Pollution Throughout the Territory

The author's writing is good, the atmosphere of suspense and horror is well created, the story is smooth, and it is very attractive to read. Disadvantages, too many supporting roles! It's a bit confusing to read, and the relationship between primary and secondary is not clear. The description of the worldview is a bit sparse. The author should have a detailed understanding of the world of Cthulhu. Based on this, the description of the world can be reduced to give the reader room for imagination to create a suspenseful atmosphere. However, most readers have not played related games or read articles introducing Cthulhu. The suspenseful description that the author thinks is just right turns out to be inexplicable in the minds of some readers. . . Coupled with a large number of supporting characters and unclear main tasks, it is just a word, chaotic! I suggest the author read "There is a Demonic Spirit" here and sum up his experience. The average order for Youqi is over 20,000 yuan. I think the author also has this potential.

I came in based on my name, and wanted to read the introduction to find out more. After reading the introduction, I was confused, who am I? Where am I? What am I here for? Completely unclear. I don't know what this book is about. I just want to ask what the introduction is for? ? ? Is the introduction no longer the same as before? Has it become a place for authors to show off their skills?😅 This is the first time I was dismissed by the introduction! I leave my first time to you😌

The novel is not just about settings and pitfalls There are many important things I recognize the outline and clues of White Cat But the repetition rate of each event is a bit high, just like watching the later stages of Fairy Tail. After reading it for a long time, I feel like I can't stop reading because it is not interesting enough. The interesting plot is not just adding jokes to the novel. And in the repeated tasks, it gives us leisure time to think about the motivation of the protagonist to do these things, in order to silently protect the people around him? Incidents involving friends and family are all described in the article, but as soon as they are no longer involved, they suddenly disappear. To find the Illuminating Moon? To restore memory? But there is no reason why Illuminating Moon must be found, and memory does not seem to be necessary. There does not seem to be a widely recognized underlying behavioral logic of the character. In terms of digging holes, the clues that readers can remember are limited. Now basically every event will dig several holes, but the plot basically does not advance. It just constantly reveals new settings, new characters, new system tasks, new infected people, new containers, and new organizations, giving people a sense of anxiety that the work is constantly piling up but none of it is completed. Besides these, the biggest problem is that the fighting is too turn-based, and the combat system is neither clear nor bright. Apostles and ghosts have different abilities, and your sanity will be reduced. In addition, you use contained objects to fight. There is not much difference in the styles of different organizations, and they all talk about being aggressive. Writing through the whole story is really not satisfying. The puzzles become more and more difficult to solve, and each clue does not feel like it can be progressed in the short term. Various characters continue to appear and die, and the protagonist group mode remains unchanged. Whether you are chasing or fattening, you feel like you have not put any salt in it. I hope there is something that can continue to whet my appetite. I hope the fighting can be exciting instead of turn-based skills and turn-based card reversals. I hope there is enough tension and the progression of the plot even when reading a single chapter. Come on, White Cat

Currently viewing the shelves section. It feels like a good experience. Possibly a wild horse in the post-Occult era.

Very good book, fattening ing

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Come on, 666 my baby

White Cat must have been having a hard time recently, and it's normal to be confused. Write slowly and arrange the plot well. It doesn't matter if you write slowly, maybe one day you will become a eunuch? That would be easy! 😏 Come on, work hard, white cat!

What the hell is the plan of the Youthful Society, Akatsuki Organization, etc.? The Foundation is a world-class organization, so what are these organizations of the Ageless Society? An organization formed by the domination of contained objects by stronger contained objects?

After reading the introduction, I thought it was an invincible article. When I entered it, I found that I was wrong. After reading a few chapters, I thought it was an article about abuse of the main character. After reading a few more chapters, I found that I was wrong again. My only question now is whether the protagonist can take off. The introduction is not a fraud. Brother, please give me the coordinates of the protagonist's takeoff, so I can subscribe.

I swear, I will never like you again💔

[Support the rights of original authors] Respect freedom! Respect literature!

Please give some kindhearted people a recommendation vote. If you keep raising white cats, they will die (ノ｀⊿´)ノ There are so many people who have collected them, but not a single one has voted for them. Prostitution for nothing is wrong!

