Online Games: Leisurely Strolling

The writing may be divided into sections, which makes it difficult to read and affects the reading effect. The first person version is okay, after all, I only became obsessed with online gaming novels after reading Lost Leaves novels. Give Zhang a recommendation vote to support it.

This author is so lazy, he can't separate paragraphs, there are too many typos, and there are a lot of first person pronouns mixed in, and the dialogue is not put in quotation marks. I am very tired from reading it, so I won't read it anymore.

How many heroines? Several... Strongly request one wow

Captain Su's death is really a permanent scar on this fire brigade. Firefighters are great.

The writing is beautiful, the plot is twists and turns, and there is a lot of cleverness in it.

Write some passionate scenes quickly. Hahaha

A long paragraph, a big paragraph, can you understand it yourself?

The author writes well and the amount of updates is okay, but he could be more diligent!

Dear author, when will the update be added?

It's rare to see a novel with such characteristics. I will support it.

It's a good article. The author has a strong writing style and a strong sense of empathy. The more I like the heroine.

The dialogue is wonderful and the characters are vivid and vivid! ! !

`The supporting characters are also so unique, so interesting, good-looking, so good-looking.