Ask About the Scenery of the Rest of My Life

Hello, author, I have been inspired by your work so far. The biggest problem in this book is not the number of words or plot, but the details, including the details of character description and environment description. This is mainly reflected in the fact that there is a lot of dialogue content, but the actions and tone of the characters when they speak are not fully displayed. It is recommended that you try to capture the perspectives of other people around you when writing their dialogues! Although there is a lot of dialogue, the good thing is that this work is very suitable for writing a dialogue novel! For those who are just starting out, you can actually work harder to write better! Don't lower your requirements for yourself! Come on! 😁

{"NickName":"Is Mumo better today?","UserId":330862996} Hello author, I felt inspired after reading your article. Personally, I think the current problem with this book is that the content is not detailed enough. Mainly reflected in the fact that there is too much dialogue content (this was also the case when I first entered the pit and then I was told to write a script emmm) But the detailed movements of the characters when speaking and the perspectives of other people are not fully reflected, which leads to sometimes not knowing who said the part of the dialogue! (At least that's how I feel 😂) Finally, I hope that the author will not lower his writing requirements just because he is a newcomer! This is not your ability!

I may only be online for one or two days a day in the future, so I won't be able to vote for you often. I'm sorry.

Wow, the number of recommended votes exceeded 200 all of a sudden.

Well, you didn't add which chapter at the beginning. If there are more chapters in the future, it will be easy for readers to not know where they have read.

Well, generally speaking, there should be no big problem, but you can mark the chapter in front of the title, like - Chapter 1: Rebirth. My suggestions can be chosen appropriately. In other words, I can't make any suggestions for the time being. After all, I am not a big boss 😂.

Well, it seems like you gave me your recommendation vote again today, isn't it for ink? 😂😂

I hope someone will read and comment. I will reply to all your comments one by one (maybe there will be no comments), but I will insist on writing this book✌

Emmm, why did I get so many recommendation votes all of a sudden 😂😂

Most of them are written by boys, so every day the female recommendation votes are wasted, which feels a bit pity, hmm, but now I have it, hahahaha, I will read more of your books when I have time. 🙂