The Next Second, She Smiles Like a Flower

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， I think I am also an old bookworm who has been exposed to online literature since 2008. Although I am still a little ignorant, my love for online literature is really passionate. Unfortunately, the works of great masters that I am following have not been updated yet, so I have no choice but to struggle in the ocean of book waste, hoping to find a boat of hope and escape from the sea of ​​suffering as soon as possible. So, by chance, among thousands of books, I came across this book "Smiling Like a Flower in the Next Second". Frankly speaking, what attracted me and motivated me to read this book was precisely because of the title. A woman with a smile like a flower is born with a temperament that will captivate a country, and a woman who is willing to smile like a flower for the person opposite her must be because someone pleases her, so she can smile so beautifully in the next second. It is said that King Zhou You smiled and played with the princes with a thousand-mile beacon in order to win the beauty. This was probably nothing more than that. But to be honest, the introduction of this article made me a little disappointed. If possible, I would like to exchange the picturesque scenery for your smile. This seems to be a very beautiful sentence, but it is the only sentence that can show the grace of the smiling woman in the title of the book. The rest seems a bit redundant. The introduction is the stepping stone to attract many old bookworms like me to click on the text to read. Its power is greater than the title and cover of the book. The title of the book is like a person's name, and the cover is like a human face, but online articles are not comics after all. They rely on the author's words to show readers a picture of the world in the author's mind, thereby stimulating readers' desire to read. At this moment, I just want to know what kind of poignant or extraordinary love story there will be between the woman with a smile like a flower and the person who makes the woman smile like a flower, but the introduction does not play its due role. On the contrary, there are some meanings of piling up gorgeous rhetoric, some flaws in the ointment, and some superfluous things. Although the introduction was a bit discouraging, I still read it patiently. The number of words in the full text is not too many, and I read the latest chapters with peace of mind. The reason why I say inner peace is obviously because the characters written by the author are a bit stiff and not enough to affect my mood and nerves. At the beginning, "Bring a basin of water and splash her awake." This is a tense and suffocating atmosphere. Logically speaking, this should be the biggest crisis for the heroine Xia Chenge after time travel. We are all looking forward to Xia Chenge's next move, whether it will be a ten-year-long forbearing revenge, or a gratification of revenge on the spot. However, as Xia Chenge gradually woke up, nothing happened. The expected basin of cold water did not come; the oppressive feeling of the enemy's pressing step by step did not come; Xia Chenge still came through time with a confused look on his face, and followed his maid to leave this family-style battlefield where no gunpowder could be seen. Where is the cold water you promised? What about the ferocious face of the promised enemy? What about the dangerous world that we promised to eat people without spitting out their bones? Did the heroine escape in such a daze? Dear author, this is the key plot to shape the heroine's character and personality. Why did you waste it like this? Back to the heroine's own courtyard, the appearance of the hero Huo Li is also a bit dumbfounding. The person who entered the door looked at the heroine with a smile on his face, but the male protagonist was carried out of the room, and the person who entered the door turned out to be a servant. I don't know if there is a problem with the author's description, or if we have limited understanding, we saw such an embarrassing scene. Both the male and female protagonists are on stage, and what follows is naturally a drama between you and me, deepening the relationship. There seems to be nothing wrong with this, but author, you use so many words at the beginning to focus on the emotional drama between the male and female protagonists. Is this really okay? The hero's stepmother, cousin, and his sister are still watching eagerly from the sidelines. Overall, the author has put a lot of effort into his writing style. We didn't talk about the bad points of the setting at length right from the beginning, but the plot was too slow. Although the characters were all useful, the tense relationship between the characters and their respective personality traits were not shown. The supporting characters were all born for themselves, but they did not have any major interaction with the protagonist. The two protagonists have been playing rival roles, but without outstanding supporting roles, how can the storyline be promoted? How should the plot develop? The heroine even told the hero that she was a time traveler as soon as she came up. This is more than just silly, right? Although the two are nominally a couple, the heroine's memory has nothing to do with the hero's, and there is no life-long friendship. How could she dare to tell others her biggest secret when they are still strangers? Frankly speaking, I think this is the biggest poisonous point of this book. Author, what we want to see is the heroine tearing apart her love rival and occupying the hero's heart, rather than the heroine being stupid and being slaughtered by others. Let's move on with the plot! There is no love without reason, and there is no hatred without reason. Even if the two protagonists will be together in the end, the supporting characters will have their own destinations. But with your unremarkable development, are you really the woman with the smile like a flower that the male protagonist exchanged for the picturesque country in your mind, the author? Hey, I won't go into details about typos and other minor flaws. The author will just make the corrections himself. Finally, I wish the author can clarify his ideas, write good articles, and sell the books!

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What are you writing about? The love between Si Xi and Chang Fu is just mentioned in one stroke. Not to mention whether Long Xiu can escape Dongchang's pursuit. Even if Sanniang leaves the palace with the true prince, wouldn't she leave some tokens behind? General Li led the troops,,, Wait,, Sorry, I read the wrong book! Sorry, sorry (nod, bow and leave the circle,,)

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