Leisurely Mission Life in the World of Martial Arts

Those who like this book, or those who think it has a lot of poisonous points, can leave your paw prints below to witness your journey. As the wind leaves its traces, the passing geese leave their voices...

Finally, I found a protagonist who no longer repeatedly described Chacha as not the Virgin, blah blah blah, Chacha was not the Virgin, blah blah blah. It seems that if you don't show the face of someone who is not the Holy Mother, you will poison the readers to death.

There isn't much innovation, but the story is interesting. The title of the book is good, and a good book could have been written on this topic. Now the beginning is cliche, but it's actually not cliché, as long as it's well-written and readable. There are only so many plots in a good work, but it's hard to find the perfect plot. But it needs to be well written, with a compact plot and vivid story characters. Just don't be verbose and idle. That'll be fine.

I have paid a return visit, and I would like to ask for your feedback on my humble work "Xuanling Cessation".

Um. . . This letter seems to be so close that everyone in the enemy country is wiped out.

Come on, come on, find a high-quality novel

It's not easy for newbies, let's work together! Already followed, collected, and asking for return visit

I really like the plot of this novel, keep it up. It's just that Pig's Feet is very tired of other people's questions, which is a bit unpleasant. Pig's Feet inexplicably tells a stranger something, and the other party must not only believe it with gratitude, but also obey it without asking a single word. Pig's Feet is a bit demanding in this regard from others.

Hello! This book friend! Let me stop by and check in! This book has been saved and will come here often in the future! Oh, by the way! Do you want to read my book too? If you have nothing to do, come sit down with me and have a drink. We can talk about life and ideals. Okay, keep creating! It's time to go back. Don't give it away! Why are you so polite? Stay! After seeing you for thousands of miles, we must finally say goodbye. The green mountains and green waters will bring us a bright future!

"Wandering in the Film and Television World" returns to visit book friends Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง and encourage us together!

You are a strong man with thin mud and thousands of pounds of oil.

I think the storyline is pretty good. If I have to find faults... Maybe the writing style is a little lacking. Some storylines could actually be written better, but it's pretty good now. Good luck to the author. I support you.

There may be a problem with Chapter 7. Didn't you take the Marrow Cleansing Pill? Didn't I take five taels of silver and give it to others? Can the storage ring also be automatically completed? . .

Already paying attention, please support!

We have received it, we have received it from each other, and we have encouraged each other.

The writing is very good, the writing style is good, very novel ideas, the plot is vivid and the characters are well portrayed. Come on, the author, try not to interrupt updates, wait for the signing, I believe there will be better results after signing the contract,,, has been collected, please return to visit, just click on my avatar, thank you, "I May Create an Era", help each other. ,,,,

The idea is clear and the article is flawless After reading the book, I was involuntarily attracted by the content in the first chapter, and then read most of the book But as newcomers, they all have a common shortcoming, that is, the writing style is stiff. There are some places where I cannot express my thoughts perfectly I wish you a better and better writing career. It is not easy for newbies, so keep working hard Xiaoxian will always pay attention to you silently~ Come on!

The writing is good, but there is still room for improvement. New books will be like this. Come on, author.