The Ferry Keeper of Konoha

Well! The first 20 chapters are obviously very well written, but why...

I feel like I can still invest in it. I'm already going through the process, and it's stable!

Don't be emotional at the beginning, but you won't be able to do it later.

I regretted investing in it. The style was very stable at the beginning, and the image and character of the protagonist were unique in fan fiction. However, it suddenly fell apart at the end, the style of painting suddenly changed, and the imagination was too fast, and the gains outweighed the losses. What a pity.

The subsequent plot really doesn't fit the description of the protagonist at the beginning. At first, I probably wanted to set the protagonist up to be a ruthless person who doesn't say much, but later turns into a funny person who doesn't say anything ruthless. Moreover, the protagonists in these latest chapters are so scared after seeing nuclear bombs. . Aren't you afraid of death? . . The comment section is also very annoying. There is a troll who keeps posting comments in it.

I really like the protagonist who keeps being a coffin and slowly improves his abilities. When the protagonist participates in the plot after World War III, it always feels too abrupt. Wouldn't it be good to lurk and quietly strengthen himself? Why jump out and change?

What you wrote was pretty good at first, but then you let yourself go? I thought Pig Knot was a rather sinister person, but it turned out to be funny later? 😆😆

Don't be a eunuch, it's quite pretty.

He died from the poison and took his leave. I couldn't help it when I saw him confessing to Minato and Jiraiya that he could kill people and extract abilities. Is this how the time traveler plays?

The introduction can be more concise. Thousands of people pass by in front of the store, I hope you don't get started. A coffin shop, how many people were sent away. Two words are missing, but it feels more powerful.