This Assassin Is a Bit Average

Awesome, a girl who has traveled through two worlds and given away two worlds. The main character is very crazy. I regretted clicking in.

It's not bad, but the words and deeds of the protagonist are a bit inconsistent with grandpa (although I know that the protagonist is also a dead nerd, but becoming a sub-server (similar to a heroic spirit) shouldn't be affected by the personality of the original heroic spirit) Grandpa should be very sensible, no matter what he does, he has his own meaning (guiding others/ Warning), you can see how much the protagonist is, so when can the protagonist experience the memory of King Hassan in a dream, and become the real Hassan (the 19th generation Hassan, possessing all the Noble Phantasms of Hassan in the previous 18 generations)? I hope you will adopt it. Also, your word count is really too few. It is really troublesome to read for 10 minutes.

Now Wang Ha is so crazy! ! ! ! ! ! ! I want to read this novel to maintain my Wang Ha coolness. Do you dare to be more awkward? The book is pretty good, but the description...

There is a saying that the writing is really bad, but the author is strong if he can persevere.

The author confused the second grade with Sha Diao

I originally watched Wang Hassan come in, but I really couldn't stand the first chapter. I felt that the protagonist was not as good as the mentally retarded villain in ordinary online novels. Children of 11 or 12 years old were more stable than the protagonist. What a good subject! What a pity😅

There were hundreds of chapter reviews in the first few chapters, but then there were only a few. The writing was uncontrollable and the dialogue was a bit awkward. The protagonist is also a bit neurotic, which sounds out of character at best, but is psychotic at worst. Chapter 25: Big Shit. Uncle? Isn't the protagonist a high school student? How young does he look? Reading this book is like eating fast food. I forget it after reading it. I subconsciously don't want to remember the plot.

After reading more than 30 chapters, there is nothing too toxic. The plot is awkward, the dialogue is awkward, and the protagonist's character is neurotic.

On the first day of school, in front of the whole class of new classmates and new teachers, I read Payne's classic "Carrying Rice" aloud (there was no sense of violation in changing the protagonist to Payne and the classmates to Konoha), and then added the sentence "Mortal Wisdom". Is this the second grade? No, this is SB. The next day there will be news in the school that "there is an extremely mentally retarded nerd in class so-and-so." Takagi-san's first reaction was [teasing]? No, it should be [stay away], stay away from a psychopath. Isn't it too insulting to Takagi's intelligence? An old author who has written more than 300 chapters has only received more than 50 discussion posts, more than 2,000 recommendation votes, September votes, and 16 rewards. What problem should I not think about carefully? The previous book also had the same problem. The protagonist did not look like an adult who had traveled through time, but a 7 or 8-year-old mentally retarded and mentally ill child. The kind that makes you hate it when you see it. It is recommended that the author commit suicide, stop insulting Takagi's IQ, and stop forcibly lowering Wang Hassan's style. What is the difference between you and those artists who draw popular two-dimensional female characters in NTR books and evil novels?     ，， Forcibly playing Takagi and Hassan as the protagonists, you really deserve it. Get it from the palace quickly. It still occupies the starting point of recommendation, which irritates my eyes.

Author, you have already written two books, and your writing style is still so inconsistent. Although there is nothing wrong with your writing, the protagonists you write are all so sketchy and completely unlikable. Are you really not considering changing it? If this continues, except for some people, most people will really not be able to stand your book! ! Are you still a child? The protagonist's views and behavior are really immature, and old readers can't accept it.

This is too novice! The plot is rushed and the description is not good enough. I think the protagonist should not reveal too much, like he is a time traveler, he is a pseudo-server, etc. It would be too brainless and unlovable to expose his weaknesses just because he is King Hassan, and the artificial story is too smooth sailing. Please add other friends. I hope the author Ji can take the suggestions I gave and write better. By the way, the setting is good, and the details of important characters are well portrayed. Thank you for your appreciation

To be honest. This conversation is a bit awkward

After reading more than a dozen chapters, the dialogue is a bit awkward. The protagonist's personality is out of touch and can easily cause drama. Unfortunately, there are too few books of this type. Personally, I feel that the two weapons are not very good. After all, the Thousand Blades are a bit weak. Maybe the Thousand Blades can be fused with the Death Gao. For example, the Death Gao can turn into feathers after fused with the Thousand Blades. You can watch the scene of FGO Hassan's ultimate move with countless feathers flying away.

Come on, Uemoto just wanted to raise it, but as he kept raising it, it disappeared 😭

I originally came here for Wang Ha, but... This protagonist... 😅 I barely insisted on reading Chapter 45, and I really couldn't bear it anymore. Let's not talk about the author's writing skills, but let's talk about the heroic spirit in it. It feels like he is wearing the skin of the original character, but in fact he is another person.

Wang Ha: Author, hand over your head

I can't stand it anymore after seeing this, so I say goodbye!

After reading it for a long time, I realized that there was no reasonable order at all. After reading more than ten chapters, I really couldn't stand it anymore.

Cut in half? I also want to fatten them and then slaughter them.

To be honest, this dialogue is really awkward. The dialogue in the author's previous novel was particularly awkward. Can't it be changed?

Overall, this book is okay. It's a way to pass the time and brainwash you.

I suspect that the protagonist's IQ is infinitely close to that of Satania in Angel, which seriously discredits the IQ of otakus.

This corps system makes me very uncomfortable. I don't know what will happen if the system confronts me later. If I see one destroyed and one arrives, I can still continue to look at it.

Alas, I knew something like this would happen. His chat in this novel was so out of tune. If it weren't for the plot of the previous game, this chat would kill people.

To be honest, it's okay

Works that obviously have a nerdy odor