What Should I Do If My Chat Group Is Too Invincible?

I have been a bookworm for five years and have read thousands of novels. I have read novels of any type (except for pure love that girls like to read, but I really can't read it). I have also read a lot of gay novels. I think I have some thoughts and feelings, and I can make objective evaluations of novels. If you think it makes sense, give it a good review. If you think it doesn't work, that's okay. If you think there are any problems in my evaluation, you can point it out and I can humbly accept it. First of all, from the title of this book, everyone knows the old-fashioned chat group routine of fans. In terms of writing, the shortcomings of this book are from primary school to ordinary junior high school students (at least he wrote that primary school students cannot write hundreds of thousands of words). The punctuation marks are not marked (you may just think that Weird, but if you listen to the book and listen to a few chapters, you will know what brainwashing is). In terms of plot, the plot is messy, and the description of the characters' emotions is inexplicable. Even the imagination trained after five years of reading the book cannot imagine the emotional changes of the characters. What's the matter? Are you writing a novel or a self-criticism from elementary school? Dead and stiff (no emotion) Final rating: 4.2 Points Comments: Although it won't make you vomit after reading it, it is a very ordinary book that people will forget after reading it. It is recommended not to waste your time reading it.

I feel like I quite like this book, but there are a lot of typos.

This writing style is really hard to describe in one sentence...

To be honest, the subject matter is not particularly novel 😥 Let's put it this way This is probably the first time the author has written a book. The writing style gave me the feeling of a child writing homework. It is full of running accounts.

I have read a lot of book reviews in the past few days and found that there are a lot of bugs, but I really don't have time to read them one by one recently. Please post them here directly after you find the bugs, and then tell the correct information. After all, I am just a newbie and my writing skills are limited. As for the writing problem, I will continue to improve it later.

I solemnly promise to finish updating at least 500,000 words by the end of September, if not paraded in public.

I'm really sorry that I missed one chapter due to my negligence. It's chapter 41. If you want to read it, please go back and have a look. I've added the real chapter 41. I'm so sorry.

You will know the direction and content of the chapters after reading this introduction. You don't even need to click to read a chapter. Farewell.

Chapter 136 is poisonous. As mentioned earlier, the protagonist has the aura of an emperor, so he was accepted by Bai Qi, declared his surrender, and then was forced to become a familiar. Moreover, he was scolded by the woman here without getting angry or anything. Then Bai Qi came out to help him out, but the woman was scared to cry, and the protagonist blamed Bai Qi for scaring her. . . All I can say is awesome

I've tried the poison, and I'm a brainless pretentious writer. There is no logic in some places, and there is no lower limit to the IQ of the characters in the chat group.

To be honest, it's very toxic. Everyone's character has disappeared, leaving only one word "Lick" Iron Man's pride is gone, Nagato's belief is gone, and Whitebeard's domineering is gone. Writing... Needs to be improved... Plot... Needs to be improved... Well, let's not talk about it, it needs to be improved, ugh.

What's the use of banning words when using chicken feathers as arrows? Ordinary people have their own arrogance, not to mention those heroes.

I won't talk about the personalities of the group members! The key is what is the operation of sending my daughter back to the past? ? ? The protagonist in the future (Protagonist 1) sends his daughter to the protagonist in the present (Protagonist 2), and then waits for Protagonist 2 to grow to a certain level, and then sends his daughter back to the protagonist in the past (Protagonist 3)... What the hell is the point of this?

I'm very curious, what's there to be afraid of if you just step on a horse and get banned, 😂

Flowing water members, iron-clad white beards

There are some things that I may not have noticed when I wrote them. If you find them, please let me know. Thank you very much!

I'm confused after reading a few chapters, so I'm writing for myself, so I don't have to run away.

I feel like the people in the group have almost lost their sense of self. They just follow a few fixed templates and basically play Chinese memes with all their might. Could it be that the author didn't think about what character should say in order to make jokes in the article? In addition, the guardian spirit in the body should be able to see every move of the pig's feet, so why don't you pay more attention when making sand sculptures? According to the routine, the pig's feet should have been recognized by the guardian spirit in the end, but! ! ! Is it too fake? Also, could the author please consider the background setting of that world when thinking about cool operations? For example, you need to use Naruto's Earth Reincarnation plus the Resurrection Pill to resurrect Tony's parents. So let's not talk about the issue of using the Resurrection Pill for the sacrificed person, first of all, will Death, one of the five supreme gods in Marvel, agree? Finally, why don't the author try to lick a woman first in reality? I think except for the weird ones, 99% of women will immediately become farther and farther away from you.

It's a little white article, it's not very clear, I can't read it with my brain, it's a little bit poisonous. Above, the appraisal is completed.

Peter Pan? ? I came up with such a crude and childish name. No wonder no one looked at it. Even a 17-year-old like me felt embarrassed, let alone those older than me.

Every chat group novel is full of shit. I'm speechless after reading it.

The author is big I have a small suggestion In fact, you don't have to mess up the ending Change the outline a little Turn them directly into villains Beat them to death Torture them repeatedly Then just flatten them Come to think of it, I still have some expectations (just a suggestion) 😰

I haven't tried pushing this book until now. The baby is feeling bitter, but he doesn't dare to say it! Woo woo woo...

Are these silly sentence-style book titles popular now?

This is too self-indulgent, it's very toxic, but it's okay to pass the time.

Looking at the introduction, the protagonist is a senior in high school! Run quickly,

I support you, at least you finished this book instead of just ending it. I started following it when you just released the 10th-20th chapter, and I was a little reluctant to let it go. After all, the end point is equal to the starting point. You should write your next book well, and then during this period of rest, you can improve the text and typos. Come on, see you soon.

The author is not suitable for writing about chat groups. I suggest the author to read about Zhutian Spoiler Group. It is really pretentious and has the ability to deceive.

Yuki Asuna is so disgusting. What's the use of joining the group?

Well, sorry, I sent the wrong number, it was WeChat ID.