
Wasteland Storm
废土风暴
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- Completed
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- 1.0M Words
- Genre
- Sci-Fi
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Apocalypse
- Updated
- 6y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Everything else is okay, except that the protagonist in the author's novel is mentally ill and always puts himself in danger. As the supreme commander, walking around with more than a dozen people, isn't this crazy?
From the past two years to now, I have made up my mind to read this book many times, but I really can't stand it. First of all, the background setting of this book is still great, very powerful, but there is one thing. The protagonist, as the supreme commander, self-proclaimed general, and the head of the Umbrella Company area, personally investigates every time. If the red police crush the opponent with a cool literary routine, then there is no problem at all, but this book is obviously about development farming, and there are powerful opponents behind it. So as an ordinary person, how can the protagonist have such courage? Also, the author has very little military knowledge. After unlocking the flying units, they are actually afraid of the opponent's land units, just like those with guns are afraid of those with knives. As a military researcher, this is the most unacceptable to me. If a crisis is to be written from the beginning, then the foreshadowing must be done from the beginning. The protagonist is not a scout. Wouldn't it be good to let Lin get the information? As a local, it makes sense to get some information, so why should the protagonist go? It can only be said that the protagonist is both a brainless fool and a timid person. This can explain why he dared to lead more than a dozen people on a reconnaissance, but gave up when he discovered that there were heavy weapons on the opposite side. Such an obviously anti-intellectual plot and operation, at the moment, I can't stand it anymore. I'll detoxify it, and then I'll see if I can continue reading.
First of all, I would like to say that there are too few people writing red alerts now, and even fewer that can be read. A few questions First of all, the protagonist is not the commander at all. The characteristic of Red Alert is that the commander has to stay behind! The protagonist has gone into battle many times in person without knowing anything about the wasteland world. It's like he has acquired peerless martial arts and is bound to be invincible, but he hasn't yet mastered it and gone out to show off. The second thing is that the red police can't explode the troops but they still need the indigenous soldiers? Accepting indigenous soldiers in the base is a poisonous point for me personally. The core of Red Alert is explosive troops and loyalty. I personally cannot accept the acceptance of indigenous soldiers. Finally, tonight's Red Alert 2 Ice King match, are there any book friends who are paying attention? Moon 3 finally stopped playing. 08 Has hope of winning the championship, but 08 feels that it cannot beat 829 and has to maintain its second place in the millennium
The writing is really good. Think clearly.
The doubts raised in the book review section are mainly about combat effectiveness. First of all, the combat effectiveness under different versions and different mods is different, so it is recommended to play freely. My opinion is that individual strength is far less powerful than you fear, and collective strength has no obvious shortcomings in combat effectiveness, so there is no need to worry about the collapse of combat effectiveness. Secondly, due to the gameplay requirements, the game has set the range and health value. There is no need to reduce these. It just needs to be based on normal people's understanding of modern weapons. Then, the book review mentioned Yuriko. I think she has the ability to destroy modern aircraft carriers. In the story mode, she has skills such as telekinesis, mind control, reflective shields, psychic screams, etc. That is to say, if she can reach the vicinity of the aircraft carrier's guard radius of dozens of kilometers (which is difficult enough), it will be very easy to disable it without sinking it or throwing it into the sky.
When I see that the protagonist has to do everything personally, I know that the protagonist is a sb.
The author is really speechless about the restrictions everywhere in the police system! Also, as a commander, the protagonist should receive training in tactical command and strategy. Instead of giving the protagonist a gun to train the protagonist how to fight alone! Although this can cultivate some willpower, there is always an unpleasant feeling of hitting mosquitoes with a cannon and being wrong! And the behavior of the protagonist (author) is problematic! In a world of chaos and powerful beings, Yuriko is invincible! It just depends on the author to create a protagonist halo! The most vicious thing about the power flow and hegemony story is that the leader of the power commits various dangers, especially when he still has the advantage! The protagonist is Red, a police commander. If all Red dies, the police will be gone! Every time I see the protagonist taking various risks. It's so disgusting! ! ! Either you write a new wasteland exploration series, or since it is set to be red, police hegemony series should not keep writing behaviors that are not in line with the master of power! Is the protagonist's subordinates dead and he is the only one left? And Hong, the police text is always restricted to read, which makes me really speechless! ! ! It can't be written in a novice way without thinking, but it still needs to be reasonable and appropriate! I haven't found this author's book to be any more enjoyable, but where is the excitement! ! ! After such a long time, I picked it up and looked at it, and found that the bird was still written on the back, so! Even if the writing style hasn't improved, let's just arrange some reasonable excitement, climax, tide, etc. To attract readers, right? I hope the author can arrange more. Personally speaking, if it remains like this before it is put on the shelves, I will definitely not subscribe! So be it. You talk too much and you become annoying!
