Return to the Path of Cultivating Immortality

I watched it for about ten minutes because I wasn't very interested, but since I watched it I wanted to see something. Say briefly. ①The subject matter is average. Nowadays, there are many websites full of articles about cultivating immortality. If it is not written exceptionally brilliantly, it really has no chance of getting ahead. ② There are few typos. I saw the author's comment that he would go back and check every time. This is a good habit and I hope to continue to keep it. ③Although the description is general at the beginning, it shows a certain degree of novelty. The plot is connected naturally, the sense of scene is good, and the logic is good. This is the advantage of your book. ④The writing style is really not that good, but as a new author, he is obviously qualified. The writing style is a bit immature, and some parts of the text are a bit stiff, but the dialogue between the characters is more natural. No way, I hope the author will keep writing. Writing skills are developed through practice. I have always believed in this. After all, we rarely become gods with one article. ⑤ You have done a good job in character creation, but it is only good. It has not yet reached the level of distinctive personality of the characters. Keep up the good work. Personal opinion, for reference only.

I think it's okay. I hope the author writes more about daily life, so that the character's personality can be highlighted and the rhythm can be adjusted. This book suits my taste and the recommendation vote has been voted

The plot develops compactly, making the readers involuntarily involved in the text, as if they are personally there, and the various descriptions are rich. It is a book worth pursuing. But this may be my first time writing a book, so my writing style is a bit stiff, but good writing skills are developed slowly. I wish you a smooth writing journey, getting better and better, and bringing richer plots to readers Xiaoxian will pay attention to you silently~ Come on!

Naming a building, I have a lot of thoughts about names. Dear friends, please help me come up with some nice and easy-to-remember names.

This is my first time writing an article, so there are many shortcomings. I hope everyone can help me correct it. I also hope you can bear with me. Your love is my motivation for coding. If you have any comments about the book, you can tell me, thank you all.

(๑‾ ꇴ ‾๑) Come on!

Updates are irregular and there is no way to support it 🙂

Suddenly, I recommended you a thousand times as soon as I saw you, come on^^~

I like Dada's novels very much. There are many places in them that I can learn from. You are also welcome to pay attention to my work "The Spiritual Master Volume". Let's work hard together.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Chapter 3, you can imagine it yourself.