Witch's Time Travel

It feels like a flow of writing, just like writing an outline (personal opinion). I can't find a sense of immersion. It looks pretty good at first, but then it feels sour.

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The third prince, the villain of all generations, cannot escape death if he appears on camera. Either giving cuckolds online, or rebelling and changing history. When you are in trouble, you will always be rescued, because of the strange woman who traveled through time. Please let him go, why did he have two children so late?

2011.9 "Rebirth of Ordinary Days" Gu Xiaomo 2012.1 "Online Game Fairy Dream" Tong Jifeng/Xunzi 2012.8 "Game Nanny Travels to Another World" Bai Luocheng 2 013.2 "Behind the Rebirth of the Stars" Jing Xing 2013.10 "Anecdotes in the Fairy Garden" Yao Huang 2014.11 "The Life of a Master in Time and Space" Bai Tang 2015.8 " Quick Travel Revenge Firm" Ronglu Lake 2016.9 "My Trash Can Leads to Ancient Times" Han Nuo 2017.2 "Miss Houfu's Entertainment Industry Career" Lin Baiyu/Xuanyu Daozun 2017.10 "The Queen Has a Space to Dream" Lan Xiaoyou 2018.6 "Writer's Notes on Ancient Experiences" Angelia 2019.7 "The Witch's Time Travel" Su Qingni

Depressed... The heroine became a little perverted in the later period... Because if you don't stay with the person you like for the rest of your life, you have to mess up the world... If you really mess up the world, how big a sin is it, and how much karma will you have to bear? Is this because I want to fall in love, so I give Tai a drink? The heroine has always experienced various worlds with the attitude of playing the human world, but after getting together with Taiyi's reincarnation, it seems that she went to various worlds just for Taiyi, and doesn't it feel strange to use the bodies of the original owners to fall in love?

The revision of this article is quite unexpected and somewhat reasonable. Looking horizontally and vertically, I can only see the four words "duty and restraint" between the words.             Feng Yuan's rebellion was an attempt to rebel and to bring order to the chaos. It was his duty to fulfill the filial piety of Prince Yi Zhong. Looking at the emperor's final letter of resignation, we can see that although he was in a high position and had meritorious service, he rewarded and took revenge. He did not waste money to reward meritorious officials and did not kill his opponents indiscriminately. This was a sign of restraint.        ，，， Clean the house first before doing anything else in the world. As a time traveler, Sanjie You has a golden finger with a big plot, but she only avoids a tragic life and even maintains an official match with her partner. It is not her own who can firmly maintain her own integrity and treat her with intelligence, without bending or flattering. Even the arrogant and lustful Jia Lian and Sister Feng were able to restrain their temperament, change their appearance, and achieve good results before their final days. There is a saying in a short video series on Douyin that is very good: "Investment depends on whether the person can stick to his own principles and bottom line." To do this, duty and restraint are really indispensable.

It becomes more and more boring after there is a male protagonist.

The original name of Chang'e in the prehistoric era was Heng'e, but she was later renamed Chang'e because it conflicted with the name of Emperor Liu Heng. It is normal for our descendants to call Chang'e, but as people from the prehistoric era, we call Heng'e Chang'e. Isn't it strange?

After traveling through that world, Brother Ninth discovered the heroine in the end, but it was not written later. The heroine would not be with that Brother Ninth. Later, it was written that the heroine discovered the light group of Donghuang Taiyi from Brother Ninth. Somehow, there was some bad premonition. First of all, the light group of the male protagonist was suspected of being a soul in a person with a group of wives and concubines like Brother Ninth. Also, later on, the heroine would not use the body of the original owner. Let's fall in love with someone who has a light group with Donghuang Taiyi. In fact, the heroine's feelings for the male protagonist are a bit inexplicable. There was almost no interaction between them at the beginning, and there were no women in Donghuang Taiyi in history. The situation of many men and many women in this novel is too casual. Many female partners look for men who have several hands and are very tolerant of men. Don't female partners deserve to find some clean men?

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It's getting worse and worse from now on, should someone else write it? ? ? In Journey to the West, Kui Mulang and Zhu Bajie were both the ones who caused their deaths, right? If it weren't for the protagonist having a stand-in puppet, he would really be dead, right? Why can't we just take revenge? Still want to be friends with someone? Funny?

The front is worn quickly, but the back becomes love, love, love, love.

This book is actually well written. However, I personally feel that many times there are many things that could be written, but they are all covered casually. Many stories about the world are written like a running account. I was very interested at first, but after watching it I felt bored. I still hope that the author can choose a few more world stories and write them in more detail.

The introduction shocked me. The two clans of lich and demon sacrificed the top boss for a show... I have never seen such a slippery operation in my life. If the Lich and Lich clans are really so stupid, they deserve to lose.

I think that since the heroine is rejected by Heaven, she shouldn't be able to do such things as divination, especially if it is divination out of thin air. Supernatural powers also have to see the world. Won't Heaven focus on it?

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Why do I think that except for the first story, I am writing a novel outline? It develops too fast.

Well, the details don't stand up to scrutiny. And just like writing an essay, I couldn't find a sense of immersion.

I asked the heroine if she had passed the trick of sealing memories. This kind of thing seems very awkward. It is neither as refreshing as the heroine being tortured and then awakening, nor as powerful and joyful as having the memory of time travel at the beginning. This kind of sealed memory is like a time traveler who has no memory. If you say he is a time traveler, he has no memory. If you say he is not a time traveler, he really is a time traveler. It's awkward, and this kind of person who has no memory feels like an ordinary person cheating on cheating. It's better to have memories together at the beginning, because the memories with them are all her own, and the sealed memories are given by cheating. No matter how big the aura of the heroine in the former is, she still feels like a cheater, and the latter is just cheating. It's obvious which one is better.

I really like big books, but I really couldn't stand this one. I tried reading it for the second time, and after reading it for more than 20%, I still couldn't stand it...

Can you make the Zen story longer? Your quick travel is too fast. Sometimes I feel that the story is quite good, but it turns out that it's only 3 to 4 chapters long and it's already finished😅

Unexpectedly, the author actually knew the meaning of banana man, which is amazing. Has the author ever lived abroad?

A running account, a running account. In fact, the author has a good idea, but the writing style is really... Alas, what a pity.

Why do you think the heroine is a bit too kind?

I have read several of the author's books and liked them, but I couldn't get into this one. It's been so long since my junior uncle has updated it and he doesn't dare to read it.

There are so many comments about Zen treasures in this book, why can't I stop reading 🤔? Am I stupid? Am I stupid? It's a Zen book that's good to read 😄

Haha, another naked girl, so disgusting

I prefer this type of book

I read Revenge Office a few years ago, and after reading it, I stopped pursuing the author's books. Today I remembered and searched, and briefly looked at the list of works... Emmmm, there is no book that I can add to my book list, but I still leave my name first to give the author some encouragement, and then continue to look forward to the author's future non-CP books. I look forward to it, and I'm leaving now!

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