Godlike Swordsman

Nowadays, this kind of book with a protagonist who is not happy and forward-thinking and timid will never become popular. If you go away or an author of this type, then Li Xiaotian and Gu Xinghan would have been buried in grass three feet high. It is most unbelievable that a few villains and small characters in the early stages have survived for several chapters. If you don't understand the psychology of today's readers, you are destined to not get good results.

I came in after seeing the advertisement, and the introduction was very interesting. Keep it first!

The writing is quite good, but this woman makes people uncomfortable and poisonous.

The family named Xu at the beginning didn't have the ability, so forget it. If I had the ability, I would definitely destroy the whole family. Use others as a scapegoat. Whatever his reasons. All deserve to die. Especially if it happens to yourself.

After reading the latest chapter, I think the author should not use old routines. Now the old routines have become a blockage. Nowadays, everyone likes Invincible. The protagonist is wandering around and being beaten because he has no ability. It will make everyone feel unhappy. Deliberately creating difficulties is a poisonous point. Readers have a God's perspective. People who really read the book will not say that they will quit directly. But overall, the writing is not bad and it is a source of food. But it would be great to improve it.

It is recommended not to write about harem stallions. If you don't grasp the emotional line well, please don't write. Otherwise, your whole book will be ruined because of this poisonous point. You can revise now, or you can slowly reduce the presence of women when writing later. No CP is popular nowadays. , Many classic books have no CP, It's not that others don't write, but that writing will ruin the book Here are my suggestions, I hope you can adopt them, never write about a stallion harem, otherwise it will really ruin the book. If you are not sure, don't lick women! I hope the big book will get better. Let's keep it first and slaughter it when it gets fatter. After all, I can't get enough of it.

This Baihua Palace is not just a place to raise chickens.

I can't stand it anymore. Why are you taking this girl with you? Can't you make your own way in the world?

What does Xu Binglu do? So annoying

After repelling the siege, you are healed, but you are not going to take revenge? Every family came to kill them.

Don't read it anymore, abandoned the book, the protagonist is too stupid and too arrogant

It's okay, the key is to finish the book, author, come on!

You, the author, have been single for ten thousand years. I've never seen a woman before.

The author is like a god. In the first chapter, the cowardly male protagonist is stupid (this is the tone of asking for help), but he persuades her to quit in the first chapter...

I would like to ask, the swordsmanship in the introduction is not high, not fast, not flashy. Is this the view in the eyes of a peerless master, or the view in the eyes of an ordinary master?

It's very well written and has potential for TV drama. Come on, author, keep up the good work. It's better to have fewer updates than to fill it with water!

Seriously, it's time for the successor of the Sword Saint to appear, it's been so long

. . . Is that person called Guilin Book Club stupid? This book has been written a long time ago. Are you a black man of any use?

Only the protagonist has spiritual consciousness, but it has no lethality. . . . . ! ! ! ! ! ! !

I've seen a few pictures and I just can't stand them anymore.

Chapter 1: Strength persuades people to quit, no one will really read this kind of novel, no, no, no, no

Is the protagonist transported to a world of idiots? He can't survive three chapters.

The introductions are self-contradictory. If the speed is not fast, how come the last one arrives first? ? ?

Come and sign in, keep up the good work

Well written, 😰 rarely likes a book

The protagonist with this kind of personality should be too much to eat now.

What are the basic requirements for last-come-first-come? When someone stabs you with a sword, you see the flaw and kill the enemy with your sword. This means that your shooting speed must be at least much faster than others!