Explain the problem that arises in the text.
As the title states, let me first explain the issue of Yuriko's strength in the last two chapters. First of all, according to Yuriko's background information, "her combat power is equivalent to a company of troops." That is to say, it is no problem for one to be equal to a hundred. Secondly, Yuriko did destroy an aircraft carrier formation, but according to official information, this "aircraft carrier formation" included "at least 10 peacekeepers, 6 Javelin missileers, 4 Guardian tanks, 3 cryo-helicopters, 2 assault destroyers plus 1 aircraft carrier", and the so-called in the game information Aircraft carriers are not the same creature as what we call aircraft carriers now. In the author's opinion, aircraft carriers in reality are sea fortresses, while aircraft carriers in the world of Red Alert 3 are platforms for lifting, repairing, controlling, and manufacturing drones. Although they are a bit larger than other warships, they are obviously not as large as today's aircraft carriers. Finally, the author explains that although Yuriko is very powerful, she is obviously not a god, and the author will not write about a being that far exceeds the current military level. If Yuriko was really that powerful, Gaoyuan would no longer have to explode troops and towers, and the author wouldn't have to write so many chapters. In addition, the author further explains the problem that Javelin soldiers and double-edged helicopter gunships cannot deal with Saints tanks. The main reason is that in addition to tanks, the Saints also have armed pickup trucks equipped with rapid-fire cannons, anti-aircraft guns, and mortars. With only ten helicopters, although they can destroy several tanks or pickup trucks, they will definitely be destroyed by the anti-aircraft guns of the armed pickup trucks. The missiles of the Javelin Missile Soldiers are relatively low in power. Unless they are initiated and hit the sides with weak armor, it is difficult to destroy a tank with one shot. Moreover, the Javelin missile soldiers have to withstand the attacks of pickup trucks and numerous infantry. As long as there is a little awareness of infantry-tank cooperative operations, it is difficult for individual anti-tank missiles to be effective. The anti-tank missiles of the multi-functional infantry turret are too few in number and not too powerful, making it difficult to completely annihilate the opponent's tanks. This building will be used as a doubt-clearing building. If you have any questions, you can comment directly and the author will give a unified reply.
Nowadays, there are very few people writing red alerts, and even fewer can write well except for the gorgeous ones. Come on! Already invested, recommended and supported every day!
Long suite building
Some characters will appear in the near future, mainly grassroots officers and non-commissioned officers of the Red Police Force and Militia Force, as well as leaders and important figures of various survivor forces. You can leave a message below to sign up to be a supporting actor for this book. Note that except for Yuriko and the possible appearance of Yuri, no one else in this book has superpowers. Mutations like wild orcs don't count. Therefore, when everyone signs up to be a supporting role, do not use supernatural powers such as fire magic, ice magic, war god, sword master, etc. In addition, the more powerful characters may appear later, such as the leader of a super power, the final BOSS, etc., They will definitely appear at the end. Also, it's best to Chineseize your name. Currently, you won't encounter many foreigners on the plateau. Well, that's it.
What are you writing about? Comparing your soldiers with the soldiers in the gorgeous writing, I doubt that you are **. The regular army cannot fight even the militia so hard. The red police soldiers are more powerful than the US military. The US military can fight a Gulf campaign, and there are various classic small battles. Whatever you write, don't ask me to write the trolls. I paid to read the novel and I'm not allowed to troll, right?
