For Whom the Neon Clothes Dance?

After reading this novel carefully, first of all, the author's writing style is very good, secondly, the concept is very interesting, thirdly, the main line is relatively clear, and fourthly, the basic historical facts have not changed, which is very important. Many historical fiction novels do not pay too much attention to historical facts. This resulted in their works increasingly deviating from the main line in the later stages of writing. The first thing that needs to be improved in this novel is the number of words in each chapter. You can have 1,500 to 2,000 words per chapter in the early stage, but in the later stage, it must be about 2,500 to 3,500 words per chapter. If you reduce these word counts, you will find that fewer and fewer people will read it later. No matter what, keep going, keep going! 😁

It's not Mr. Shanmu who came to visit with "Salted Fish Little Scholar". Your writing 2 is really good. I hope our fans will return to visit me. Thank you.

I have collected a lot of books, so you might as well read mine. Even though they are just so-so, I would like to collect them and support each other. Grateful

New books are not easy, so come on 😁

Return visit with "Book of Past Events in the Three Realms". Welcome to catch bugs and make comments! Encourage each other, come on!

Return visit, received! Come on, book friends!

Already collected, welcome to visit again. Comment: Great cheers. Thank you

Hello author, your book is well written and engaging. I have already collected it, Li Yanzhou came to visit with "Supreme Dongling"!

Return visit with "The Rise of an Empire of Planes"