Strike Storm 2320

Science fiction. The story of alien invasion and Earthlings' counterattack. It is not a very hard-core science fiction novel. The virtual battlefield setting in the beginning is not novel but it is still readable. However, the college life described later is quite interesting, like an academic novel covered in science fiction. The shortcoming is that the opening chapter is a bit bland and not exciting enough. The plug-in is not explained clearly, it is a relatively disgusting waste material flow opening. 7 points, haven't read the rest yet.

As soon as I saw the four numbers after the title of the book, I could guess that it was a science fiction novel. As for the word "attack", it hinted that the book must be related to the alien attack. When I opened the book and took a look, I was sure that I was right. This is an interstellar war novel in a future world. When I read this book, I immediately thought of a similar movie-"Ender's Game", and the plots of the two have similarities. At the time of writing this review, the book only has five chapters. The first few chapters feel like a rebirth article, but I would like to remind readers that this is not a rebirth article. In the vernacular language, details also need to be grasped. The battle at the beginning is just a simulation in VR, and after VR returns to the real world, the real story begins. Just like in Ender's Game, the bullied Ender was taken to a youth military school. The author boasts that his style is humorous and light. The author is really trying hard to create a sense of humor. The language is pure vernacular without any reading difficulties. Readers can easily understand what kind of events the author wants to tell. However, the author's conception is not yet up to the level of a humor master. Instead, there are quite a few inexplicable "stalks". Readers can block these "stalks" when reading, so as to understand the plots more clearly. New authors need encouragement. Now it seems that the design of this book is grand but clear, and the language is popular but not obscure. It is a good book for relaxing reading! (The copyright of this book review belongs to "New Book Recommendation Circle", author Luan Yang)

Hello author, I feel very good after reading your book. This subject matter is also very good, but I would like to use my experience to make some suggestions. First of all, your opening is great, showing the protagonist's distinctive personality, but there is one thing that makes people wonder: the protagonist doesn't speak English? It stands to reason that in the future era, how can a "hacker expert" not understand English? Secondly, I personally feel that your Golden Finger section is a bit abrupt, because the whole thing feels like two people are fighting each other. The author should add more descriptions of expressions and body movements to make this section more vivid. Third, if you want to describe a tense battle scene, the actions of the characters on the battlefield are indispensable. Details are necessary to reflect the tense scene. For example, details such as the characters turning the speed of the firearm from semi-automatic to fully automatic, as well as the various tactical languages ​​​​and gestures spoken when communicating with friendly forces are very important details. Only with these details can the battle be more intensely reflected. I am also an author. The above are my thoughts and summarized experiences. The book I wrote is "United Plane Colonization Plan" I hope to make progress together with the author QWQ

This book has a bit of a feel, haha. The characters are very individual. As an insider, I can only say that the characteristics of the characters are relatively accurate. Why am I an insider? Because I am the prototype of the fat translator.

Thank you to smysmy1 and the two big guys for your 5 recommendation votes. Thank you for your support and keep working hard! ! More exciting later! !

It's very interesting. I've already invested in it. Please do your best and don't update it until it's finished!

This kind of youth book has little appeal to online readers. Readers have no interest in reading the plug-in if it does not work within three chapters.