Master in Tokyo

Cold, sharp and gorgeous, I like this style of writing very much, but do you dare to update it?

Let's raise it first, and then read it after there's chapter 50

Too confusing, no clear point

To be honest, this book looks really good, but it also feels strangely confusing.

The author's writing style and characters are not inferior to those of the real masters, and the plot is also very good so far. The only difference is that the masters not only make themselves satisfied with the writing, but also make the readers satisfied and happy to watch. The author is all about doing what he likes and doesn't think much of the readers' reading experience. He is just entertaining himself.

A tasteless type that has merit but makes people want to give up.

The description of the book is too confusing 1. There is no core and the protagonist is leisurely? Boring? Revenge? Or conquer? There is nothing, it seems to have a body but no soul. It is exciting at first to read, but then it becomes confusing. 2. Although the protagonist's main plot is invincible style, his skills are too messy. 3. Conquer the world with its own content? Dark world? Simply destroying? 4. The portrayal of the supporting characters is not very good 5. Data flow, upgrade flow, invincibility flow, and system flow are all added in, without details In the end, the writing becomes more and more confusing.

The author's old problem is that there are too many women. Now there are enough.

It looks good, cheers to the author＾0＾~.

Sure enough, you can't continue writing? Why!

It's quite compelling, but the plot connection is a bit messy, and I can't understand many parts. If the author wants to achieve better results, he'd better write more logically. After all, everyone is here to read the novel, and your content and writing style are far from enough to make readers think deeply and read it again and again.

You let yourself go again. This plot is a bit too stream-of-conscious.

Good writing, but... Daily fragrance

The writing style is absolutely divine! ! The scene where Xiao Lin Changxian transforms from a cub into a lion is so exciting! ! As for what the main plot is? I would like to ask if there is a main line in the world? No, it's the same path from birth to death. It's a path of no return.

Brother author, I would like to become your biggest fan and follow you throughout my life. If you have a happy book or something, or if you are not satisfied with the writing, remember to bring me with you! ! I want to grab the couch at the beginning of each chapter!

It turns out to be cannibalism! Those beautiful girls were food. After the change occurred in that world, or before, they were eaten but not so explicit. In reality, there is a high probability that some very wealthy people are also ogres. Their logic is that I am tired of all the delicacies in the world. And human meat, especially the meat of people of a certain age, is the top ingredient! ! ! Because eating meat is addictive.

Hello! I'm an alien! ! ! !

I always feel that Canalside should be the smaller one. Every time I open a book, it's good. I change it as I write.