Lord of the Heavens Group

Generally speaking, this chat group book is okay. It can be said that it is a bit funny. Lu Shu's venomous tongue and the coquettishness of Xu Que and others tend to be funny. Reading reviews say that most of the protagonists in this book are darker, which Xiao Shitou can understand. Lu Shu's negative emotional system makes Lu Shu never return to the road of venomous tongue. Looking carefully, it seems that the protagonist has really not darkened a lot. Xiao Yan's time in Yunlan Sect was purely an accident. It was a problem in the field of Qi and blood, and he attacked indiscriminately. However, I was a little surprised that Nalan Yanran survived. It is understandable if you think about it carefully. After all, Xiao Yan is the destined son of the protagonist of Dou Po, so he needs to be under pressure. Nalan Yan should still appear again later. After all, isn't that how it is written in novels? To be honest, I have only finished watching Perfect World among the characters in the chat group, and only a little bit of the others.

Take a bite of shit secretly, this book is not popular anyway.

The author, Xu Kun, was also included in the group, and his background was (the kind of urban star being raped by his girlfriend?)

Please leave negative comments here, ding—— Otherwise I will delete the post, I really will! (Heartless)

The little lolita version of Tiny Dot! !

Will there be Emperor Bei Feng in the following group 🙂

Get away from the trolls. Everyone has their own preferences. Don't worry about the author. If you have the ability, why bother writing about it? Damn it, you have no ability. Stop beeping.

The cute little loli is online! !

You read that right! This is little one! ! !

The author's naming skills are excellent, and the nicknames of the group members contribute half of the credit to the entire novel 👍👍👍

The writing is smooth and improved compared with previous works. The writing style is relatively relaxed and has the author's consistent style. In terms of plot, there are no logical shortcomings, but there is one problem that needs to be mentioned. The description of the characters in the plot needs to be worked hard. For those who are more familiar with the original work, some of the characters may have collapsed. If the author can keep the characters from collapsing in the early stage of the work, and can reasonably adjust the characters to suit the plot in the later stage, it will be a good guide. Of course, this is only a personal opinion, and some people may not care about this. In terms of plot advancement, I hope the author can make a reasonable decision and not change the map too early and too quickly. Last point, what I want to say is what I think is a loophole in this work, which is the first privilege of the group leader. In the original text, there are these words "no matter who it is", no matter who it is? So can I consider the protagonist invincible? As long as privilege one and privilege three (perhaps four?) Cooperate with each other, the protagonist can use this to show off everywhere, eliciting a fatal blow from the enemy, and the system will instantly wipe it out. The protagonist can smile indifferently and show off invisibly. So, does the next training or task still have meaning? I don't know whether the author did it intentionally or unintentionally, but please handle it properly, although I think this kind of plot is more interesting (๑‾ ꇴ ‾๑) (Attachment: The protagonist uses privileges one and three to intimidate all parties, establish an organization, become super fast, and change the map in twenty chapters) The above is just my humble opinion, and I do not expect the author to adopt it in full.

This book is interesting and has a great range of power. I look forward to the author continuing to write it.

It's really embarrassing that I, who was educated in elementary school, can't read an online novel.

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Being Lu Shu's early friend would make you mad to death

Recommended by book friends, collect it and read it!

You can write if you want. Because you won't write if others don't subscribe, then what else are you going to write? It's definitely someone else's business. If you say that the subscription is low and you don't write about it, it's simply a no-no.

......... It's actually quite poisonous, but the chat group is like this, so it's still watchable

The name of the treasure technique is so ugly, the division of the realm of the minor master and the great master is so crude, and the group name of the high-level martial arts chat group is such a crude name, the whole book reveals a strong aura of crudeness.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

I was wandering around and found this book. It only had about ten chapters, so I added it to my bookshelf. Today I was browsing the bookshelf and found the finished book. I clicked in to take a look.

I don't hate spoilers, but I hate spoilers that are substandard.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

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Actually. . . I think. . Shi Hao shouldn't be allowed to join the group so early and then directly increase the late Huangtian Emperor later.

A novel in which the protagonist is beaten and struck by dragon-shaped lightning and acquires a special skill for body and mind training. On the way to the imperial capital, he meets an unscrupulous black wolf.

It would be interesting to have Fang Ping, a world-class martial artist, and Wang Lu from Lingjian Mountain, who has a tragic ending but a unique protagonist character.

I think chat groups are still a very good-looking type, but why do they have to change their characters? Wouldn't it look better if it didn't change? I think many people don't read novels like chat groups because of this reason (or because of water)