If you have anything you want to say, please feel free to speak up. Say more so that White Cat will have something to copy. If there are suitable characters or settings, White Cat will add (copy) it into the book (｡>∀<｡)

The author's writing is pretty good, but many of the parts about cars make me, a car fan, really uncomfortable. For example, the first time Zhu Youqian drove a Pagani, which cost about 30 million, and later he drove a convertible Chevrolet supercar, which also had big flaws. First of all, the only one Chevrolet calls a supercar is the Corvette, and as far as I know, the Corvette There is no convertible version, but the Chevrolet Camaro does have a convertible version, but it is only equipped with a v4.2.0T engine, and the interiors of both are very old Secondly, most convertibles have automatic convertibles, and they are divided into soft and hard tops. I posted a video of the hard top to watch for yourself. Some supercars that pursue fast speeds will have convertible roof panels that need to be removed manually I admit that I am a bit arrogant. I will admit my mistake here first. Please correct me if I find anything wrong. The author's book is really good. I will reward you with 2000 coins as the cost of my arrogance hahh. I just want to popularize the knowledge about cars. Please forgive me if I offend.

If you stare into the abyss for too long, the abyss will become shy. When you gaze into the abyss, the abyss gazes into you. It wasn't until I took off my pants that Abyss looked away shyly.                                                                                       since

Actually a man. As long as you pursue girls sincerely and sincerely, and as long as you are not really the kind with poor appearance and quality, you can basically get girls. For example, I am dark, not tall, not handsome, not highly educated, just an ordinary face. My girlfriend is from Tsinghua University. Her family runs a company and has houses in Beijing and Shanghai. I met her as a food delivery person. I was attracted by her beauty at first sight, but I am just a food delivery person, but I don't have low self-esteem. I kept chatting with her on WeChat. I kept asking her to hang out, but she was always rejected and almost blocked, but I moved her with my sincerity. It has been a year now and she is about to get married. Her father said that the company will rely on me from now on. He only has this daughter, so she can just let me treat her well. If I wasn't tired from typing, I would still want to continue editing.

An American, a Japanese, and a Chinese are exploring the jungle. As a result, they were all captured by the cannibal tribe. But the tribal chief said: "I am in a good mood today and I will not eat you, but you will all have to suffer a hundred blows, but before you get a blow, you can have a wish come true." The Americans were the first to suffer the blow. He said: "Before I hit the board, put a cushion on my butt." After putting the cushion on my butt, the board fell like raindrops. At first, 70 boards were okay, but after 70 boards, the cushion was smashed, and then the board was bloody... After the beating, the American Lao walked away touching his butt. After seeing this, the Japanese asked for 10 mattresses. After 1, 2, 3...100 Beatings, the Japanese stood up, patted their butts, and said they were fine; then they boasted about their ability to imitate and recreate, and wanted to sit back and watch the Chinese show.                                                            The Chinese man slowly lay down and said leisurely: "Come on, put the Japanese on the mat for me."…

Sometimes, we also give some cat food to kittens. So it's not too much to give him a few recommendation votes as food, right? Of course, according to what this cat said: better-looking data. You can just vote for a few recommendations and keep it. Those who do not vote have a chance of being hit by pregnancy light waves.

To be honest, you are just a positive ghost story in Cthulhu skin.

After seeing the transformed woman, I don't know why I'm not interested anymore. You are forcibly screening readers.

Maybe many people think this book is a bad book, a garbage, a waste But I think this is a treasure book, just a bad ending The world view of this book is very good, I can get a glimpse of the corner of the world that is about to be destroyed from these words Outer Gods, Old Days, Mythical Creatures Some people may say that the ending is problematic But I want to ask Gram, when will second settings not be allowed? To be honest, when I first saw the ending, I really wanted to complain What the hell, Yibo En became President A, it was too outrageous But after a while, I understood The Ke system has always been able to be created at will. It's just that some kid came and disturbed the atmosphere. To sum up This book 9 World view 10+ Protagonist 6 Whether it is the plot of the apostle hunting, the plot of the Son of the Wind hunting the protagonist, or the tree of mercy. I feel very good. This kind of book is really rare.

When Xiuchun comes out, all the monsters and monsters are wiped out, and all the ghost gates are slaughtered.

Dear author, can I borrow your Yidian settings? I want to open a similar book.

After reading more than seventy chapters, I saw the shadows of Caesar and Nono in Zhu Youqian and the transformed male protagonist 😰

I am the first to reward fans!

I've read dozens of chapters, but they're all boring plots and a waste of time.

This plot is boring and the transformation is really addictive.

I kicked it out of the bookshelf after reading three chapters.

It's cumbersome and lengthy, and the plot comes out one after another, without beginning or end.