Would Rather Die Than Be a Copycat

The article has novel ideas, original themes, clear paragraphs, strange plots, ups and downs, clear main lines, fascinating, and extraordinary literary skills in the ordinary. It can be said that every word is precious, every sentence is a classic, and it is a model that our generation should learn from. The author is more like landslides and ground cracks, water flowing backwards, ghosts seeing sorrow, beauty and wisdom combined, hero and chivalry personified, loved by everyone, flowers blooming, and cars having flat tires~

After reading it, I can't say that the author's writing is bad, but it's not good either, especially the beginning. No, the beginning is seriously bad. The author must know the three golden chapters!                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 ¢ And the author plays a lot of jokes, adds new characters, and changes his thoughts. It is that kind of, indescribable, very special kind of Յ(¯ㅂ¯Յ) The main problem lies in the writing style, and the author's introduction is very problematic and unattractive. A good introduction can attract many readers. Since you are writing about two-dimensional characters traveling through time, then you should deeply characterize the characters, and by the way, change the character's own label, or deepen it I would like to ask here, how to solve the identity problem? Add some characters with their own meme, you can create some plot conflicts, but you don't have to be pretentious and slap in the face, write things that go against the routine, reverse, do you understand? Let the readers not guess what you are going to write next (ﾟoﾟ; let them have a sense of expectation The main thing is to write more and practice more. I would like to emphasize that you are not good at describing, and I can't remember what you write. Of course I hope you don't dislike me for talking too much (T^T) The novel cannot only be about male protagonists and female protagonists. You must make most of the characters in this book come alive and the characters are distinct I only wrote 22 chapters, but the problem is that there are several female protagonists, and the descriptions are scattered. Does the author have an outline? To be honest, I suggest rewriting Your book can only survive by mixing multiple elements. The protagonist is too ordinary PS, I used to read and write book reviews on QQ. I said that a certain book was going to collapse or be finished. The author might cut it off. The author replied to me and said it was impossible to cut it off →_→ Then he really collapsed and took it off the shelf. More than this time, I deeply doubted whether I was a crow's mouth?

It's a bit messy, the characters appear too fast, it feels like

Emmm, is the stone analogue in the new foreshadowing a ruby ​​or a sapphire?

The author of Salted Fish has nothing to do to beat King of Kings day by day. After beating King of Kings, he beat Honkai Impact 3. After beating Honkai Impact 3, he beat Arknights. After beating Arknights, he beat FGO. He just doesn't update. He hereby launches a denunciation against the author. For every three likes this post has, he must add a new chapter ~ The author of Salted Fish, please reply (heavy fog) (self-protection)...

This is a two-dimensional novel. In today's era of overflowing routines, the author's writing skills are not the most outstanding. However, the fact that we can meet here shows that the unique charm of this novel is consistent with the author's... Okay, okay, no more editing, author, am I serious enough?

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The setting is great and I have the desire to read more, but is the background of the world the reason why I didn't read it carefully? Did the protagonist travel to another world and then start passively summoning the heroine, or is the world itself distorted by the invasion of the background of the drama? If it is the first one, the familiar people and the background have not changed, and even the world is still the same. There are more protagonists from the drama, but the world is not distorted at all? They appear quietly, and there are even people with abilities, but there is no change in the world In the second case, it is still the same topic. The world has not changed. There are even more people with royal powers and even other abilities. The living environment has not changed. The characters are just passers-by with the names of the protagonists in the background of the drama. (I have roughly read about forty chapters so far) To be honest, I really like the setting (taking the time traveler to start a business) The background is a bit confusing (the original world was integrated into some dramas) The characters are unclear (for example, the protagonist's father is a big boss who can invade any bank in the world at will, but why does he have to give his father a thousand yuan on time every month? Even after giving it, he is too poor to eat instant noodles) There is an explanation, but I haven't seen it yet. Maybe I didn't see it.

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The protagonist is an idiot with chuunibyou!

Why are you done? 🔨

Like a magic wand, a sculpture that looks familiar, made of stone, the stone version of the divine light wand in the Tiga movie?

The setting is very good, but the fact that the protagonist's father knows everything about the protagonist feels very discouraging. It reads as if everything about the protagonist has been arranged, and some places are very unreasonable. Since the protagonist's father knows everything about the protagonist and is so knowledgeable, it is impossible to accept the thousand yuan. Not to mention the importance of courtesy and affection, this is the protagonist's father who gives the protagonist almost no privacy! Although the fact that the protagonist has almost no privacy exposed in front of the protagonist's father is discouraging.

I've read four chapters, and apart from some minor issues, it's okay. However, I don't like this way of handling it, bye. Come on.

To be honest, after reading the first few chapters, I really don't like this protagonist. It's too contrived and I almost can't survive. He also refused the bonus. It was not given to you in the first place. What right do you have to refuse? You are not familiar with Kallen. And Karen, a person from time travel, has an ID? How do you explain it to the police?

I am a lay person, but after reading just a few chapters, it was hard for me to accept that Kallen trusted the protagonist so much when she first met him (and still, and reading this novel, there are absolutely characters I like appearing,

I don't know what else to say, author, please give Xiaomengxin some extra points and add some contribution points.

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Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

When I saw Chapter 6, I remembered that the protagonist was in SZ, right? SZ is a special economic zone, and the director of the municipal bureau is an airborne relative with no work experience? ? ?

I have a question, why do everyone refuse to copy official documents and think it is not good to copy official documents. But Wen Chao Gong's book is not a classic and pioneering work. I can't find any books I want to read! !