Open a Small Account in the Wild

The introduction is brilliantly written. The writing power was weak in the first chapter, but started to get better later on. The writing is very vivid, but it still feels messy and scattered. The writing is quite good but not organized. I feel like I need to think more carefully about the work. Plus the story is better mastered than the characters.

It would be better to abandon the tuba and focus on the trumpet, otherwise the reading will be a bit scattered. I just felt the atmosphere of the ancient times from the trumpet, and suddenly I was in the modern steel city. The feeling became too fast. Can't convert. Maybe focusing on the trumpet is the next perfect world. In this way, two lines are interspersed in parallel. Don't merge the last two lines asymmetry. Then it will be written as four different. You must know that most of the books about gods focus on one line, or write the other line as a hidden auxiliary line. There is always a main line. I think we should let the two bodies fuse so that the disease will be cured, and then go back to ancient times and become a saint. Then kill from ancient times to modern times.

Sometimes I read in a hurry and there may be typos. Post a post and correct them in time. In order not to affect everyone's reading, you can leave a reminder below and I will correct them as soon as possible.

Why no more updates? Has the author abandoned the book?

It's 10 chapters, but I just don't understand what you're writing.

Come on↖(^ω^)↗Look after you

After reading the first chapter, the introduction that the spiritual energy tide affects the use of gunpowder weapons seems a bit far-fetched.

It feels a bit messy! Put it this way! Remove the large chapter in front! Time travel identity removed! The protagonist's identity is that of the sealed Ninth Ancestor, who was born early due to a plan. I think this is a good subject. Personal feeling! Don't spray if you don't like it

Already collected 😁Please keep working hard

Isn't the protagonist's name a bit complicated? .

Borrowing a building, brother Kunpeng from the prehistoric times pushed the book.

This is another story about spiritual energy reviving, animals becoming spirits, and humans facing extinction. I just want to ask the author. Why doesn't Halong still live with snakes? If animals become spirits, everyone will be united? The history of human development is a history of human wars. Even if they are the same race, let alone animals, let alone have different feathers and so on! Habits can become natural, not to mention instinct?

Many books are good, but they lack recommendation votes and have no popularity.