Marvelous Marvel Journey

After reading five or six chapters, the title of the book is simply called Inexplicable

The beginning makes no sense. How can magic happen? Didn't you meet Spider-Man? How did you get to the hotel in the next chapter? It's a cheap and shabby hotel. You can still be reasonable when someone else fucks you. You have such a grumpy personality? ***Write

To be honest, I probably saw more than 20 pictures and couldn't stand it anymore. The author may have a good idea and feel that he can write a good work, and he also wants to use some techniques used in essays and movies, such as flashbacks, just like when I was in high school a few years ago and liked to write essays, I imitated Han Han's style (I personally think that Han Han's writing is quite good among young writers). I felt very strong when I first finished writing, but after two or three months, I was embarrassed to read a batch of them, which were completely different. First of all, the logic of this book is unclear. After reading more than 20 chapters, there is no explanation of the ins and outs of the protagonist's activities except for one line about the abduction and trafficking of women and children. Moreover, the source of the ability has not been explained. It is said intermittently that the online article is not afraid of vulgarity, but also wants to transcend vulgarity without the ability to control it. The second concept of good and evil is strange (actually it can be classified as the above). I also hate the trafficking of women and children, but normal people should not put it among the top evils. Wouldn't it be more terrifying if the zero-humiliation sand man takes a live device (fear of river crabs)? Of course, if It would still be acceptable if you foreshadowed the fact that the protagonist was trafficked as a child and lived a miserable life (but it must be at the beginning of the article, this is not an American TV series), and then went on a killing spree. Anyone who has no tragic experience and can go on a killing spree is not a good person. Then, the focus of the article is very strange, and the first ten chapters are basically unattractive. Why not throw some verbose stuff into the preface. I guess a lot of things are in the author's mind. Generally speaking, some books should be kept to your own taste. If your children are at home, as long as you can tolerate them, they will be good. Just take them to the market. You also need to be generous when facing netizens. After all, in our online environment, people who agree with you may not say anything or give you likes and recommendations, while people who disagree with you will get angry. I am also free and have written so much. In fact, these words can be regarded as written for myself.

Why do you need to use the evocation system to fight Hulk Abomination? The skin is rough and the flesh is thick, so it can't be beaten. Doesn't this kind of enemy use various mental spells from the enchantment system?

Will the protagonist be a transcendent? A transcendent being assimilated by a soul from another world. After all, the transcendent who did not come to the Marvel universe is like Schrödinger's cat, but the soul of the protagonist gives him the concept of "existence".

I'm thinking that Marvel has more bosses than DND, and I've read this kind of games and novels, and the upper limit isn't as high as Marvel's.

There are too few DND types... Please note it in the introduction... I almost missed it

It must be Ultron, but removing or reducing Ultron's extremism is the best choice. In my opinion, Ultron loves his father Tony more, but like many children, in order to be recognized, he often goes to extremes until he becomes hopelessly crooked. The fantasy world is more like an adult with a perfect personality, with free will and perfect values. He needs not a father but something else, such as a platform to realize his own ideas, and his obedience to Tony is only the best choice and the influence of Jarvis. Just like he finally chose Scarlet Witch to be with (you know, Scarlet was from the captain's side in Civil War.

I was confused when I saw the first four pictures. I had no idea where the so-called spells came from. The plot was scattered here and there without telling me what to do. It just slipped away~

This level is exactly the same as when I first wrote the novel. The plot is incoherent, the preface does not match the follow-up, I complain about the novel, and the characters are empty.

The name of this book is wrong, it should be called (I Destroyed All Female Characters in Marvel), or it could also be called (My ** Journey in Marvel), etc. The women who have appeared in this book, except for Queen Hera, Gu Yi, the female director of S. H. I. E. L. D., And the Queen of the Light Elf, all the female characters who have appeared in Marvel movies have been slept with by the protagonist. Can anyone tell me who else has not been slept with. If there's one more, I lose.

I was persuaded to quit. The writing was incomprehensible, and what I read was also incomprehensible.

What did you write? It looked so cloudy and foggy.

I read the first 4 chapters as if in a dream, and I was totally confused.

I looked confused at the front. What the hell? It's not smooth at all. How can I pass the trial like this? The starting point is so bad now 😅😅😅😅

I also follow Marvel. I have played both DND games and novels. I think the power system in it is not as high as that of Marvel.

This is really amazing. It's so amazing that I don't even know what I'm looking at.

The perspective is so weird... It's like the author is telling a story, not me reading a book!

Author, have you forgotten the Infinity Stones? This is chapter 371! Not even using the Infinity Stones once? You obviously have the Power Stone but don't use it? Say you can only bend vibranium? Making things difficult for yourself? Do you have to lower your IQ to continue writing? This book is so painful to read! You don't need the two infinite gems in your hand, and you don't need the space gem! Make the protagonist look like a mentally retarded person!

Some people think of stallions, but I don't think so. I personally have an aversion to stallions, but not to romance, or rather to starting-point stallions. What is starting-point stallion? Even if you have had a relationship with a girl, you treat her like a personal property. This is called starting-point stallion. Romance means that even if you have sex with a girl today and she reconciles with her old lover the next day, she will not be angry and can even express your blessing.

I don't know whether it's my debt or the book's problem with this book. I was really confused after reading it.

After reading some, the author rarely outlines the characters, maybe because Marvel characters have become deeply rooted in people's hearts. The character of the protagonist feels very complicated, a bit slutty, very salty, and a bit mercenary. Except for some special reasons, he has done some hard work to rescue abducted women and children, and there is no benefit at all. The protagonist portrayed by the author is the kind of person who lacks self-confidence, which is very consistent with the identity of a time traveler. No one really has great ambitions and mysterious self-confidence as soon as they time travel. Maybe the story is not on the right track yet. Generally speaking, the plot is more like a daily novel, which is a bit bland. It can be seen that the protagonist does not lick the dog when treating female characters 🤭, which is in line with my feelings. In general, it's okay, at least Shennong doesn't have to die 🤭🤭🤭 You haven't read enough books, so don't criticize me!

It's pretty good, not as bad as some posts in the book review section say, please give it a try, author.