The Interstellar Boss Became Famous in the Wilderness Survival Variety Show

For a heroine with such a brain to be a major general is simply an insult to the title of major general. Her strength is sometimes strong and sometimes weak.

Let's change the introduction. People who care for the elderly will not have such an attitude as the protagonist. It feels too pretentious.

Don't write a story about a tyrant in the name of a heroine... Or an interstellar major general? Not defensive at all? Do you believe everything a little girl you don't know says? What is the difference between such a heroine and Silly Baitian? Has the author changed? Still……

Ba Zongwen with a new shell... The real plot: The cold-faced princess of the underworld master 😅 The author should be still young?? Study hard, and it will be much better to write novels in the future There are a lot of bad sentences, the names of the female protagonist and supporting characters are all ABB, which is very boring, and even the heroine's name is not pleasant Furthermore, the logic of many plots is not self-consistent. After all, the male protagonist of Ba Zongwen is the best in the world and does not need logic

Improper collocation, misuse of words, typos, especially many people's names were spelled incorrectly.

It's the boss again. Recently, the word boss appears too frequently, giving people a very mediocre and old-fashioned feeling. To be honest, I just glanced at the title of the book. The four words "Wild Survival" attracted me to click in. Finally, I read the entire title. The word "Big Brother" made me not want to read it for a moment.

An interstellar boss, has his IQ and ability declined in modern times? I want to read it as a cool article to relieve my fatigue, but it's a waste of time.

The content of this article has nothing to do with Star Wars or the Army Major General!

Yaya's emotional tonality is written very carefully (very rich meaning), but the heroine's emotional style is not written in detail at all (I can barely see it), which makes me more and more angry as I watch it (I have a strong sense of empathy).

From the beginning of this novel, I only remembered Mu Ya Ya, and the heroine and hero had no bright spots either.

Follow up

After catching up on the update, I found a master who wrote very well.

Come on, I support you! ! Please update!

Good. This setting is great. There should be no flaws in the plot. Our male protagonist is in this state and his background is not convincing, so that's not okay. .