔥

Are you keeping a diary or writing a short story? You should at least write down to 2,000. Is it interesting to write down to a few thousand? , Although it seems like a lot when you write the table of contents like this, but if you want to go further, starting with 2,000 chapters is the most basic! And don't let your readers down, they don't come to read the diary, they come to read the novel.

There's no plot, so I can't watch it. Alas, I still watch the Xianxia type.

We in Dongchang need talents like you.

I came to support you. I didn't expect to finish the book. Come on, thank you for reading the chapter reviews carefully. Source system.

I think it's pretty good. The writing is smooth and gorgeous. It's much better than other novices.

Not bad, I'll send you a recommendation ticket. I hope you'll visit again~

Come on, come on, is this science fiction or time travel?

Just support one, place a small advertisement, and the world will be filled with treasures. A different game fantasy world. When everyone in the world you are familiar with becomes NPC, what will you do? So is such a world false or real? Zhou Ran: "Look, they are all the protagonists of the world, and they all have their own golden fingers. Then there is no other way but to kill them all."

Don't stop updating. Decisively collect it. Come on.

What's wrong. ? Say goodbye?

The work has been collected, please keep it up, keep it up, keep it up, the writing is online, the picture is very strong, please return to collect the book "The Legend of Heroes"

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I won't talk about plot writing. What makes me most uncomfortable is that the author doesn't seem to take punctuation seriously. Look at your wedge. Almost every paragraph is followed by an exclamation mark. Too many exclamation marks actually affect reading. But the author doesn't write books anymore, so it's useless to talk about it now, so let's leave it like that.

Come and take a look, I hope I can be attracted, but I am also a qualified old bookworm, so the author needs to do his best!