Did the author make a mistake in his writing style? When reading Red Alert, you want to read the old silver coin where the protagonist controls a party. You wrote it as a passionate young man who is ready to go to the battlefield. The key is that the writing is not passionate...
This book is too toxic to read. Please delete it as soon as possible. It is really difficult for an author who has never played Red Alert to write this.
I only lasted a dozen chapters before I gave up. I don't understand. I didn't build a sentry tower in the early stage to guard the route of resource points. More than 100 people stayed at the base all day long to eat, drink and have fun. If you don't conduct reconnaissance before attacking, you will just go out with all A in F2, and no one will be left at the base 👍
I'm really convinced by the author, what kind of plot is this? A commander is either attacked or on the way to be attacked. The base defense is like nothing. He infiltrates when he is told to infiltrate. He is surrounded by assassins. Moreover, the emotional plot is simply a piece of shit. A random woman will die instantly. It is so simple. Can you write it to persuade him to quit? Have you made enough money?
In a world like the wasteland, when the protagonist has a golden finger like Red and Police, if the protagonist is not a dictator, he can play in an alliance and argue all day long! What a huge poison! ! ! In the protagonist's situation, only dictatorship can bring out the greatest advantage! If you are afraid that your command will make mistakes, form a think tank (composed of talents from various fields)! There is also something wrong with the behavior of the protagonist (the author)! In a world of chaos and powerful beings, Yuriko is invincible! It just depends on the author to create a protagonist halo! The most vicious thing about the power flow and hegemony story is that the leader of the power commits various dangers, especially when he still has the advantage! If it were at a disadvantage, it would be okay! It's really………the more I look at it, the more I get angry! *!
I have never understood why people who write Red Alert always restrict this and that... Soldiers cannot be violent, and then see the protagonist being restricted in various ways. The protagonist is just an ordinary person, without violent soldiers, playing with all kinds of ruthless characters with his IQ?
I'm not saying that the author is bad, this novel is really a little bit weird. I suggest the author change the previous paragraph. I, the great Shennong, never thought that I would die in your hands today.
Author saves Tokyo? ? ? What should I send to the author?
I don't want to say anything else, but I'm convinced by the protagonist's trick of sending himself to death. Is this a Red Alert type system or a Super Special Forces type system? Go to the front line all day long when you have nothing to do. You are the commander! You are the brains of an army! Play that?
Not good-looking, all kinds of operations without military common sense, all kinds of shows that insult the red alert
A nuclear bomb cannot explode in advance if it is intercepted. The nuclear bomb explosion is adjusted to detonate by itself and cannot be detonated by external factors.
It is extremely poisonous. He is a military illiteracy and he still writes a military novel The setting is unreasonable, the chapters are not connected at all, and the battles are just brushed off without knowing how to write. The writing style is extremely poor, visually speaking, it does not exceed the literary literacy of junior high school students, and there is basically no characterization. It is rubbish among rubbish.
I really doubt that there is more than one author. There are often incoherences between chapters, and a paragraph goes by like a wild horse. I don't even know how it developed like this! Moreover, the personalities of the characters in the book have changed a lot, even the protagonist. I just mentioned before that he would hide in the base to develop. After two chapters, he went out with a few soldiers and Yuriko didn't follow him. Do you want to commit suicide? It was obviously written by several people separately, and each wrote his own thing without any communication!
After reading a little bit, I really can't bear it. You, a commander, go out to wander around every day. What the hell are you doing? If there was a reason to go out, it would be okay. After the special cat fight, the director of the shelter showed up, and you also wanted to fly out to talk? He also wandered around other people's bases. There is basically no description of the environment, the characters are basically 0, and the battle scenes make me laugh.
Believe me, the back part is so poisonous that it makes me sick 🥵🥵
Yuriko and her good friends (Tanya and Natasha)
If this book was written ten years ago, I wouldn't say anything! But your writing last year was a mess! It's not as well written as Red Alert Somalia, which I watched a few years ago!
I unexpectedly saw this novel again on Daily Guide. It's been a long time since the miracle was finished. Besides, this novel is poisonous.
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